TC-22 "Eruption" Grenade

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Affiliation:
Unique
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Ownership:
Jalen Kron
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Model:
TC-22 "Eruption"
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Type:
Smoke/Timed Grenade
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Size:
6 cm (Whole) 3 cm (Half)
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Composition:
Aluminum-Iron Alloy, Various Chemicals
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Explosion Radius:
5 meters (Explosive, Whole), 4 meters (Smoke, Whole), 2.5 meters (Explosive, Half), 2 meters (Smoke, Half)
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TC-22 "Eruption" Grenade


Description:

The TC-22 "Eruption" grenade was created by the Jedi Knight Jalen Kron as a dual-purpose grenade. It can be set to either an 8 second explosive detonation time or can function as a smoke grenade (activated upon impact, or 3 second timer if rolled instead of thrown). The grenade also has the option to be split in half prior to detonation, and can be utilized as two smaller grenades (these can be set as either and explosive or smoke grenade separately), although when separated the have a decreased radius and explosion power/smoke generation. For example, if a whole TC-22 has the explosive power of a thermal detonator, a half has half the explosive power of a thermal detonator. This function is designed for situations that call for less explosive power, or crowd control with smoke.


Intent: The TC-22 "Eruption" grenade is designed to be a multi purpose grenade for PCs affiliated with the Jedi and/or Jalen Kron who want 1 grenade that can deal with many different situations, rather than carrying around separate thermal detonators, smoke grenades, concussion grenades, etc. The dual ability to function as either a smoke bomb or thermal detonator type grenade gives users a way to adapt to an opponent and gain an advantage, while the the separation function is meant to create a smaller explosion that could function similarly to a concussion grenade, or to surprise an enemy should they dodge on of the two grenades. Overall, this grenade is meant to be an all-purpose grenade and also function as a less generic thermal detonator and smoke grenade (in one!).


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Nice to see you in the tech boards.

The tech peeps are wanting everyone to use the full template for everything. Which includes the code in the spoiler tags here. You should be able to C+P the information into the fields and then it should be compliant.
 

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Ok, I believe I fixed it. If not, it's because I suck at using code.
 

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Alright, that's better! You able to move the code to the original post?

I can make the image more compact if you want too
 

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Alright, that's better! You able to move the code to the original post?

I can make the image more compact if you want too
Moved it, that post was a trial to see if it worked. The image is good for now, thanks though.
 

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You seem to still be running into some sort of coding error, want me to take a look at it and see what I can do?

EDIT: Also, that image is kriffing huge. Why not crop out some of the negative space rather than just making it smaller? That way the image is smaller but you don't have to sacrifice the pixel quality of the actual grenades?​
 

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Alright. So there's a slight coding error with the some of the big orange title floating to the right vertically, Undine as offered her help with the coding, so yeah :D

But the Intent seems to be copied from the Description field. The intent section is supposed to be an explanation of why this tech is needed on a OOC basis. Like what it offers to the RP and such. It's most likely an accident that it got copied there. So yeah. If you want to go through the approved boards and see what a solid intent looks like, that might help.

Also I think 'Jedi' should be removed from the Affiliation and Ownership fields. So it's not seen as main faction tech. (which goes through it's own process). If you do that, it can be personal tech that you could share with whoever. Which isn't a bad thing.

As for mechanics of the grenades, i'm not so good with the technical inner-workings but yeah. Looks good from my POV.
 

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You seem to still be running into some sort of coding error, want me to take a look at it and see what I can do?

EDIT: Also, that image is kriffing huge. Why not crop out some of the negative space rather than just making it smaller? That way the image is smaller but you don't have to sacrifice the pixel quality of the actual grenades?​
What are the code issues? I can't see anything wrong with it. As for the picture, I have no clue how to crop it, I simply copied an pasted the image link. I do this from a tablet, not a computer if that changes anything.
 

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Affiliation puts it with the jedi... and ownership is "Jedi and allies".

If it's faction tech it has to be submitted through the proper channels by Jedi leadership rather than being submitted by you directly.
 

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Alright. So there's a slight coding error with the some of the big orange title floating to the right vertically, Undine as offered her help with the coding, so yeah :D

But the Intent seems to be copied from the Description field. The intent section is supposed to be an explanation of why this tech is needed on a OOC basis. Like what it offers to the RP and such. It's most likely an accident that it got copied there. So yeah. If you want to go through the approved boards and see what a solid intent looks like, that might help.

Also I think 'Jedi' should be removed from the Affiliation and Ownership fields. So it's not seen as main faction tech. (which goes through it's own process).
Damn!!! I was so close! Now I have to somehow rewrite something I forgot all about. Stupid clipboard
 

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Also I think 'Jedi' should be removed from the Affiliation and Ownership fields. So it's not seen as main faction tech. (which goes through it's own process).

To expand on this, you can have a technology be freely available within Jedi space. This means anyone outside Jedi space would need to have an IC reason or excuse for having it while not making it specifically faction tech.​
 

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Here is a cropped version of the image. It's still a bit large to be honest but you'll be fine.​
 

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May want to make the font of the title smaller, it might be the issue just with how long the name of the weapon is. I usually put my titles at about 35 so there's no spacing issues in the post formatting
 

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Ok everyone, I think formatting and replacing wrongly pasted text is finished now. Anybody got suggestions for improvements for the actual grenade function?
 

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Ok everyone, I think formatting and replacing wrongly pasted text is finished now. Anybody got suggestions for improvements for the actual grenade function?

Can there be a variant where rather than an explosion the option is either a smokescreen or an acidic aerosol? Imagine dropping that bad boy into the escape hatch of an Imperial ground transport.

And no, not like pepperspray. Like sulfuric acid.​
 
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Ok everyone, I think formatting and replacing wrongly pasted text is finished now. Anybody got suggestions for improvements for the actual grenade function?
Can there be a variant where rather than an explosion the option is either a smokescreen or an acidic aerosol? Imagine dropping that bad boy into the escape hatch of an Imperial ground transport.​
Lol. Would a smokescreen be different from the normal smoke grenade option? As for an acidic aerosol, or even a toxic gas variant if @Clayton is ok with that I would gladly add that option. I decided to start off more basic so that I can add balanced things people suggest instead of having to get rid of OP things I originally had in there.
 

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Smokescreen refers to what happens when a smoke grenade goes off. The term "smokescreen" is the "fire in the hole" of smoke grenades.​
 

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Smokescreen refers to what happens when a smoke grenade goes off. The term "smokescreen" is the "fire in the hole" of smoke grenades.​
Thanks for that clarification. But if that's the case, why would you want a seperate variant for that when the TC-23 already offers that function?
 
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