The Black Hag (Luna DeCobry)

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The Black Hag

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NAME:
Luna DeCobry / The Black Hag
FACTION: Sith Order
RANK: Sith Acolyte
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 86.
GENDER:
Female
HEIGHT: 1.7m
WEIGHT: 50kg
EYES: Her right eye is a constant shade of midnight black, while her left eye is red due to a cybernetic implant.
HAIR: The Black Hag has no hair.
SKIN: Her skin is a shade of ashen grey, results of extreme experimention with the Dark Side of the Force.
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Her right arm is missing, her left arm is covered in archaic tattoos, and her left eye is completely black.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes.

STRENGTH: As a result of numerous trials by the Sith, The Black Hag has little strength left in her body. She uses the Force to stay upright most of the time.
DEXTERITY: While not particularly agile, the Hag can call upon the Force to enhance her speed and agility in combat.
CONSTITUTION: Very frail and weak, she must return to her personal chambers once a week to rest in her life support pod.
INTELLIGENCE: The Hag has extreme intelligence, having spent the last 40 years of her life in the Sith Temple. As far as street smarts go, she is above capable of defending herself in shady environments.
WISDOM: She is particularly wise, and yet still wishes to learn all she can from the other Sith in the Order.
CHARISMA: The Black Hag, while unnerving to be around, can use her wits, and the Force of course, to charm others into doing her bidding.

PERSONALITY:
Born in the lowest depths of Coruscant, Luna DeCobry, known to others as The Black Hag, is a mysterious being who usually keeps to herself. That does not mean she does not enjoy the company of her Sith sisters and brothers, but that she would rather spend her time further gaining knowledge of the Dark Side.

The Black Hag has a rather annoying habit of talking in riddles, never fully revealing her intentions. Luna knows that while the Sith are united against the Jedi, the Sith are still indeed Sith, and will not hesitate to remove her if they see fit.

Due to her being older than most other Humans in the Order, the Hag usually calls everyone child or children, believing that most of the Sith sqaubble amongst themselves like petty children. While she does not admire the Jedi Order, she does respect their resolve and ability to always overcome obstacles, even the Imperium. That does not mean she won't kill a Jedi at a moments notice. The Hag believes that her name is a something that should be known by only a few. Her name represents her past life, when she was weak and relied on others to protect her, yet they were the very peoole who turned her into what she is today. As a result, when she does say her real name, she speaks as if it is another person. Those who mention Luna DeCobry without her consent risk the wrath of The Black Hag.

BIOGRAPHY:
Born in the year 936 ABY, Luna DeCobry was orphaned at an early age. Her parents, late night entertainers, did not having enough credits to pay for themselves and her, and therefore left her outside the headquarters of one of the largest Underworld Coruscant gangs. Known as The Wraiths, Luna was quickly taken in by the heinous criminals and taught the ways of an outlaw.

By the time she was ten, Luna was proficient in the arts of bribery, blackmail, and even conning the con men. She was cutthroat, learning early on that down here it was killed or be killed. Four people had already died by her adolescent hands and more were sure to follow. Always doing the dirty work for the gang, Luna became known for her quick wits and no-nonsense attitude. On her twelfth birthday, Luna was part of a group sent to the surface to expand The Wraiths operations, particualry racketeering. Her "father", the Devaronian Al'Goran and leader of the gang, led the group into all sorts of trouble for the next couple of months, even attracting the attention of a Jedi Knight and his Padawan.

While checking on one of The Wraith's operations with her father, Luna and Al'Goran were ambushed by the Knight and his apprentice. After a brief scuffle, the two criminals escaped, but found themselves being chased by the two warriors. They were chased for blocks, before being cornered in a back alley. The Jedi tried to reason with the two criminals, but Al had other ideas and fired off at the Jedi with his blaster. The Jedi easily deflected them, and moved in for the killing blow until Luna stretched out her hands in a fit of rage, Force choking the Jedi. After the initial shock, the Devaronian grabbed Luna and ran away, leaving the two Jedi behind, stunned and gasping for air.

For two years, Luna and her father stayed hidden in the Underworld, afraid that the Jedi would find them and bring them to justice. Over the years, Luna used this time to practice her powers, which she would eventually learned was called the Force. While not particularly strong, she could lift small objects and push or pull them. But all this Force activity attracted the Jedi, the same two from years before. Aided by the Coruscant Security Force, they stormed the headquarters causing a small battle to ensue. After an hour or so of fighting, The Wraiths surrendered and were quickly ushered off to prison.

However, Luna and her father had escaped during the battle with the Jedi hot on their heels. Once the Jedi caught up, they attacked the Al'Goran and in the process scarring his face horribly. As the anger and fear swelled up inside her, Luna let it loose, grabbing the young padawan with the Force and violently slamming him against the wall until she heard a satisfying crack. The Jedi Knight, momentarily stunned from the loss of his apprentice and friend, was attacked from behind by her father, grabbing him in a choke hold. When the Jedi's lightsabers dropped onto the ground, Luna used the Force to activate the lightsaber, pick it up, and impale the Jedi with his very own blade. Luckily Al remained unharmed, save for the massive scar on his face.

As the years passed by, and they tried to rebuild, Al realized it was her fault that he was now nothing more than a squandering peasant. He believed none of this would have ever happened if he hadn't taken this "brat" as his daughter. He sexually assaulted the girl for five years, treating her no longer as his daughter, but some kind of twisted sex slave. She was to serve him, and the members of the newly resurrected Wraiths gang hand and foot until the day she died. But young Luna would not submit to this fate, and in the dead of night, she slaughtered the Wraiths one by one.

The looks of fear and horror on their faces before their deaths were so satisfying, but she still had Al'Goran to deal with. Finding the Jedi's lightsabers, a souvenir he had kept, Luna snuck into Al's bedroom and lifted him up with the Force. She only stared into his eyes, savoring this epic moment, before slicing him slowly on half, vertically, starting between in his legs on up.

The next 37 years of Luna's life was spent living in the shadows, murdering gang members across Coruscant's Underworld, trying her hardest to cleanse it's streets of their filth. She spent her soare time trying to hone her Force powers, yet iw was very difficult without a proper teacher to instruct her. Many were afraid of the strange woman draped in black clothing, who seemed to move faster than what was naturally possible. The Black Hag became an Underworld urban myth, something that only few had ever seen. Unfortunately, her efforts were futile, for there were far too many thugs for one person to handle. Eventually she began to voices, telling her that she was not alone. There were others like her! Later she found out the whispers originated from a place far, far away, where the land itself was determined to destroy all those who trespassed.

Korriban.

Unknowingly letting the Dark Side guide her, Luna stole a ship and traveled to the ancient home world of the Sith. It was there she discovered a small group of Sith in hiding, using thier mastery of the Force to find individuals such as herself. They taught her many things, of how the Jedi cared only for themselves and how they planned to rid the galaxy of all emotions. Tricked into believing such a story, Luna willingly submitted to their cause and underwent horrific experimentations, causing her to lose her arm, as well as leaving her body extremely weak, but her mind stronger than ever before.

When the Sith finally revealed them selves to the Republic and the Jedi, Luna was still on Korriban, preparing for the battles to come. After the brief Cold War, Luna participated in many minor battles, usually as a commander of Imperial Forces, her body too frail to lead on the front lines.

Yet, she proved she was combat capable in 1,013 ABY when the Imperium conquered Coruscant. The Black Hag was part of the forces cleansing the Underworld, finally completing her mission she began all those years ago. This would be the last time The Black Hag would participate in any major conflict for the next decade or so.

Now that the Imperium is preparing to finish their great conquest, The Black Hag will accompany the Imperial troops onto the battlefield, lending her wisdom and Force abilities whenever and wherever she can.


FORCE POWERS:

Force Jump - Allows the Hag to reach high places that are other wise inaccessible.

Force Pull/Push - By calling upon the Force, she can push or pull objects away or to her.

Force Choke - Wraps an "invisible hand" of the Force around the victims throat, cutting off air supply. Can be used on droids, but works better on organics.

Telekinesis/Telepathy - Able to move objects with the Force, as well as speak to others using only her mind.


TK Lightsaber Combat - Using the Force, The Black Hag wields three lightsabers despite having only one arm. This is her second most skilled Force Power, allowing her to wield two lightsabers at once, and sometimes three if the need arises.

SKILLS:
Underworld Knowledge - Growing up in the slums of Coruscant, Luna had to deal with some of the seediest characters in the galaxy. After 19 years of living below the glamourous towers of Upper Coruscant, the Hag has made many Underworld friends.

Multilingual - The Hag can speak, understand and learn most languages she comes across. This includes, but is not limited to Huttese, Binary, and Mando'a.

Escape Artist - Having been caught over twenty times by the various gangs of Underworld Coruscant, the Hag can always find a way out of just about any holding cell she is imprisoned in.



LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form VI - Niman, "The Way of the Rancor." Utilizes a combination of multiple lightsaber strikes and Force Powers to disorientate and kill the enemy. Designed for more than one lightsaber, such as Dual Wielded or Double Bladed.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Physically speaking, The Black Hag is extremely weak, and uses the Force to help her lift objects and even simple task, like walking. However, this does not mean she is incapable of combat, as The Hag is constantly in pain and can channel that into her combat skills of the need arises. Possibly considered a strength and a weakness, The Hag trust only a few people, learning the hard way that not every book should be judged by it's cover. Possibly her greatest strength would be her unusual compassion towards the Imperial soldiers. Luna treats them with respect, understanding that not every soldier should be considered cannon fodder. This has led to many soldiers willing to lay down their lives for her. Finally, her major weakness is combat itself. The Hag is not a combat oriented Sith, and would much rather prefer to deal damage from a distance than up close.

GEAR:
Three Red Bladed Lightsabers - The Black Hag's personal lightsabers. Two are attached to the chains wrapped around her waist and torso, while the last one is held with her right hand.

Cybernetic Eye - The Hag's cybernetic eyes glows a ruby red color, menacing in it's appearance. It comes equipped with Thermal and Night vision to aid her in her missions.

Phrik Chains - Luna's chains were created by the Sith, using Sith funds to allow her to properly combat her opponents. They are highly lightsaber resistant, so as to not allow the Jedi to cut them off.

Hag's Robes - Simple grey robes and a hood for clothing. Easy to take off and put on. Also allows her to conceal small objects.
SHIP:
The Hag does not own any personal starfighter or vessel, but instead uses the many transport shuttles provided by the Imperium.

DROIDS:
Coven - Named after the defi ition of a group of witches or bags, Coven is a GH-7 Medical Analysis Unit. He was assigned to Luna by the Sith Order when she joined, and he still retains his memory from the time of the Clone Wars. Luna decided it was best they not wipe his memory, as she did not want a droid that had no personality to help her around.

Coven comes equipped with the standard GH-7 medical equipment and information, as well as any upgrades and personal medical information The Hag has programmed him with. Coven's personality reflects his time as a medical droid, seeing thousands upon thousands of patients die during medical procedures. As a result, he is very sarcastic about life in general, believing it to be nothing more than a quick stop between "before and after".

Coven is slightly combat capable, having a built in blaster in his chest, as well as a small defense pistol hidden in a secret compartment only he and Luna are aware of.

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PETS:
No pets.


KILLS:
N/A

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
Nemeses on Nar Shadaa - The Black Hag meets Leah Valkyrius, a Jedi Padawan who is her nemesis and Light Side counterpart. (Completed)

I'm on a diplomatic mission to Malastare! - The Malastarian Council has announced they wish to join a side in the Third Galactic Civil War. The Black Hag has been sent to hinder the efforts of the Queen of Naboo, who is also attending the negotiations. (In progress)

Sith Mind Games - The Black Hag has captured the attention of Sith Crusader Virion, who is willing to teach her new powers native to the Dark Side. (In progress)
 
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Haidere!

It's a really nive char, but there are a few things to be considered. Please take a look at this:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/grand-master-novan.60520/W

- Players usually start as acolytes
- The force powers are somewhat.. unique for a starting char

I am sure this char is by no means undoable, so I suggest that @Bee as the (dun' kill me if I'm wrong) Faction leader replacemen during his absence take a look at that
 
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Haidere!

It's a really nive char, but there are a dew rhings to be considered. Please take a look at this:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/grand-master-novan.60520/W

- Players usually start as acolytes
- The force powers are somewhat.. unique for a starting char

I am sure this char is by no means undoable, so I suggest that @Bee as the (dun' kill me if I'm wrong) Faction leader replacemen during his absence take a look at that
Thanks for the help!
 

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You're very welcome and please do not change too many things until the bosses had a look at it. I personay like the idea, but as he is now, he would be in my opinion a little overpowered compared to other acolytes
 

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You're very welcome and please do not change too many things until the bosses had a look at it. I personay like the idea, but as he is now, he would be in my opinion a little overpowered compared to other acolytes
Thanks. I was hoping to apply to the Sith and give here the sorceror rank due to her age but now that I think about I guess that wouldn't be fair. Haha :oops:
 

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Btw... Remove the "WIP" tag as these are not allowed. Your char will develop over time anyways and a wip-tag would be abundant :)
 

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From what i see, i like her! Would love to encounter her in RP sometime.
 

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Feel free :) i look forward to it.
 

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She'll need to start out as an Acolyte (not a Sorcerer, which is a Crusader specialization) and have her Force abilities tuned down. Other than that, she looks really cool and I like the concept.
 

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She'll need to start out as an Acolyte (not a Sorcerer, which is a Crusader specialization) and have her Force abilities tuned down. Other than that, she looks really cool and I like the concept.
Thanks! I'll handle that right now.
 

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She'll need to start out as an Acolyte (not a Sorcerer, which is a Crusader specialization) and have her Force abilities tuned down. Other than that, she looks really cool and I like the concept.
Changed her rank and took away Force Fear and Force Whisper? Will that do or should I take away one more thing?
 

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Normally I'd ask you to remove Choke, but as long as it's fairly low level, that's fine - she's old enough to have picked up a couple of tricks. The only problem I have is with Levitation being used for flight. It's definitely possible, but it's a really advanced technique and takes a lot of concentration, per the wiki. Its a bit much, imo.
 

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Normally I'd ask you to remove Choke, but as long as it's fairly low level, that's fine - she's old enough to have picked up a couple of tricks. The only problem I have is with Levitation being used for flight. It's definitely possible, but it's a really advanced technique and takes a lot of concentration, per the wiki. Its a bit much, imo.

Alrighty, took care of levitation. Guess she can learn that along the way.:)
 

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For sure! She looks perfect. And spooky.
 

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She'll be approved in like.. five minutes. So go have fun!
 

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Wow Creeeepy.. I like it. I think Virion might enjoy meeting her. He could help the develop most of the core abilities (seen you requested some training).
Link in Sig, conversation (PM) if you're interested.
 
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