The Challenge of Sith

[Shroud]

Okay Force Push and Pull are the same skills. Secondly, learn to read. You didn't see anything about the force when I gripped you? READ THE WORD BEFORE GRIP! Also, I served as an RP Mentor on Nationstates, which has a very large community with about 200 people online at a time. So definitely not my first RP Battle. I have done that there. :)

Force Push and Pull are actually not the same exact force power you can just look at the name and distinguish the 2. That's like saying that force choke and pull are the exact same thing. You also can force grip somebody, but you do not have the necessary powers. I have also been on several RP sites. You haven't explained everything either. Your arguments are still invalid, and so far you haven't really proven anything except that I neglected 1 word and still the post is overpowered. If you had Force Telekinesis, then it would be valid.

 

[aidenpuccio]

You think you are high and mighty because you have more posts. You forget, I was an RP Mentor. Secondly, you have been here since Feb. and only have 300 posts. I have been here less than a week and almost have 1/3 of that.

 

[Shroud]

You think you are high and mighty because you have more posts. You forget, I was an RP Mentor. Secondly, you have been here since Feb. and only have 300 posts. I have been here less than a week and almost have 1/3 of that.

I've been on several others than just this. -_- I've never RP battled on here specifically other than this, but I have been on several other forums RP battling others. I actually do not care about my post count, because that doesn't matter. Most of my posts have been in OOC threads and main threads. You still haven't proven how your last post is possible. Actually, Shroud breaking Arkus' wrist is actually less of a god mod than your final move.

 

[Nirvana]

Aiden, drop the attitude. What matter is how you RP, not how long you have been on a site or how many posts that you have. After reading this RP I have seen so many mistakes made by both parties, powerplay, god-modding and several parts where it is not particularity detailed or explained regarding what you are doing.

If you say that you wish me to stay out of the argument then I will respect that, but the only reason for why I am writing this is because I am trying to help. To help you two improve your writing skills when it comes to RP-PvP.

 

[Shroud]

Aiden, drop the attitude. What matter is how you RP, not how long you have been on a site or how many posts that you have. After reading this RP I have seen so many mistakes made by both parties, powerplay, god-modding and several parts where it is not particularity detailed or explained regarding what you are doing.

If you say that you wish me to stay out of the argument then I will respect that, but the only reason for why I am writing this is because I am trying to help. To help you two improve your writing skills when it comes to RP-PvP.

Ok, thank you. Yeah, I admit, I made some god mod posts in it too, that's why I said I'll let his slide. I wanted to point his out, but he started to argue, then again it's just as much my fault for arguing back. You have every right to step in and tell us this though. I respect that.

 

[aidenpuccio]

Yes thank you. Though please don't speak down on this as my first RP PVP...

 

[Nirvana]

Did I make implications that could be connected to me thinking that this was your first RP-PvP, the answer is no. What I did say however was that I wanted to help you improve your writing skills, I would be more then willing to do a training duel with both of you if you'd want that.

 

[aidenpuccio]

Writing skills? What do you think an Rp Mentor does exactly?

 

[aidenpuccio]

Can we get an admin to delete all of these OOC posts?

 

[Nirvana]

I am more then aware of what a RP-mentor does, it's to help other members of the site to become better at their writing skill, and that it require some skill to be a RP-mentor. Amongst else you need to be able to understand how to build up a RP-post, how to make the flow of the text feel natural, spelling of the text and the grammar of it.

But since I have only the material you have written on this site, I can only make assumptions of your writing skills. And until I have seen the way you write other types of RP-posts I cannot judge your writing skills properly.

EDIT: That it would be possible to do.

 

[Shroud]

Yeah, I guess I could use some help. Most RP sites I've been on include things like bakugan, and every real RP ones I've been on were Chatangos, and it only lets you post a few words down. So, I really don't know how to RP aswell. XD

 

[aidenpuccio]

I am actually a writer. I can send you a draft of something I am working on sometime. Here, I tend to rush since I have been busy, but at Nationstates I was actually working for them. Therefore I put in more effort. Granted, they are not as technical as this site...

 

[Nirvana]

Yeah, I guess I could use some help. Most RP sites I've been on include things like bakugan, and every real RP ones I've been on were Chatangos, and it only lets you post a few words down. So, I really don't know how to RP aswell. XD

Very well, pick a character that you wish to duel against. And we will work from that.

I am actually a writer. I can send you a draft of something I am working on sometime. Here, I tend to rush since I have been busy, but at Nationstates I was actually working for them. Therefore I put in more effort. Granted, they are not as technical as this site...

It would most certainly help to have something more then this RP and the backgrounds you have written so far to base my judgement on.

 

[Green Ranger]

As the duel itself is resolved, I'm locking this. If you want to continue the discussion please feel free to create a new thread, or you can continue the conversation via PM/VMs. Thanks.