The Devastator

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The Devastator

Affiliation:
Prudii Kyramud
Ownership:
Prudii Kyramud
Intent:
To serve as the personal transportation and battleship for Prudii Kyramud.
Model:
Pursuer Class Enforcement Ship.
Size:
30 Meters long x 6 Cabin x 12 meters high, 24 Wing.
Weight:
Can hold 35 tons of cargo
Crew:
~10

Armor Rating:

Heavy armament. Can withstand decent barrage of anti-ship energy based weaponry with little concern. Can withstand light barrage of heavy energy based weaponry. Can withstand all light-moderate ballistic weaponry, and most heavy ballistic weaponry. All ratings sans shields.
Shield Rating:
Military class heavy shielding. Can withstand barrage from light-moderate anti-ship weaponry. Can withstand brief turbolaser barrage.
Propulsion:
Speed:
115 MGLT. 1,100 Km/h (Atmosphere)​
Hyperdrive:
Primary - .65
Secondary - 12​

Maneuverability:
The Devastator is slightly more nimble than a standard freighter. Strategically mounted MandaMotors engines gives it an acceleration of 2,200 Gs. Can partake in battle against starfighters and hold its own, with maneuverability being less than that of a starfighter, but not fatally so.

Equipment:
  • Military grade sensor suite
  • Military grade hyperwave signal jamming equipment
  • Sensor mask
  • Computer equipped for electronic warfare and defense
  • Gravity restraints
  • Force Cage
  • Medical bay
  • Plasma torch
  • Personalized controls
  • Grappler mag
  • Fuel converter
  • Environmental seals
  • Amphibious seals
  • Cockpit ejection system
  • Inertial Dampeners
  • Auxilliary generators
  • Backup battery
  • Anti-boarding systems
  • Vocalized Intelligent Computer System synced with Helmet HUD, the Punisher, and Phenom
  • Biometric scanners
  • Maintenance Drones (2 small drones that are deployed when minor damage is sustained to the hull to patch wiring or fill in holes)

Armament:
  • Quad cannon beside cockpit (1) for anti fighter combat
  • Concussion missile tube (2) - wing shown in picture- Payload 9 missiles.
  • Anti Missile flares (2)
  • Heavy Laser Cannon (1) beside quad cannon for combat against larger ships.
  • Ion Cannon (1)

Description: It is Prudii's home. It has two full bedrooms and a cargo bay. The ship is capable of doing basic flying, tailing, and combat on it's own through the AI, but more complex flight requires a pilot. The ship serves as Prudii's primary vessel, and war bird. Throughout its owernship the ship has flown bounty hunting missions, evacuated refugees during the battle of Naboo, and participated in battles like the battle of Sirius Primaris.
 
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You'll never get away with all this shielding. Warship-classed shield on something the size of a freighter?
 

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The Devastator


Armor Rating:

Heavy blast resistant armor, like that on a capital ship, on the outside.

Shield Rating: Higher grade deflector shield. Can take heavy shells of ballistic ammo, and impact with a starfighter without shutting down.

Armament/Equipment: one anti-frigate anti-capital ship cannon on the front.

Propulsion: Gives near starfighter speeds and maneuverability with the ability to move all the weight of a freighter.

Energy: Frigate energy generator.


I honestly think that this ship is trying to be too many things at once man. First, you're telling us it has the same type of armor as a capital ship. This makes me assume, barring further clarification, that you are saying it has the same level of blaster resistance as one of those. Maybe you intended to mean that it has the same -kind- of armor, but not the same thickness and amount of protection that one of those much larger ships would have, but you have to clarify this. Further, you have an anti-frigate gun (something capable of threatening a military class ship 5x-10x its size), ship shields STILL strong enough to shrug off a high speed impact with a starfighter without even shutting off, a frigate-sized power plant, and propulsion that makes it nearly as fast as a starfighter in spite of all its heavy weaponry/shields/power systems/armor. I would suggest choosing to focus on offensive power, defensive power, or speed, unless you substantially reduce them all in equal measure. The thing is roughly as large as the Falcon more or less with the power and defenses of a corvette or frigate and the speed of something nearing an X-Wing at the moment.

I would say pick the most important thing to you and have it specialize on that first, then work your way down from there. For example, you could make it a heavy tank with great defensive power, moderate offensive capabilities, but slow speed or a fast glass cannon capable of punching far above its weight with little protection, you get the idea.
 
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Shielding, Armor, Weapons, Power, and description updated as to prevent being OP. Instead of having one particularly great aspect I kinda nerfed all the specs and added some critical flaws.
 

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Beskar is scarce, you won't have enough to cover the things you have planed. Most mando's now on the site maybe have one, maybe two pieces if they are lucky made from beskar in their armour. And that's for personal armours, not freighters, gunships or other similar sized ships.
 

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Your character doesn't seem to have any resources to get beskar that covers various parts of a ship. Even the smallest fighter in SW can't have beskar in this timeline? Why? Because beskar is very hard to get. Even the most powerful characters, with the most powerful resources, and connections will find it very hard to get beskar. It has already been stated multiple times that beskar is scarce. I know centuries have passed since the Vong destroyed Mandalore and it is not unreasonable to think that beskar reserves could have been found during that century long period but those reserves most likely were gone. Furthermore, it is not unreasonable to think that a lot of the last remaining reserves of beskar were used during the recent galactic civil war.

By the way, the Vong aren't cannon. I myself have used the legends to support my arguments, but that is mostly because a lot of the star wars material is comprised of the legends, and the canons are mostly the Movies, Clone Wars, and a few other things I don't know about.

If you don't believe they aren't cannon. Check here.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Yuuzhan_Vong
 

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Don't believe me, take it up with Jiang. That is how things are, beskar is really rare at the moment after the mandalorian genocide.
 

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Sigh. I know it is legends now, you know what I meant.

Anyways. I'm not saying these veins are from the Vong. They're from the Slagging the imperium did. This would replicate what happened when the Vong did a lesser bombardment in the EU.

Actually that's completely fine, don't worry about that. Legends stuff is still canon for us this timeline.
 

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You're missing a lot more than that. Class, crew, speed in MGLT, hyperdrive rating and maneuvrability. I'd also suggest expanding on the description since there's really very little there aside from a picture. There's plenty of other approved ships out there that can give you inspiration on the kinds of detail we'd liek you to give, so have a read through the approved section and try and get a few more ideas on how to flesh this out some more.
 

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You're also not supposed to be using this ship in RP while it is unapproved. Naboo Space?
 

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My apologies. I had suggested he use it, as I didn't want to NOC it, but I'd forgotten about this issue. Again, my bad
 

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Prudii.

The Krayt's Claw.

It's a modified Pursuer-class that got approved. Use it as a baseline for your own ship if you want.

EDIT: I also think you got the dimensions a bit wrong. I heavily used the Wookiepedia entry for Slave 2 and the actual Pursuer-class when I made the Claw, which is always the best idea when you're 'remaking' an old ship. Take most of the old ship and tweak it a bit to show it's undergone a millenia of (albeit the painfully slow and near non-existant Star Wars levels of) technological advancement.
 
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I'll definitely check that out, but I'm pretty sure you have the height off. If it were like that, it would like like the diagonal half of a square. That thing is NOT as tall as it is long.
 

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It is at the butt, at least in the official artwork.
 

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I've seen a lot of variation in pictures of it and most of the ones that I see dont put it at 30 high
 

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Edited with a lot of inspiration from Kiro's ship. Credits to her for some of the equipment. Also edited to clear up some things and put it in more technical terms. Still awaiting approval....
 

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I'd probably lower the number of missiles a little. Also, by sonic mines, do you mean seismic charges or something else?
 

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I'm not going to allow them unless they're seriously nerfed., based on the grounds of...well, they're stupidly OP.
 

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Alright, approved.

Next time, try not to spam me too much, or I'll just archive it instead, mmkay? ;P
 
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