The Jedi Temple Tour

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Ranutrian Fio-Bat sighed. His beautiful girlfriend Eveskim had just told him that the Jedi Temple was giving tours (in addition to heightened security). Eveskim believed that the two of them should take advantage of it and go. Ran agreed and fired up his ship as they pulled away to head to the Temple.
Ran was currently wearing no shirt (revealing his incredibly strong chest muscles) and black pants. Eveskim was wearing a lavender colored bikini along with a crimson cloak. Ran had reddish-brown hair and dark brown eyes. Eveskim had hazel eyes and brown hair in a ponytail.
Finally, they reached the Temple and landed on a landing pad. An old Twi'Lek female Jedi master came out to greet them.
 

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Raxus Pesanka,Dressed in his formal Jedi Robes Stood on the landing platform,He Walked over After waving to a few pilots he knew. He Pulled out The red chair under the green table and sat into the seat,That was was on the platform.

He Sat outside today only the platform because it had been more peaceful Also it had been hot inside. He heard a ship land and a few voices But did not look Due to his face being buried into an interesting book titled''Djem-So''
 
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The old Twi'lek introduced herself as Master Pacna Royada. "Let's begin the tour, shall we?" Master Royada led Ran and Eveskim across the deck. "Are both of you Forcé-sensitive?" she asked. Both Ran and Eveskim nodded.
 

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Raxus,Noticed Master Pacna Royada,Greeting Newcomers He walked Over to them As they began to walk The boy Who Was with her Was wearing no shirt revealing his chest, and black pants.

As the girl He was With wore lavender colored bikini along with a crimson cloak,He Smiled as He greeted Them Also Nodding His head To Master Pacna Royada''Greetings,My name Is Raxus Pesanka,A Padawan Here At the Acadamy,He Said That But said it While looking down into A book He held into his hands.
 

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"Hello Raxus. I am Ranutrian Fio-Bat and this lady here is Eveskim."
(ooc: sorry I'm in a hurry lol)
 

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(OCC:no Problem))
He smiled''Nice to meet you,I think youll have A nice time here At The jedi temple,''He Giggled''As long As you study''He Walked away returning to his Table burrying his Face back into His book.
 

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Ranutrian and Eveskim followed Master Royada into the Temple. Ran's Commlink began to buzz. "You go ahead," Ran told Eveskim, and she went ahead with Master Royada. Ran hid in a corner near the entrance to the Temple.
"I've decided to tell you. Just promise me you won't flip out," came Ran and Eveskim's friend Hahda's voice from the Commlink.
"Okay, what is it?" asked Ran.
"Don't tell her I told you... but Eveskim is actually with another man named Ni'Tas Fenkre. I'm so, so sorry..."
"How long have you known?" demanded Ran angrily, ready to kill.
"Five months. She is only staying with you because she doesn't want you to feel bad. She wants to just be friends with you, but she's afraid to tell you."
Ranutrian began to swear rapidly and withdrew his blasters. He shot the Commlink and it fell to the ground, broken into several pieces. Ran hid his blasters in his pocket and entered the Jedi Temple, ready to harm Eveskim.
 

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He,Sensed Something terrible happening,Nearby he noticed on the side of his Eye,Ranturain Going in a Corner,He snuck over listening to the whole Convo,He was Angry,Raxus sensed the anger in him,As ranturian neared the temple,Raxus Blocked his path.

No,One is Being Harm If you want you two can discuss It,If your thinking different Go through me first'He Held his hand Down to the Training saber On his Belt.
 

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"This ain't any of your business, but thank you," said Ranutrian. He pushed past Raxus and began to walk swiftly down the hallway.
 

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As he Pushed past raxus He began to walk Away.

''You asked for this'' Raxus Said to himself.He realized all the pilots were Gone,He then lifted his Hand sending a force push to the box on the side of ranturian that would send him onto the Floor,Raxus Ignited his Green Saber.

''On The Name Of the Jedi Order,I command you to stop,Or I will use Force''He swirled his Lightsaber''
 

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The impact of the Force power left Ranutrian on the floor. "I'm going to ask you nicely once more. Please stay out of this." Ran smiled and walked past Raxus again towards the place he knew Eveskim and Master Royada were talking.
 

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He,Watched as Ranturain Was hit to the floor,He rose to his feet again Shoving past him telling him to stay out of it,

I command you to Stop!He yelled.This time Sending A Force Push towards his legs to knock him to the Ground.
 

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Ranutrian was knocked to the ground once again and tears infiltrated his brown eyes. "I LOVED HER! Now she betrays me!" he screamed. Master Royada and Eveskim came hurrying around the corner. "In the name of the Force, stop shouting!" said Master Royada, igniting her yellow-bladed lightsaber. She spun gracefully on the spot, her purple lekku twirling. Eveskim began to cry and she approached Ranutrian, hugging him tightly.
 

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Raxus,Would Watch as he would Cry And shout, Master Royada and Eveskim came hurrying around the corner.She Even Yelled and Ignited her Saber,As His Girlfriend Came Runnind Around hugging Him he Spoke to Ranturian

''Anger,Gets You nothing But Making you Feel Better,It is not The way''
This He spoke from his Heart.
 

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Ranutrian kissed Eveskim as he took Raxus' words into account. "We need to talk," Ran said to Eveskim.
Royada said, "I'm not taking Ranutrian any further into the Temple due to his recent actions. Pesanka, escort him out. I'll take the girl."
 

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Raxus Would shake his Head To Master Royado.

'With me Ranturian''Pointing his fingers at him,To follow him out of the temple.
 

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Ranutrian hit Raxus and took his lightsaber, igniting it, he began to charge in the direction that Master Royada had taken Eveskim. Ran had a bad feeling that Royada wanted to harm Eveskim...
 

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(oh I'm so sorry)

Ranutrian hit Raxus, hoping to steal his lightsaber. Ran was ready to harm Royada, as he had a feeling she would harm Eveskim. Ran reached for the green-bladed saber and plotted against Royada.
 

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As,Ranturain would attempt to hit Raxus,Raxus quickly spun around,Already Igniting his saber putting it it his face.

''That's it Your under arrest,''He,was Surely going to take him,to the high council,and convict him for attacking a jedi.
 
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