The Rise of an Industry Plot

Tunnel Rat

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1. What is going to happen in your plot?

Thomas Hakke, CEO of Hakke Industries, plans on expanding his small clothing shop and warehouse on Coruscant to become an Arms Manufacturer. To do this, he needs a factory, design team, and scientists. He will be attempting to collect as many of these assets as he can.

2. What other players will be a part of this?

Maybe a DM or something

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?

Coruscant

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.

Post 1: Acquire a factory. Thomas will be searching for a factory that he can acquire through legal or illegal means. (Illegal being assassination/murder). I figured a roll in the beginning of the search would dictate if he finds one that is simply for sale already (8+), one that is owned by a willing occupant to do business (5 - 7), or one that is owned by an unwilling occupant (4-).

Post 2: Acquire a design team. Obviously some will flock to the idea of getting paid, but this post would be to persuade or coerce top-notch designers and scientists to working for Hakke Industries. Thomas will attend a entrepreneur show where he'll try to recruit from.

Post 3: Acquire the scientists in the same event but different day (like PAX, but star wars).

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?

The end game for this plot is to be able to make standardized weapons as well as set the stage for making advanced weaponry in the future.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.

Not at the moment I don't think.

(This is my first plot so please do let me know if I've done something wrong or need to change things! Thanks!)
 
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Nefieslab

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Hi there @Tunnel Rat!

Not bad for a first attempt - not bad at all!

That being said there are a few things that need to be addressed;

  • If no other players are involved you will need someone to DM the threads as otherwise you would be RPing with yourself which isn't allowed (outside of chronicles, which cannot contribute to plots or credits IC). I think I could find the time to assist myself unless you got someone else yourself.
  • I would ask that you split up the second thread into a thread to get the scientists on board and then a second thread to get the designers on board - otherwise the plot is a little small for such a reward
But otherwise a fantastic first effort!

Under review for now, pending the answer to these questions - hope to hear from you soon!
 

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Woo! I made the changes, like splitting post 2 into 2 separate posts.

I'm cool with everything you suggested. I'm alright with you as a DM. Just be gentle, I suck at D&D!
 

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Woo! I made the changes, like splitting post 2 into 2 separate posts.

I'm cool with everything you suggested. I'm alright with you as a DM. Just be gentle, I suck at D&D!

Yeah no worries dude I'll be kind!

But with those changes made? It's all good!

Tag me when you need the DM!

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