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MasterTyvokka

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This will potentially be my Mandalorian character. I plan for it to eventually be written and formatted in a more literary style. He is still a work in progress and I am still working on coming up with a name. I am not sure if the weight is too much. I'd appreciate any feedback. Especially from @Sreeya because you got me into this, haha. And from any of the Mando Dominion heads, @Arclight @Kori Buor

NAME:
HOMEWORLD: Concord Dawn
FACTION: Mandalorian Dominion
RANK:
SPECIES: Human
HEIGHT: 6’10”
WEIGHT: 280 lbs.
AGE: 28
GENDER: Male
APPEARANCE:

PERSONALITY: Name is not the sharpest Vibrosword in the armory and he knows it. Name doesn’t try to act as someone he is not. Which leads to him being quite frank in his conversations. Where he lacks in book smarts he makes up in street smarts. Name is fairly perceptive and has good situational awareness, at least when it doesn’t involve social settings.

Name is large for a human. Not only is he tall but he is also incredibly muscular. His size keeps him from being very dexterous, although he is surprisingly agile for his size in combat. Name tends to take issues head on and prefers using brute force. In fact, it takes considerable effort on his part, and often the persuading of others, for him not to use force when another method would serve better. Name is very slow to trust. However, he is fiercely loyal to and protective of those he does. Name has a fowl mouth and a perverse sense of humor. Some would say he lacks a censor.

GEAR: Two vibro swords, Mandalorian MK II armor, grenades of various sorts, Heavy blaster, XPC-71, some sort of heavy weapon.

SHIP: Maybe Claw-3 Interceptor
ROLE-PLAYS:

Bio:

The cold mountain winds blew fiercely as I looked down from the high peaks onto the Kayanajin Valley.

These harsh lands shaped me. Since I was a very young boy my buir taught me the way of the Mando’ade. While those of other houses may have been taught at schools or in groups; in the villages of the Kayanajin Valley it was always our tradition to be taught from father to ad. I learned first how to fight with my bare hands for my father said “for only then can you fight with the kad.” It was only after I had become proficient with the sword that I was allowed to handle a blaster.

These harsh lands shaped me. When I was old enough it was time for me to take the trial, Yaim’ol be Verd. In less honorable tongues it is the Homecoming of the Warrior. I was placed in the mountains unknown kilometers from my village and given only a single dull kal. The only way to pass was to return home. Failure would mean my kyr’am. Completing my trial took weeks beyond my count. But I had survived. I finally earned my own sword and Beskar’gam.

These harsh lands shaped me. I would not be who I am today without their lessons. This is my home. The home of my people. We shape it as it shaped us. Over recent years others, the Jetii and Sith, have tried to shape my home. They have tried to tell my fellow Mando’ade how to shape their lives. There is no greater crime than that. It must not be allowed. Now we finally have the freedom to shape our own fates. We must not let that freedom be taken again. At all costs.

Wrel Halkuun
[fancybox4=https://img.ifcdn.com/images/357c068d1a5e19672c2e9388cbe76ae4e75431e3ce01bc1c09cda293957ee104_1.jpg] FACTION: Mandalorian Dominion
HOMEWORLD: Concord Dawn
RANK: SuperCommando
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 28
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'10"
WEIGHT: 280lbs

APPEARENCE: Wrel is an imposing sight. He is very tall for a human. Wrel is also incredibly muscular. Wrel posses a strong square jaw line. A couple days black stubble can usually be found on his face. His hazel eyes and bald crown complete his features. [/fancybox4]




PERSONALITY
[fancybox4=https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/98/08/2b/98082b0ef2144274bb769be249352e14.jpg]Wrel Halkuun is not the sharpest Vibrosword in the armory and he knows it. Wrel doesn’t try to act as someone he is not. Which leads to him being quite frank in his conversations. Where he lacks in book smarts he makes up in street smarts. Wrel is fairly perceptive and has good situational awareness, at least when it doesn’t involve social settings.

Wrel's size keeps him from being very dexterous, although he is surprisingly agile for his size in combat. Wrel tends to take issues head on and prefers using brute force. In fact, it takes considerable effort on his part, and often the persuading of others, for him not to use force when another method would serve better. Wrel is very slow to trust. However, he is fiercely loyal to and protective of those he does. Wrel has a fowl mouth and a perverse sense of humor. Some would say he lacks a censor.[/fancybox4]

VERD ORI'SHYA BESKAR'GAM
[fancybox4=http://orig13.deviantart.net/7ea5/f/2013/311/0/f/valley_by_donmalo-d6tcozq.jpg]The cold mountain winds blew fiercely as I looked down from the high peaks onto the Kayanajin Valley.

These harsh lands shaped me. Since I was a very young boy my buir taught me the way of the Mando’ade. While those of other houses may have been taught at schools or in groups; in the villages of the Kayanajin Valley it was always our tradition to be taught from father to ad. I learned first how to fight with my bare hands for my father said “for only then can you fight with the kad.” It was only after I had become proficient with the sword that I was allowed to handle a blaster.

These harsh lands shaped me. When I was old enough it was time for me to take the trial, Yaim’ol be Verd. In less honorable tongues it is the Homecoming of the Warrior. I was placed in the mountains unknown kilometers from my village and given only a single dull kal. The only way to pass was to return home. Failure would mean my kyr’am. Completing my trial took weeks beyond my count. But I had survived. I finally earned my own sword and Beskar’gam.

These harsh lands shaped me. I would not be who I am today without their lessons. This is my home. The home of my people. We shape it as it shaped us. Over recent years others, the Jetii and Sith, have tried to shape my home. They have tried to tell my fellow Mando’ade how to shape their lives. There is no greater crime than that. It must not be allowed. Now we finally have the freedom to shape our own fates. We must not let that freedom be taken again. At all costs.[/fancybox4]

PERSONAL EFFECTS
[fancybox4=http://gearnuke.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/bal-aw-best-gun.png]Primary Firearm: XPC-71 Custom Attachments, Holographic sight which has a link with the armor's HUD.
Secondary Firearm: Heavy Blaster Pistol
Melee Weapons: A pair of Phrik weave Vibroswords kept across his back.
Heavy Weapon: Custom Weapon in the making.
Armor: Mandalorian MK II Armor Wrel's armor has no Jet-pack and no wrist mounted weapons.
SHIP: Clawcraft-3 Interceptor
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ROLE-PLAYS[fancybox4=http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/8/84/Concord_Dawn_system.png/revision/latest?cb=20160128214904] Coming Soon...!











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This is a great starting point. Once you flesh this out more, it should be good to go! Can't wait :D
 

MasterTyvokka

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Affiliation: For use by members of the Mandalorian Dominion or any one else with the funds to purchase one.

Ownership: Wrel Halkuun

Intent: My intent is to expand the arsenal of weapons that would be effective against force users. But wasn't the standard rail gun or slug thrower. This weapon would also be safer to use against force user than grenades because of the tendency for grenades to be force thrown back at the user or activated while on the user's person. It's also an alternative to the all too common Mando wrist rockets.

Model: CZ- 6100 Handheld rocket launcher.

Manufacturer: Czerka Arms

Type: Rocket Launcher

Size: The 6100 weights 8.8lbs louded and 6.1lbs empty and is the size of a large blaster rifle. The main dimensional difference is the width of the weapons barrel. It is wider then a normal blaster rifle to accommodate the rockets.

Composition: It's primarily made of a combination of durasteel and plasteel.

Range: Effective- 150m Maximum- 200m, The 6100 uses smart ammo which can be set to detonate at a specific range instead of impact. However due to limitations of the ammunition this cannot be set to a distance greater than 30m. Because of the compact nature of the rockets the blast radius is 3m.

Ammunition Capacity: The 6100 is loaded via a magazine in the rear which has a capacity of 4 rockets.

What makes this different from other, similar tech? It's the only handheld rocket launcher.

Features: The 6100 has a holographic sight which can help with aim. There are several types of rockets available for the 6100. They are as follows:
Standard- Standard explosive round.

Incendiary- These rockets are filled with a highly flammable liquid that sticks to and burns those within the blast radius.
EMP- emits an electromagnetic pulse upon detonation
Armor Piercing- Have an armor piercing tip.
High Explosive- Heavier round due to the extra explosive material. Has a range of half normal but a blast radius of 8m. It also only detonates on impact.

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