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Plot Submission:
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
While on a job Alphonse comes across a wounded Jedi trying to get some Force Sensitive children off of Nar Shadaa so they could be trained. Remembering what happened to him in a similar situation in the past he gets into an argument with the Jedi, who gives Alphonse his lightsaber in exchange for not revealing their location after a deep conversation. Still upset, Alphonse leaves to go turn it in for credits. Calming down as he walks he realizes that this Jedi was looking out for the children and was trying to do good, prompting him to return and try to help them get off the planet. He returns to find a group of bounty hunters and other criminal scum searching the complex for the Jedi. Teaming up with a Jedi named Kal, Alphonse works to take out what hunters he can before they find the wounded Jedi and the children. As he is nearly too late and the group is found, Alphonse turns on the lightsaber given to him by the wounded Jedi to lead the Bounty Hunters after him and let Kal take the group to safety.
Running as far as he can to draw them away, he eventually gets cornered by the remaining bounty hunters. Just as things get grim he reminds them of the value of strategy, saying that even though he was caught he was still the winner since he completed his objective of letting the Jedi escape. At this moment Kaldon flies in on a stolen shuttle to save him and they escape to Jedi space. His feelings changed about the Jedi after previous experiences with them even before this, Alphonse requests to join them in the hopes of returning something to the galaxy that children like he was could hope for instead of just falling to the darkness that seems to be everywhere.
2. What other players will be a part of this?
@Phoenix
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
An abandoned apartment complex in Nar Shadaa, the streets right in front of said complex, and the alleys behind it culminating in a landing pad looking over a crevasse in the city.
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread 1: Meet the wounded Jedi after completing his job, an exchange of parcels that is probably a drug deal. It’s the other party of this deal that informs the Bounty Hunters that there is a Jedi in the building after Alphonse leaves.
Thread 2: Alphonse argues with himself internally a bit before returning to the complex to help the Jedi get off the planet. He finds it crawling with Bounty Hunters and runs into Kal. They try to take out as many of them as they can. Eventually Alphonse draws them away by using the Lightsaber given to him by the wounded Jedi, allowing Kal to escape with said Jedi and the children.
Thread 3: Running away from the Bounty Hunters, Alphonse reflects on his life up to this point and realizes that not every Jedi was like the one who betrayed him at a young age and that they seemed poised to bring the light of hope to the children of scum like himself. Giving a small speech on strategy to buy some time and hoping in the Jedi, his last chance to trust them is paid off as Kal arrives in a stolen shuttle to save him. They all manage to flee to a safe place and Alphonse asks to join the Jedi.
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
The end goal is for Alphonse to join the Jedi as part of his character arc. I would like to also acquire the stolen shuttle as well, a Z3D Armed Pinnace, but if that’s a bit much then just joining the Jedi would be fine.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No canon NPCs, but the criminal informer and the bounty hunters would need to be DM’d.
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
While on a job Alphonse comes across a wounded Jedi trying to get some Force Sensitive children off of Nar Shadaa so they could be trained. Remembering what happened to him in a similar situation in the past he gets into an argument with the Jedi, who gives Alphonse his lightsaber in exchange for not revealing their location after a deep conversation. Still upset, Alphonse leaves to go turn it in for credits. Calming down as he walks he realizes that this Jedi was looking out for the children and was trying to do good, prompting him to return and try to help them get off the planet. He returns to find a group of bounty hunters and other criminal scum searching the complex for the Jedi. Teaming up with a Jedi named Kal, Alphonse works to take out what hunters he can before they find the wounded Jedi and the children. As he is nearly too late and the group is found, Alphonse turns on the lightsaber given to him by the wounded Jedi to lead the Bounty Hunters after him and let Kal take the group to safety.
Running as far as he can to draw them away, he eventually gets cornered by the remaining bounty hunters. Just as things get grim he reminds them of the value of strategy, saying that even though he was caught he was still the winner since he completed his objective of letting the Jedi escape. At this moment Kaldon flies in on a stolen shuttle to save him and they escape to Jedi space. His feelings changed about the Jedi after previous experiences with them even before this, Alphonse requests to join them in the hopes of returning something to the galaxy that children like he was could hope for instead of just falling to the darkness that seems to be everywhere.
2. What other players will be a part of this?
@Phoenix
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
An abandoned apartment complex in Nar Shadaa, the streets right in front of said complex, and the alleys behind it culminating in a landing pad looking over a crevasse in the city.
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread 1: Meet the wounded Jedi after completing his job, an exchange of parcels that is probably a drug deal. It’s the other party of this deal that informs the Bounty Hunters that there is a Jedi in the building after Alphonse leaves.
Thread 2: Alphonse argues with himself internally a bit before returning to the complex to help the Jedi get off the planet. He finds it crawling with Bounty Hunters and runs into Kal. They try to take out as many of them as they can. Eventually Alphonse draws them away by using the Lightsaber given to him by the wounded Jedi, allowing Kal to escape with said Jedi and the children.
Thread 3: Running away from the Bounty Hunters, Alphonse reflects on his life up to this point and realizes that not every Jedi was like the one who betrayed him at a young age and that they seemed poised to bring the light of hope to the children of scum like himself. Giving a small speech on strategy to buy some time and hoping in the Jedi, his last chance to trust them is paid off as Kal arrives in a stolen shuttle to save him. They all manage to flee to a safe place and Alphonse asks to join the Jedi.
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
The end goal is for Alphonse to join the Jedi as part of his character arc. I would like to also acquire the stolen shuttle as well, a Z3D Armed Pinnace, but if that’s a bit much then just joining the Jedi would be fine.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No canon NPCs, but the criminal informer and the bounty hunters would need to be DM’d.
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