Torin Vox

lonewolf

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Name: Torin Vox
Faction: sith
Rank: sith hopeful(i couldnt find anything about what rank you start of an thing.... so correct me if im wrong)
Species: Human
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0
Weight: 150
Eyes: yellow(seems to be a dark side thing)
Hair: black
Skin: white
Credits: 1000 Credits.
Distinguishing Marks: a scar righ above his right eye
Dominate Hand: right
Force Sensitive: yes

Strength: average
Dexterity: very
Constitution: average
Intelligence:above average
Wisdom: average
Charisma: average

Force Powers:
force push/pull
force jump

Skills:
he is a skilled lightasaber wielder

Lightsaber Forms:
jar kai niman

Strengths and Weaknesses:
great with his light saber however he has a horrible temper and and isnt that great of a piliot. He tends to be a bit ignorant except of other sith.

Gear:
dark jedi robes and a blue lightsaber and a red light saber (blue he made when he was a jedi red he made when he became a sith)

Ships:sith infiltrator

Pets: none

Personality:
He is evil heartless arogant and very short tempered but... he acts polite and kind to try and hide the fact he is a sith.

History:
He was born on nar shada but he was found by the jedi and trained.However after learning a lot things were forbidden he became angry and thought the code was stupid but he did it for a while so he could learn a little about the force and about light sabers.After learning what he wanted to he fell to the dark side. From there he left the Jedi even killed his old master when he tried to stand in his way and is currently trying to become a sith apprentice.

Kills:
none

Dueling Ring Matches:
none

Grand Tournament Matches:
none

RPs:
none
 

silver

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Good profile, although you might want to add to the history and make it more detailed.
 

Hue

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You should probably adjust the Force Powers. Unless you have specific permission, you start with none. You gain Force Powers and Lightsaber fighting styles through training with a Sith Knight or Sith Lord (though we don't seem to have any Lords right now). You also might want to make the stats and personality a bit more detailed. One last thing: Spelling and grammar are very important in this forum. If you RP with no capital letters or periods between your sentences, nobody will take you seriously.
 

lonewolf

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i thought if i had a lightsaber i had to have at leat one form.....=/ and my other guy was alowed to start with force pull and push....maybe thats just jedi though
 
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