Tyzark Finn

[amerininja]

Tyzark Finn

AGE

► 17​

SPECIES

► Gran​

HEIGHT

► 5’6”​

WEIGHT

► 128 lbs.​

EYE COLOR

► Dark Blue​

HAIR COLOR

► N/A​

HOMEWORLD

► Malastare​

GENDER

► Male​

FACTION

► Jedi Knights​

RANK

► Jedi Knight​

FORCE SENSITIVE?

► Yes​

BIOGRAPHY

[beebox3=500px] Tyzark Finn was born in the city of Malthee to Hukarti and Shari Finn. At a young age he was noticed by his peers for having what seemed to be greater strength than them. What none knew at the time of his early childhood was that it was simply the force enhancing his strength slightly. For years his father and he would train using Vibro-Blades. During their sparring sessions he was unknowingly being taught Djem So, or Form V, which his father had learned through holocrons despite only having a weak connection to the force. During his training, he was also told about the legendary Jedi Order that had defeated the evil Sith Empire a century ago. At the age of 11 an elder of his people informed his parents of Tyzark's possible force sensitivity. The next morning Tyzark was informed. Curious, he asked around for answers before running into a cloaked Gran entering the city. The man told him about a cave in which an old force user supposedly entered a few weeks prior. Tyzark, in his rush for knowledge, raced to the cave and entered it without caution. He saw a short tunnel lined with torches and fresh footprints. He walked down the tunnel to see a splatter of blood. His three eyes grew wide as he saw a human male with a large burn cut into his chest. In the man's hand was a crushed lightsaber. Tyzark knelt down at the man before hearing a gasping for air.

He turned towards the man's face just as a hand grabbed his wrist. "You…take the crystal…of my saber…" The man plead.

"But sir! Let me take you to the city's healers!" Tyzark begged as his eyes drifted to the burnt gash.

"No! Go…and don't forget the crys-" The man gave his final breath to the wind as he uttered out his final command.

Tyzark hesitantly poked the broken saber to reveal a glowing orange crystal. He picked it up only to watch it lift out of his hand and float above his palm. His three eyes blinked in amazement as he snatched it out of the air and pocketed it. He raced back to his home only to find his mother sobbing at the entrance. During his time away the Gran whom had told Tyzark to leave the city and enter the cave had killed many of the city-dwellers including his father. The cloaked man was a member of the Sith Order. It was this moment that he decided he had to train himself in the ways of the force. For six years, he practiced letting the force flow to parts of his body to augment his strength and agility. Sadly, he couldn't figure out how to let the force flow out of him or even train his ability to sense things with the force.

Years passed before Tyzark mustered up the courage to leave the planet, a Vibro-Blade in hand, in search of the Jedi Knights. He made his way to the Jedi Stronghold in Dantooine where he realized that the Jedi Order wasn't exactly what he had envisioned. However, he knew that he shared their goal. He wanted to defeat the Sith. Ever since that day he wore the crystal about his neck, hanging from a steel chain. He never knew who the force user was whom gave him the crystal, but he wasn't going to go anywhere without it. He also secretly wanted revenge against that specific Gran Sith, whomhad attacked his village before fleeing. Now all he needed was a lightsaber.[/beebox3]

Personality

[beebox3=500px] Tyzark Finn is generally a very active and cheerful teenager who seldom became depressed. Often times, on his home planet of Kinyen, he would sate his natural curiosity by exploring dark caves and wading through rivers. However, if he is asked about the Orange Crystal he wears on a chain around his neck, he will go almost silent and gloom. He is open to explaining his odd attachment to this adornment but will not outright tell people of its sentimental value. He is certainly the type to jump into battle without heeding orders.[/beebox3][beebox3=500px]
Tyzark, when learning or training, will often joke about his lack of skill whether or not such an absence exists. His reasoning for such joking is so that whomever is around him will hopefully smile as they learn. Despite his joking when it comes to true battles he will attempt to remain serious but may let out the occasional joke towards his opponent even when said opponent wants him dead. [/beebox3]

Roleplays

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Weapons/Equipment

[beebox3=500px] Vibroblade[/beebox3][beebox3=500px][/beebox3][beebox3=500px][/beebox3][beebox3=500px]
Orange Crystal Necklace [/beebox3]

Force Powers

[beebox3=500px] Strength Augmentation[/beebox3][beebox3=500px][/beebox3][beebox3=500px][/beebox3][beebox3=500px][/beebox3][beebox3=500px]
Light Weight Force Lift [/beebox3]

 

[Valen Pelora]

Hey there!

I have a few comments before official approval. I would suggest reading the Sith Lexicon and Jedi Archives for information about the factions. Also the newest Jedi newsletter for up to date information on the Jedi. Finally, reading some information on character creation, here and here. We don't require specific information but as the profile stands right now it tells me very little about the character. We have to know what we are approving to make sure we don't approve a crazy character. Specifically, the history section needs some fleshing out. I'm not clear on when or how he joined the Jedi. Or the role of the "Gran" in this story. We also don't have Padawan as a rank, it's Initiate and you can start out as a Jedi Knight if you want. Tag me once those changes have been made! @amerininja

 

[amerininja]

@Valen Pelora
I have edited the history to explain certain events better and to explain where he has come upon the Jedi. I'm not sure exactly how he joined or how that works here anyway. Is there anything else in particular that you need added here before approval? I also fixed the incorrect homeworld issue I had.

 

[Valen Pelora]

@amerininja, I probably should have been more clear. You can include how the character joined the Jedi in any way you want. It is subject to approval. The OOC process is what we are going through right now, that doesn't usually bear on their IC acceptance into the Order. Most members submit their character to the faction and they have already joined in their backstory. The approval process is to make sure there isn't anything hinky going on with the character. For example, Sith randomly joining the Jedi, or an overpowered character. That being said a couple other issues have popped up.

• Holocrons are extremely rare this timeline. Some ancient texts or other relic would make more sense.
• Self training in the force is very difficult, nearly impossible to accomplish without some kind of teacher.
• The timing if things is a little off to me if he is going to be a Jedi Knight. He was 11 when his parents died and years passed before he joined the Jedi. I'm guessing he would be at least around 15 when he finally found the Jedi. It would make more than 2 years for an untrained Force user to become a Jedi Knight. My suggestion is either to age him up or have him start as an Initiate. He could have joined the Order when he was 15 and have been training for the last two years OR he could have joined the Order when he was 15 and been training for say the last 10 years (that would make him a Knight).
• I don't have an issue with him wanting "revenge" against the Gran who killed his parents. We try and discourage murderous intent but the Jedi would not turn a young teenager away because we want to find the person responsible for killing his parents.