Vega Naurdor

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Name: Vega Naurdor
formerly known as Prince Raemka
Faction: Sith
Sith Legionnaire (Mercenary)
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 156 lbs
Force Sensitivity: Apprentice Level
Voice Clips: Click Here
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Biography: Raemka was raised similar to a bastard Prince. His father was a Jedi who, during the Mandalorian Civil War, met Raemka's mother--a Mandalorian who was beginning to move against the traditional warrior ways. Together, they bore Raemka; however, unplanned, they had intentions to abandon the child for their own sakes. Raemka's father fostered his son to a Senator of the Republic who owed him a huge favor.

Senator Acuvue, the one who Raemka understood to be his father, was accepting of the child but never loving. Acuvue and his wife, high in power and wealth, were corrupt politicians who treated their fostered son with disdain--having him believe the hateful pair were in fact his parents by blood.

Rae grew up with an older brother whom he admired deeply. Nyx was his name, and he loved Raemka as any brother would. Though he never understood his parents' mistreatment of his sibling, he never questioned it. The one time Nyx stood up for his younger brother, he was severely punished.

Nyx was sum four years older than Rae. He began Jedi training at a young age with some of the Jedi Knights around their manor. Rae admired his brother and watched him grow with the force, until he eventually became a Padawan. When Rae was 6, he begged his brother to teach him what he learned from his Master. Their parents forbid Rae from any teachings of the force, understanding that his parents were powerful and that was opposite how they wanted their fostered child to be. Nyx agreed to train his brother in secret. They succeeded for four years, and young Rae almost surpassed his brother.

One day, the two were caught sparring and were punished. Nyx watched as his parents order their guards to beat Rae for his insolence, and break his training saber. Finally, Nyx pleaded for them to stop. In return, a guard put Nyx in his place as well. Nyx, infuriated, unleashed his lightsaber in the household and attacked the guard, nearly killing him. That was the first Rae ever encountered what he'd learn to be the dark side of the force--a power that mesmerized him.

The frightened parents turned to Nyx's Jedi Master, who took his Padawan from his home and on a voyage. He was old enough now to explore the galaxy as every Padawan should. At this time, Nyx was 15, and Rae was 10. He went to see his brother off, but was responded with apathy and silence. Nyx never returned to his brother the farewell and tears he received. Rae never knew if his brother blamed him for being sent away, and he would never find out. He believed the only one he ever loved left sharing the same hatred for him as their parents did.

After that, Rae was treated lesser than a household pet. He never exchanged words with his parents other than 'thank you's' behind barred teeth. He was constantly being watched by household guards. It remained this way for two years, until his corrupt parents got themselves into political troubles. They paid an enormous sum of credits to cover up their conflict, resulting in less guards around the manor. Rae used this to his advantage. In the midst of the night he would break into the armory and steal a Jedi Knight's lightsaber pike, taking it far away from his home to train. Without an actual teacher, his brother was never able to teach him basic force techniques such as telekinesis; however, Rae was naturally strong with the force. He had great force senses. He trained as best he could for two years.
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Until eventually, his parents' troubles caught up to them. A bounty was placed on their heads in the black market by other corrupt members of the Senate who didn't want Acuvue to interfere with their plans. A group of Mandalorian bounty hunters came for the two. They did, in fact, collect their bounty. Rae revealed himself to the leaders of the mission, having killed two of their men in self-defense. The Mandalorian leaders took to the defensive at Rae's approach, until the unexpected happened. To their surprise, the child of their targets was begging them to take him with them. He wanted the warriors to adopt him as their own and remove him from this planet. The Mandalorians took this request to their advantage. They agreed to take him, but they would evidently frame him for the murder of his parents. This way nothing would ever get tracked to the Mandalorians or the employers of the bounty.

Rae, with no intention of returning, agreed. Being a wanted man, he changed his name to Vega. Often he was called Prince Vega by his new brothers and sisters only to be teased. He stayed with this new family for two years, learning their ways and becoming a great warrior. He still used a lightsaber lance with a yellow blade, but he also learned other ways of combat, such as blaster pistols and knives. He learned the basics of being a bounty hunter, piloting a ship, and handling himself in a world so different from what he knew in the Republic.

One fateful mission brought him to a Sith Temple. Their target, a rogue Jedi, had taken refuge here and it was their job to acquire him. In the temple Vega was separated from his comrades by a force that called his name. The temple whispered to the darkness in his heart, and boiled the hatred that had been sitting stagnantly inside him for years. The temple led him to his target, and he dispatched the rogue Jedi. A tough battle which left Vega badly injured, but victory none the less. In this eerie temple, Vega was led to an old Sith artifact--a weapon similar to his own. It was a lightsaber pike belonging to an old Sith Warrior, one who once guarded this beaten temple.

Vega had an epiphany in this temple that stayed with him for a while. After much contemplation, he decided it was time for him to part ways with his Mandalorian family. Having performed many jobs for the SBZ, he now wished to seek them out and join their ranks as a Sith. It's what the voice told him to do. He wishes to find someone strong enough to better understand how to harness his hatred into the power he deserves. (To Be Continued...)

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Personality: His brother always made him smile; he taught him to smile through the hardships as a Jedi would. When he lost his brother, the smiling ceased and he spoke very little. It was when he was adopted by the Mandalorians that he gained a personality again. It was no longer his brother that made him smile, but the thrill of battle, and more importantly--victory. The feeling of completing a mission or bounty was enthralling. Thus, he became a very ambitions individual, with determination to accomplish any goal. He was also violently playful, Mandalorians often getting into tussles. Other than that, he was quiet--only speaking when spoken to usually. Wasn't one to make jokes, but certainly laughed if it was worth it. As exemplified through his charisma, Vega isn't too skilled in conversation. It's a mixture of many things (growing up ignored & without friends, not yet possessing a masculine voice, Mando's verbal communication often leading to fists...) that cause him to naturally be shy, but it's something he's truly working to get better at. He never knows what to say, but he's very expressive. You can often read his mind solely on facial expressions, resulting in him often wearing his hood. He also speaks with copious hand gestures whenever he's lucky enough to be in good conversation. Not much of a jokester with words, he does often pull pranks on comrades.

Strength: 5/10
Dexterity: 8/10
Charisma: 3/10
Intelligence: 5/10
Endurance: 8/10
Marksmanship: 6/10
Lightsaber Combat: 7/10

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Fighting Style: Vega was vaguely trained in traditional lightsaber forms, but having trained his entire life--the Mandalorians shaped Vega into a fine warrior. What he lacks in strength, he makes up for in dexterity. What he lacks in intelligence, he makes up for with great endurance. He often uses his pike like a staff (without the saber summoned), and uses the saber when fighting an exceptional foe. He uses his firearm occasionally, mostly as a distraction, and carries a blade in the event he's ever disarmed. The range of his weapon favors his lack of height, proving helpful when facing larger opponents. It is likely he will grow, as he is only sixteen, but until his body makes any changes—he remains with his pike. Vega is skilled in both dueling, and battling in a larger setting. When dueling, he often starts on the offensive. His speed allows him to further analyze his opponent's fighting-style, while his endurance resists fatigue. In serious battles, his high offense infuses random fire from his sidearm and strikes from his pike. Vega's defense isn't as good as his offense, but is certainly formidable. He reserves his speed, and if the dark side would allow—uses the force to increase his strength. With strength & endurance, he trusts in his force sense to guide well deserved strikes. The weakness in his defense is his lack of proper training. Sometimes he loses control of the force, and it also proves easy to see through Vega's tactics if paired against a strategic foe.

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Strengths: Although Vega isn't too strong, being 16 his youth allows him great dexterity. Undergoing Mandalorian hardships, he has good endurance on the battlefield as well. Vega was never properly trained in the force; thus, he cannot perform normal feats such as telekinesis. However, he has always been strong with the dark side of the force, hatred being his prime emotion. He can perform slight acrobats like force leaps and enhanced speed in the heat of battle, but outside of battle he isn't sure how to tap into his emotions. He also has great force senses.

Weakness: Now that Vega journeys alone, he has to adapt to fighting without his brothers and sisters behind him. He usually followed plans, whereas now he has to make them. He posses quick wit on the battlefield, but could be easily overcome by a strategically planned strike.

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Gear:

--> Black hooded trench jacket to hide his age and secondary weapons against foes
--> Light armor underneath, tight and similar to an assassin's attire

Weapons:
--> Phrik Sith Lightsaber Pike
--> Blaster Pistol
--> Vibrodagger

Skills:
Force Powers: Acrobatics
Static Effects: Force Sense

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Sixteen year old Sith? Peculiar.
And very unique! Fascinating job, @xrisxian.

All I have to recommend is extending the personality section, but that's completely up to you. Regrettably, the background will have to be approved by both the Jedi and Republic FL's. As such, I'll tag them here for assurance: @Fyreleader @Vosrik

Once that is all sorted out, don't forget to sign your character up here for Sith approval, which I doubt will be of issue as long as both the Jedi & the Republic are alright with your character's story, as it's a great first character.
 

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Eh...if this guy wasn't a Sith I'd totally say: He's a prince. And he's the right age. He totally gotta marry Nova XDDD
Anyways cool character :)
 

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Eh...if this guy wasn't a Sith I'd totally say: He's a prince. And he's the right age. He totally gotta marry Nova XDDD
Anyways cool character :)
hopefully their paths cross, preferably friend over foe--but I guess their fates are guided by us :oops:
 

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I'd be totally down for that! I always love when I can write Nova around people her age. Await my PM!<3
 

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He's hidding on my ship so he better be approved.
 

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@Vosrik is moving this weekend, so I looked over the profile. I don't really understand this supposed "Jedi Armory" your character got a lightsaber from. While there may be such rooms on an actual Jedi base, there wouldn't be one on Mandalore (where I am assuming this all took place, perhaps I missed where your home world was at.

All in all, it isn't anything I am willing to make a big deal out out of, but I would consider changing that bit. Jedi Background Approved. Nice character and welcome to the site!

Your friendly neighborhood AFL,

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I like the character a lot! Taran would have a field day being this guys mentor xD
 

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Sorry for the delay! Got a chance to review the republic bits. Everything looks ok, although the only thing i would bring out is: you mention something about the mandalorian civil war. Im not clear as to which civil war you are referring to. Could you explain please? @xrisxian
 

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Sorry for the delay! Got a chance to review the republic bits. Everything looks ok, although the only thing i would bring out is: you mention something about the mandalorian civil war. Im not clear as to which civil war you are referring to. Could you explain please? @xrisxian
The Mandolorian Civil War happened before the clone wars, but as I read now (i only skimmed before) it was after the time period of this Time Line. So i will be sure to make some adjustments @Fyreleader
 

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The Mandolorian Civil War happened before the clone wars, but as I read now (i only skimmed before) it was after the time period of this Time Line. So i will be sure to make some adjustments @Fyreleader
Cool. Thanks. Once those adjustments are madd, i think all will be in order.
 

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don't know if you want to associate your character with the mandalorians or not. but let me know since there's this.
 
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