Ver Sezna

[xGhoulz]

Name: Ver Sezna
Affiliation: Sith
Rank: Sith Assassin
Species: Twi'lek
Age: 20-26
Gender: Male
Force Training: Self trained
Force Sensetive: Yes

Appearance
Skin Color: Dark Tan - Eye Color: Orangish Yellow - Height: 182cm - Weight: 70kg (About) - Body Shape: Skinny Build

Attributes
XXXXXXXX Strength - Ver is very strong due to his specialty in combat
XXXXXXXX Force - His strength in the force is about average, as he does not use it a lot
XXXXXXXX Constitution - As he always is keeping good shape, he can heal at fast rates
XXXXXXXX Weakness - Ver is very strong, so he can resist almost anything, due to his strength in the force, but he is not invincible
XXXXXXXX Agility - Ver can run very fast for a very long time, as he uses force strength to boost himself

Personality
Ver has a very dark personality. He is hardly ever nice, he hardly only believes in his hatred giving him all his strength. He wants vengeance for everyone who ruins his daily life, he thinks himself a warrior. He believes there can only be peace through Sith rule. He is sarcastic, rude, and serious. Ver wants to be the best Sith around, he hopes to destroy the Jedi that he hates very dearly. He is always ready to fight. He loves watching duels. He is always fighting with people. He just has a very dark personality in general. He thinks he is the only Sith that will survive the ongoing war between Sith and Jedi. Ver is such a dark character because he seeks vengeance towards the Jedi, and watching duels makes him think of when he and his brother used to fight, he is constantly reminded of his brother when he watches duels. Other than that, he has always been a dark person. Accept when it comes to his dad, he's always inspired. Ver has very little taste in humor, sure he can be sarcastic but he mainly focuses on being serious, he never wants to fail during a mission. He thinks he must be the best Sith around.

Biography
The Best Student
Ver Sezna was born on Korriban, to a family of four. There was his mother, Zanna, his father, Derein, and his brother, Daman. Ver always dreamed of becoming a Sith acolyte, as his father was an Imperial Officer. His brother, Daman, never liked the Sith, he thought they were cruel and harsh. Ver was always the favorite in his family, he was born a soldier, his dad always tells him. When Ver finally was allowed to join the Sith trainee corps, he immediately asked his father to get him into the corps. A few days later, Ver was shipped off to the temple, where he met the Overseer that would give them trials. Ver propelled to the last few trials way before the other trainees did, his Overseer loved him! By the time Ver made it to the last trial, as he was out with the few remaining trainees, they were attached by Corrupted Soldiers. Ver was lucky enough to escape the area with minor injuries. He took cover behind a rock, where the soldiers couldn't get to him. It wasn't until that the Sith soldiers got word about what happened, that they sent a drop ship to collect the trainees. Turns out, only Ver was the only one surviving out of the other trainees. When they returned from the attack, Ver was granted the title, Sith.
A New Beginning
Years later, Ver took in an Apprentice, Celia Daner. He tought her in the ways of the dark lords who he had admired for their reputations and strength. Celia grew to become top of the other trainees, just like Ver had. When the time came, Celia was ready to go alone. Ver misses teaching his apprentice very dearly, but now Celia has her own apprentice.
The Accident
Ver had received news a few years later, that his family has been killed. Ver was outraged, he seemed vengeance on the person who had killed his family. His brother, Daman. Even though he was his brother, Ver still wanted Daman dead. Daman had never liked the Sith, he joined the Jedi. Ver was always telling his brother how great it would be to join the Sith. Ver was always nice to his brother, how could he have done this! Ver searched every planet with a trace of Daman on it. At last he found his brother on Balmora. He was with an injured man, Ver was raged with his brother, he ignited his lightsaber, he struck his brother down with one surprise blow. In his own rage, he killed the injured man too. After this, Ver lived in depression after killing his brother. Ver left Balmora, and now he has started a new journey. It begins....Now.

Skills
Force Push/Pull/Jump - Mastered push and pull, about average on Jump.
Force Slam - Good Ver never really needed to slam his opponents, as he uses his lightsaber the most
Force Healing - About Mastered Ver can heal himself and others, but it takes lots of force strength
Form V/IV/III - Average Ver mastered form III and is average on IV but is not too good with V
Force All Together - Almost Mastered Ver can do many force tricks, and he is very good at pretty much all
Lightsaber Usage All Together - Almost Mastered Ver has mastered all simple lightsaber forms, and still practicing with advanced forms

Gear
Standard Lightsaber (Red)
Mask - Black Suit - Hood
Light Shoulder pad
Light Body Armor (Under Suit)







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[Deviant]

Hey there! I'm undoubtedly late, but:
Welcome to SWRP!

I just have several recommendations pertaining to your character profile, and then I'll be more than happy to approve!

To start, he's 5'9" but weighs a sheer 88 pounds? Though fathomable, I personally recommend you boost that up by a solid sixty to eighty pounds (more or less). Mainly because you state that he's strong due to his finesse in combat, but 88 pounds is just a little unreasonable for a legitimate Sith warrior.

Also, I'd like to see a little more "meat" on your personality section. Can you go into further detail as to why he has a dark personality? What about his humor? Charisma? Does he like puppies? Why is he constantly fighting people, or watching duels? Does fighting just give him the exhilarating thrill of battle? Is it his thirst for blood that fuels his desire to battle, or is it pride? This is also a personal suggestion, and you're more than welcome to ignore it.
But, that'd make me sad. :^(

I'm glad you didn't go too overboard with his skills too. Nice job with that! Pertaining to gear, you're more than welcome to use this fabulous guide by @Shalken. It includes ships, weapons, and armor you can use for your character.

Now, if you need any help whatsoever, don't hesitate to ask. I'm always here. Literally, always.
Aside from that, great character! Cheers.

 

[xGhoulz]

Took some of your advice, and fixed it up a bit! :D

 

[Deviant]

Nice job!

However, as @Gamov earlier pointed out on the Sign-Up thread, it appears you have signed up for the Jedi Order as well.

Unfortunately, you can be in only one main faction (Republic, Jedi, or Sith) at a time. So, you must choose my friend: Sith, or the Jedi?

:(

 

[xGhoulz]

I choose, Sith! :D

 

[xGhoulz]

Sorry, it's kinda confusing, as this is my first time doing this kind of rp

 

[xGhoulz]

I'm used to more simple role plays

 

[Deviant]

It's perfectly fine!

I'm glad you decided to choose the Sith. However, I'll clarify anyway because I'm a buttface.

So, there are three main factions. The Republic, the Jedi Order, and the Sith Brotherhood. You can only be in one of those, and one of those only. Since you are allowed three maximum characters, you can have two characters in one of those main factions, and a third character labeled Independent (no main faction).

Hope that helps!

EDIT:
Don't worry. Things should smooth over the more you get used to the site. I assure you.

 

[xGhoulz]

Anyways, take as much time as you wish, and approve or disapprove my sign up when ever! :D

 

[xGhoulz]

Ok!
But my Sith is still gonna be the only one accepted right? XD

 

[Deviant]

If your Sith is accepted, your other character here cannot join the Jedi Order.

Aside from that, I'm pleased with the edits! Only issue I have is that now he's 124 kg in weight, so that's around 270+ pounds. Apologies, kilograms and pounds are just... sigh. You're more than welcome to just throw in 70 kg for his weight, since he sounds just about in that area.

And, again, nice profile!