Vox Nir

[gibbypoo]

Vox Nir

AGE

► 25​

SPECIES

► Devaronian​

HEIGHT

► 1.6 m​

WEIGHT

► 77 kg​

EYE COLOR

► Yellow​

HOMEWORLD

► Nar Shadaa​

GENDER

► Male​

FACTION

► Hutt Cartel​

RANK

► Enforcer​

BIOGRAPHY

Vox Nir was raised on and by the streets of Nar Shadaa. As one of the thousands of orphans, the young Devaronian was tasked with an otherwise impossible feat: survive. And survive he did. Left to fend for themselves once they abandoned the so-called orphanage, the young were thrown into the seedy underbelly of the Smuggler's Moon. Through the trials and tribulations of making a living in such a place, the fight or flight reflex is honed to a razor sharp edge. Once mastered, Vox learned to trigger that in others, reducing them down to their animal instincts where they could be easily manipulated. Intimidation became his forte. Such talents don't go unnoticed under the watchful eye of the Hutts and he soon found gainful employment under the Besadii Kajidic as an Enforcer.

EQUIPMENT

Blaster Pistol
Blaster Rifle
Armor
Grenades
Durasteel sword

PERSONALITY

Vox is a consummate professional. He styles himself a business man despite the savage work of the Hutts. He knows a life of poverty and has worked his way out of the gutters to create a cozy lifestyle for himself. Despite the haughtiness of his demeanor, Vox is completely aware of the nature of his craft. However, it's easier to sleep at night in a nice bed than an alleyway.

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[Logan]

Hmm, I think you could do with maybe another paragraph or so in your bio. A personality section would be nice too, doesn't need to be long.

 

[gibbypoo]

Hmm, I think you could do with maybe another paragraph or so in your bio. A personality section would be nice too, doesn't need to be long.

Added! Thanks!

 

[Vosrik]

Looks good now. I'd echo Relent there and suggest you add a bit more to his bio and personality as they're both quite short. Also, while you just have "grenades" on there, you should specify exactly what kind of grenades they are. Thermal detonators are advanced tech, so they'd likely just be frag grenades.

Approved!