Xid Lordess

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NAME: Xid Lordess
FACTION: N/A
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 21
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6ft
WEIGHT: 190Ibs
EYES: Dark Brown
HAIR: Black
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: scar under right eye and above lip
DOMINATE HAND: right
FORCE SENSITIVE: no

STRENGTH: He is stronger than average man but not overly strong
DEXTERITY: He is able to run long distances easily but not very fast
CONSTITUTION: He is very fit
INTELLIGENCE: Smart as the average man
WISDOM: He knows the difference between right and wrong even though he often chooses the wrong part.
CHARISMA: Very charismatic. Makes friends easily.

SKILLS: He is to gain information easily. He is able to muscle people into doing what he wants, when he wants, and how he wants. He is able to shoot very fast and accurately.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: He is an outgoing person. This makes it easy for him to gain information on his target easier. However he is occasionally seen by gangs and other organizations he is seen as a threat that is trying to gain a foot in their territory. He is often in fights and is an avid fist fighter but suffers from some finger pains from broken fingers in the past.
GEAR: He often carries a small blade, a blaster pistol, and a blaster rifle, with some armor.

SHIP: He has a personal transport


PERSONALITY: He is a very friendly outgoing person. He is often making friends and cracking jokes. He does not like to take things seriously but when it comes to work or credits he is very dedicated and serious. He loves money and sees every with a pricetag on their forehead because he believes everyone has a price. He will go so far as to kill or backstab a close friend for a large amount of money. He loves, however, to talk to people and get to know them and share stories. He loves to just sit around and talk and do nothing. He is often seen as lazy but is rather quite the opposite. He often practices on his free time and loves to fight people. While he is very social, He finds the need to exert male dominance on people and to make them feel as if he could do bad things to them.

HISTORY: As a child he was very popular. He was able to make enemies into friends very easily. Not afraid to get into a fight, He often fought other children in a fear that they may think he is weak and not strong. His father was a gangster on his home planet and would come home beat and stabbed often. His father had taught him the value of being strong and the value of money as he was successful but not rich. His father often would teach him how to handle money. As his father taught him would tell him how politicians were corrupt and were often bribe, He realized that every person from the loser bum on the street to the highest royalty, had a price that was not hard to find. As he grew and aged with no to much of a difference in his life, other than being in gangs and learning to fire a blaster rifle very well, He hit the age of 18 and had to disembark on his own journey. Buying some gear and a ship he then took off to see what people would take him in and help him succeed.

KILLS: N/A
DUELING RING MATCHES: N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: N/A

ROLE-PLAYS: N/A


Finally it is done!!! YAY ME. Ok I need you to critique this like I've been doing this for years and am expected to do very good ones. However back it up with good information.... don't go, "too many commas" say "too many commas. It is bad grammar and is often getting in the way of reading." get it you jackasses of the world?
 
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Count Sam

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The image is not working, and I guess that you should insert a whole picture instead of putting links.Yeah one more thing expand the history o.o

Edit:its better now :P
 

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yea I fixed it, I accidently chopped off a part of the link. umm the history that happens when you copy and past from word XD.... I like started it 3 days ago and just got back around to finishing it... is there anyone that can draw in these forums?
 

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Yeah..I guess so alot of people around here can probably draw good
 
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