Xim Toginchi

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Hay Jeim look.” Boeb lent over and jabbed Jeim in the ribs almost causing him to spill his beverage. “You see that guy over at the bar, I swear he has not blinked in over 5 minutes.

What, why are you looking at that guy? He looks like he has nothing on him and why would I care whether someone blinks or not?” Jeim placed his drink back on the table and turned back around to continue watching a couple sitting at a table in the corner of the bar. He had been doing so for the past hour or so, determining if they would be an easy target for him and Boeb to mug. ‘Preferably after they had retired from the pub and were out of sight, down a dark alley Jeim thought to himself.’ He had committed many crimes in that type of venue and with them being in such a groggy state the task would be even easier.

No Jeim look, I have never seen anything like this before.” Boeb went to jab Jeim again, but he stopped when he saw that he was already turning round.

What is wrong, you are not normally like this.” When Jeim finished turned round Boeb was no longer at his seat, instead he stood at the bar next to the human he had been watching. Jeim felt very nervous he knew nothing of this character and if Boeb gave anything away about their intentions here tonight the could be in trouble. “Hay Tony come here for a sec.” Jeim hoped Boeb would recognise his voice and notice that Jeim was beckoning him over, but the bar’s ambient noise must have been to intrusive and he did not turn round.

Boeb picked up the freshly pored glass and walked over to his seat to find Jeim frantically looking round. “I was just checking if he was blind by nodding at him when I went up and he nodded back, I also noticed he had a blade and a very well looked after one at that, so maybe after we are finished with the others we could grab that as well.

Right... I Hope you are pleased with yourself Mr detective, now we will have to try and grab it and hope it is worth something because in working that out, you made me take my eye of the two over there! You see then, on those empty seats! They’re gone and I don’t know which door they went out of!

Well that was a bit silly why-

What do you mean silly, how can you call that silly when you just went up to the bar to check is someone was blind?” Jeim said this at the top of his voice causing most of the surrounding customers to stop and look at them.

Sush. He will know we are talking about him.” They both looked up at the bar, the man was now no longer there either. “See Jeim. What did I say.

Jeim stood up and started looking around the bar again. “He must have gone out the main entrance, quick Boeb go see if you can spot him, if you do stay close but not too close and if you go out of sight let me know your location over the Hush. Do not whatever you do ingage him unarmed, I will find a weapon and follow you.” Boeb ran towards the door and left, Jeim looked around and found a blaster propped up behind the bar, grabbed it when no one was looking then followed Boeb out into the main courtyard.

Boeb was stood in the open facing the bar. “Well did you find him?” Jeim yelled out to him.

Jeim go back inside now!” He then raised both his hands above his head and started jumping on the spot.

What are you doing?” As he said this he heard someone land behind him. Shivers went shooting down his spine as he a cool, sharp blade press up against his neck.

He could feel the blade start to dig into his neck. “Give me all of your credits.” The man whispered in Jeim’s ear.

Jeim reached into his pocket and grabbed as many credits he could, most of them he had stolen earlier in the week. “Here you go!

Then another man stepped into view, his left hand was raised and his fingers were twitching in time with Boeb jumping, then he rotated it and Boeb started to spin as he jumped. In his right hand was the hilt of a similar blade but the sheath was very scuffed at the end and was being dragged along the ground. Have you got the credits? He raised his head and below his hood Jeim noticed his eyes were covered with some kind of bandage.

There was a sudden sharp pain in Jeim’s neck, he thought it was it, he didn’t want to go like this... but it was just the blade being pulled away from his neck, he was then pushed towards Boeb who was still jumping and spinning on the spot, the push was unexpected and he tripped on his own feet. “Yes I have the credits. We are finished here get rid of any witnesses.

The other man rolled his hand into a fist and Boeb’s spine could be heard snapping, before his limp body joined Jeim on the ground.

Jeim looked up blowing at his raw hands to see the blade coming swiftly down towards his face.

Xim woke from his dream screaming in his mind. ‘Who are you?!


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NAME:
Xim Toginchi
FACTION:
Bogan
RANK:
Crusader
SPECIES:
Miraluka
AGE:
18
GENDER:
Male
HEIGHT:
5ft 12”
WEIGHT:
86 lbs (Well under weight for a 18 year old who is 5ft 12” tall)
HAIR:
Black Short
SKIN:
Pale
CREDITS:
1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
No eyes
FORCE SENSITIVE:
Yes
STRENGTH:
8/10
DEXTERITY:
6/10
CONSTITUTION:
8/10
INTELLIGENCE:
5/10
WISDOM:
7/10
CHARISMA:
4/10
FORCE POWERS:
Force Sight
Force Sense
Self taught
Mind trick
Dopplegänger
Taught
Telepathy
Telekinesis
Jump
Speed
Choke
Lightning


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form IV: Ataru

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+ He can quickly assess someone and sneak his way past any mental defences.
+ He spends time thinking of a plan before acting on it.
- When he is messing with anyone he is very venerable to attacks.
- His plans are more often than not very very violent so he needs someone to tweak them before acting on them.
- He is a mute and can only communicate through Telekinesis, this makes him very paranoid he will he will get his thoughts and his speech mixed up.​

GEAR:
Xim carries round with him a small doll almost like a voodoo doll. He sometimes carries round a sword to feel more like the man in his visions.​

Clothing:
Xim has styled his appearance on the man in his dreams, although has added a few touches of his own; His has given the clothing more of a digital honeycomb look, has added shoulder protection, used larger spikes on the wrist guards instead of the fine/eve spikes and has added a piece symbol on the belt just for jokes.​

PERSONALITY:
Xim has taken to the dark side in a bad way. He is very hollow and empty inside, or at least that is what he makes everyone think. He is really friendly and enjoys being with company, this however in not something he wants to be known by residents of Ando Prime. He also has a very odd sense of humor and this coupled with mind trick can result in some amusing situations. At only 116 lbs Xim looks very unhealthy but he likes to look after himself, keeping himself at this constant weight is very important because it is far below the under weight level but is a necessary step in deceiving onlookers.​

BIOGRAPHY:
Xim has spent most of his life hidden away in the depths of of the Ando Prime temple. When he was very young him and his twin brother, because of the great potential they showed were being transported from their birth place on Alpheridies to Ando Prime however during the journey the ship was attacked by Jedi and during the struggle Ieu was killed.​

Now his only goal is to become strong enough to get back at the Jedi for what they have done! Whenever he has not been hidden away meditating he will have been wondering Ando Prime looking for weak minded passersby to test himself, occasionally he would look out for the strongest of Bogan and creep his way into their minds.​


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Updates Major:
30/10/10-Complete redo of the profile
16/12/2010-Promoted to Crusader

Updates Minor:
01/10/10-Pokakaa's points
04/12/10-Centred some of the profile and some slight tweaks



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Jerek Odres

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Not bad.

:CHappy

Btw you are 6 ft tall not 5'12" the average is 167 lbs.
 
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you should shrink that image.
 

Jerek Odres

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Now that I think of it... How did you learn Force sense, mind control, Ataru. Also how are you that good at mind control already with no apparent prior training.

- His plans are more often than not very very violent so he needs someone to tweak the

Tweak what? lol
 

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This profile has had a complete overhaul! Woop.
 
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