Death and Love
- Jan 10, 2021
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Updated, kept similar name to the species for respect to the franchise but different nonethelessThis is almost enough of a rip of the Yautja from the Predator franchise, including the name and nickname of the species, that it needs significant edits. The usage of their likeness is fine, however.
This species can't have as much impact as is currently written on early Human civilization and development.
For other notes: Almost every species is susceptible to frostbite in cold weather, and it also says they're resilient to cold. It's not really a weakness. Their males are also specifically as strong as a Wookiee while being notably smaller and also faster. A Trandoshan or similar might be a better comparison of strength.
And this last bit is just my opinion, but they seem reptilian rather than amphibious. They seem to have little to no connection or requirement for being in water.