YiZhong

YiZhong

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Name : Yi-Zhong
Faction : Jedi Order
Rank : Padawan
Species : Human
Age : 18
Gender : Male
Height : 175 cm
Weight : 63 kg
Eyes : Dark Brown
Hair : Black
Skin : White-Slight Tan
Credits : 1000
Distinguish Scars : A Horizontal Gash at his right side of his body .
Force Sensitive : Yes

Strenght : Yi-Zhong's strenght is considered average for his age and for his Jedi training .
Dexterity : Yi-Zhong is rather nimble and agile on his feat . His agility is augmented slightly when
he uses the Force .
Intelligence : Yi-Zhong is considered rather intelligence , this is also due to the fact that both his parents
were educators . Yi-Zhong also has developed an affinity for orthadox and unorthodox
style of military strategy. Besides that , Yi-Zhong excels when it comes to the History of
The Jedi Order due to the long hours spent in the Jedi Archives after his Master's death .
Wisdom : During his time training with his master , Yi-Zhong was considered rather brash andwould
leap into a situation wothout thinking much of the consequences . However , since his
master's death , Yi-Zhong has become more wise and has started to think of the
consequences that could occur before making a decision .
Charisma : Yi-Zhong consideres himself lacking in charisma , even among his fellow Jedi peers .

Force Powers :
Burst Of Speed
Telekinesis
Force Push / Pull
Force Sense

Skills
Yi-Zhong has developed a knack for martial arts , and has studied every form of martial arts there is
offered in the Jedi Order's curriculum .Besides that , Yi-Zhong is also has a keen sense for strategy.

Lightsaber Form :
In the beginning Yi-Zhong trained in the basic fundamentals of Form IV : Ataru due to its combat nature . But later adopted Form III : Soresu after his master's death .

Strenght / Weakness
When he was younger , one of Yi-Zhong's strenght lies in the fact that he is a very martial Jedi that was skilled in combat . However this strenght is also his greatest weakness as he tends to act before he thinks leading to a lot of trouble . When he matured Yi-Zhong's strenght became that of a great strategiest and philopshers . One of the weakness of the older Yi-Zhong is that he has become a very inactive Jedi that seats backs and watches a scene unfold before taking action .

Gear
Lightsaber , Comlink

Biography
YiZhong was a human male born into a family of educators , his father was a professor that taught physics in the Alderanian University , his mother on the other hand was a professor in accounting in the same university . One day when YiZhong was 2 , a Jedi Knight who was a friend of the family visited the family , during that visit the Jedi Knight discovered that YiZhong was Force Sensitive and asked the family whether he could be taken back to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant for training . The family happily obliged to allow their friend take YiZhong back to the temple , with the only clause being that only he can teach their son . He happily agreed.

During his time training in the temple , YiZhong was a very martial Jedi that developed an aptitude for lightsaber combat as well as the use of The Force . YiZhong practice the basic styles of Form IV: Ataru for most of the day . Because of that , he neglected his other studies especially in the field of diplomacy .

When YiZhong was 16 years of age , he and his master was ordered by the Jedi High Council to a planet located in the Outer Rim to negotiate a peace agreement between two warring faction . After 7 days of negotiations , the peace agreement was going nowhere . Yi-Zhong then made the mistake of insulting one of the warring faction officer . This made the leader of the warring faction that Yi-Zhong has insulted to assault the diplomats , Yi-Zhong and his Master managed to defend most of the blaster shots from the enemy . However , Yi-Zhong's master knew that the one of them had to survive this battle . While Yi-Zhong was deflecting blaster shots , Yi-Zhong's master force pushed him out of the grand chamber they were in , and proceeded to destroy the entrance to the chamber .
Yi-Zhong than received a telepathic message from his master to return to the temple and appraise the council of the situation . As Yi-Zhong was about to jump to hyperspace , Yi-Zhong felt the death of his master through the force . Yi-Zhong cried during the whole duration of the time back to Coruscant .

After his master's death , he built a bust that depicted his master and placed it in the Jedi Archives as a sign of respect to his late master , from that day on Yi-Zhong vowed that no one will die or suffer for him again .
 
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Lt. Beardsly

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You may be asked to bump this character down to a Jedi Padawan and have a small handful to all of those powers removed. I haven't read the rest of it, but you will need to edit the biography so he's a Padawan.

Other than that, through a skim, I don't see any timeline issues.
 

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Ok thanks for the heads up , I have already edited it .
 
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