Zeep's training

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Zeep was confused. The man who had bought him had left him here in this room. It had been an hour. Zeep's former master never gave him an hour alone unless it was sleep time. This room looked too nice to be a sleep room. He thought about what could be happening. He got more confused, and as he got more confused, he got angry, and his anger grew and grew. The rage grew until it exploded out of him, he roared and smashed the bed in half. Splinter flew, one of them pierced his shoulder, he roared again and smashed his fist into the wall, he felt like some unknown force was flowing through him. The wall showed a small crack. Then suddenly the flow of energy was gone and Zeep's anger was gone. He sat down and started thinking about his former master.
 

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It seems that Tahn was going to start the training of his first apprentice, well when he first came to Ando prime a few monthes ago his main goal was to gain power, and leave.But then he decided to stay with the dark jedi of the Bogan, and support them specially in their future war with the jedi.

Tahn knew nothing about Zeep,his acolyte, but all what he knew is that he was going to torture him, and maybe even kill him if he proved to be a slow learner.

Tahn then walked into the room where his acolyte was."What did you do here boy?"Tahn said in an angry tone to Zeep.
 

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OOC:He's a wookie in case you didn't know.

"Zeep grew angry, Zeep destroyed bed." He replied in a calm voice. His anger was gone. He was inquisitive now. "Who are you?" he asked.
 

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OCC:Okay :D

"you unleash you anger on things that does not move, and fight?"Tahn said in a disgusted tone.you are a pathetic excuse for a living creature,I would rather have you as a slave, rather than an apprentice"Tahn said as he waited for the wookie to burst into anger, and attack him.
 

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Zeep could feel anger building inside himself, it grew and then... stopped. Zeep didn't feel rage building. He was a little surprised, He was still in a curious mood. He replied to his master, "Zeep was once a slave, he was bought by man like you, the man took him here." Zeep stood up, he was taller than his master. He looked down at him. "What is Zeep doing here?"

OOC:Zeep's emotional trauma will give him extreme mood swings, he has a large affinity to the force when he's angry. I'm hoping that as the rp goes on, he starts to use his anger as a weapon and control it.
 
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"you pathetic creature"Tahn said as he pulled the huge wookie down, so that they would be face to face with each other.

"you are here to get stronger, so that you will make your enemies fear you, and I shall be you trainer, and that is why you will always address me as master you understand?"Tahn said in an angry, and disgusted tone.
 

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This made Zeep mad. When he was a slave, his master had said things like this to him all the time. He hated the word "master" too. His anger rose, and rose, and he felt like he was ready to explode. He felt that unknown force flowing through him again, he roared and stood up, he felt that force flow through his arm as he swung his fist towards his master. "Zeep doesnt need a master!"
 

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Tahn ducked the punch, and then used force push to knock his apprentice toward the wall, gladely behind this room was the training ground, and by doing that Tahn saved some time.Yeah he probably knew that the walls were going to get breached.

"you want these powers? you can have it as well"Tahn said in a high voice to his apprentice.
 

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Zeep heard cracks as he slammed through the wall, what had his master done? It didn't matter to him, nothing mattered to him, not the broken bones, not his master's powers, he had but one thought in his mind kill kill kill That unknown force he felt was stronger than ever. He felt like he could control it. He flung at his master in a crude but powerful push and then charged toward his master.
 

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Tahn was pushed, but he then landed on his feet, and quickly activated his lightsaber aiming it toward his apprentice, to make sure that he wont charge in further toward him

"not bad, it seems that you have finally learned how to use your anger"
 

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Zeep stared at the beam in front of him. He figured it would hurt bad. His anger almost made him charge but self-preservation won. He said "Use anger how? You mean the powerthrow?" Most would think Zeep was a dumb ox, he was, except he learned fast, he had learned as a slave, if you dont learn, you get whipped.
 

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"yeah the power throw, now I would like you to use the force within you to push me the same way I pushed you, remember to use your hatred, and anger toward me to do that, and remember you must stay focused as well"
 

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Zeep considered this, he thought about how his former master whipped him, he thought about this master calling him pathetic. His anger grew, He tried to control it this time, he tried to funnel it into his fist but instead it just flew in all directions with little force, Zeep was angry at his failure, and he was able to focus his anger this time, he funneled it down to his fist and he sent it out in a blast towards his master.
 

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Tahn was force pushed back, but gladely he landed on his.He then looked at the distance, and well it seemed that the wookie was able use his angry probably at last.

"you see how strong the powers I am teaching you are?I can teach you more, but first you should swear your allegiance to the dark jedi of the Bogan"
 
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"The bogan?" Zeep asked, this word seemed odd to him. He tried to piece things together but he couldn't, "What are the dark jedi of the bogan?"
 

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"We are a faction of special people, just like you, and me.who can manipulate the force through our hatred, and anger to gain access to strong powers.Powers that can punish all those who stands in our way, that why you were brought here in the first place, to join us.So what do you say will you join us?"
 

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Zeep thought about what this meant. A life of power, he might even have his own slaves. He smiled; it was a smile that showed all of his sharp teeth, it grew wider and he roared. "Sounds better than slave. Zeep will."
 

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"good, now I want you to go to the next room where the archeives are located, there you shall learn about our code, what does it mean, and our history"Tahn spoke in a deep, and emotionless tone.

"go now follow your instincts, and do not disappoint me"
 

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Zeep was tired, he had spent hours in the archives. Zeep read slow and didn't know many words because he had never been properly taught. He returned to his master and said "Bogan Code is No peace, only suffering.No knowledge, only instinct.No serenity, only passion.No harmony, only chaos.No life, only death. We were once Jeeedai, and were nice, then we were oospiion, we found power on planet, we helped war, we want to destroy the jeeedai."


OOC:jeeedai and oospiion are Zeep's pronuciation of jedi and ospion, he hasn't heard of them before so he guessed on the pronuciation.
 

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"good, very good indeed now I would like you to explain to me what did the code mean to you"
 
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