Byss Expansion League

Ols

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In the state it is, this faction is NOT going to be approved. I've suggested some things to work on and you've not really done much about them.

Add to the fact that deep core planets like Byss are out of use, you'll have to pick another world.
 

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are you the faction mod no. (not trying to be rude)
 

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are you the faction mod no. (not trying to be rude)
That would be Grim. Ols is just an RP moderator. However, what he says would be similar to what any other moderator would say, more or less.
 

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i am not trying to be rude or negative or anything. i am actually happy.
all i am saying is that mayby Grim will approve it but untill he tells me other wise i will stay with this. (actually i lied i will go with Ols suggestions i am just to lazy to do it right now)
 

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i am not trying to be rude or negative or anything. i am actually happy.
all i am saying is that mayby Grim will approve it but untill he tells me other wise i will stay with this. (actually i lied i will go with Ols suggestions i am just to lazy to do it right now)

You make one Admin mad, you make them all mad. Just by the general way you're acting and the things you are writing and refusing to edit, makes everyone think you refuse to follow directions. That doesn't make a good member.
 

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well i am actually doing this and a science project at the same time so i really can't do anything lengthy right now but i promise i will edit it tomorrow
 

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are you the faction mod no. (not trying to be rude)

Right for starters, that's rude regardless of you saying "not trying to be rude". If I said "not trying to be rude, but you're a total moron" it's still rude, so try and refrain from saying stuff like that in future.

Whilst it is true Boli(Grim) and Enishi are the faction admins, all of the admins can help you, which is what I'm trying to do. I took the time to go through you're ideas for the faction and explain what you needed to do, and for the most part you've not changed them. And I may not be a faction admin, but I am an RP admin, without erring on the side of hubris, I know better than many members what is needed for an acceptable faction, and indeed a good faction (I run an Independent and Main faction myself, too). As such I know for a fact that this faction will never be approved the way it is, I've given you some areas you want to improve on, and Boli will probably find a lot more than I have. You don't have to listen to me, but odds are it'll get approved quicker if you look at the areas I've mentioned before PMing Boli 20 times asking him to look at the faction.
 

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I am going to change them I was just doing a project yesterday so I didn't have time. Thanks for the suggestions by the way.
 

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I am going to change them I was just doing a project yesterday so I didn't have time. Thanks for the suggestions by the way.

Are you now capable of fixing up your faction?
 

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Now you're army is teeny weeneh. 70,000 people in the army out of a total planetary poulation of, what, somewhere in the billions? That's ridiclous, and slightly lol-worthy. The US has an army in the hundred thousands, and we're a country, not a planet.

And yeah, Sin was trolling you.

You have very very little background info, and if you want to make another big player in the Story line (comparable to Republic and Alsakans), you might want to wait awhile, get some more xp, and ask an Admin. Just IMO.

Somehow, I don't think this will be approved.
 
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Now you're army is teeny weeneh. 70,000 people in the army out of a total planetary poulation of, what, somewhere in the billions? That's ridiclous, and slightly lol-worthy. The US has an army in the hundred thousands, and we're a country, not a planet.

And yeah, Sin was trolling you.

You have very very little background info, and if you want to make another big player in the Story line (comparable to Republic and Alsakans), you might want to wait awhile, get some more xp, and ask an Admin. Just IMO.

Somehow, I don't think this will be approved.

Army size doesn't really seem to matter anyways as there are just about no land battles. Therefore, there are no stats for army size in either the Republic or Alsakan sub-forums.

I do agree this will need a lot of work to get approved.
 

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Now you're army is teeny weeneh. 70,000 people in the army out of a total planetary poulation of, what, somewhere in the billions? That's ridiclous, and slightly lol-worthy. The US has an army in the hundred thousands, and we're a country, not a planet.

Real world logistics don't work in SW. And there's no sure numbers for the popualtion of Byss. And the Republic's GAR in the Clone Waes was 1.2 million soldiers at it's height, if we used real world logistics, then the Republic army would be in the billions, which would be ridiculous.
 

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Real world logistics don't work in SW. And there's no sure numbers for the popualtion of Byss. And the Republic's GAR in the Clone Waes was 1.2 million soldiers at it's height, if we used real world logistics, then the Republic army would be in the billions, which would be ridiculous.

If the Republic army was merely 1.2 million, perhaps the limiting factor was equipment or simply amount of clones. For a planet with a militia of normal people, perhaps the numbers wouldn't be so limited. Also, the militia might not be as well equipped as the clones and it might be cheaper.
 

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If the Republic army was merely 1.2 million, perhaps the limiting factor was equipment or simply amount of clones. For a planet with a militia of normal people, perhaps the numbers wouldn't be so limited. Also, the militia might not be as well equipped as the clones and it might be cheaper.
Nope, in SW they really just do not have all that many soldiers. It is just how the SW galaxy works. Also, I will join on the promise that i can be the lowest available rank.
 
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