Character Feedback: Burc'ya Dar Skiarta

[Ender]

Hey, I stole this idea from HK2E.

Jaller Vetor

Aaron Kipper

Jard Carrick

NOTE: Only included characters I've actually RPed as in the Republic.

 

[HK-2E]

Hey, I stole this idea from HK2E.

Jaller Vetor

Aaron Kipper

Jard Carrick

NOTE: Only included characters I've actually RPed as in the Republic.

:CFuu

 

[Ender]

:CCry2

I'm sorry, would you like a hug?

 

[HK-2E]

No I'm good...

:CIsee

 

[Ender]

It's something I ask everybody xD I never expect a yes.

 

[HK-2E]

I think you play the slut out pretty well. I really wish there was a more provocative picture on the profile. LOL

 

[Ender]

Yes, I believe I do. Kinda suprised myself in doing so, because...well I'm a dude. A very clean dude.

 

[Brand]

With all of your characters you could really do to check for grammar and spelling, it makes a much more pleasant read through. You could expand on each's profile history and personality significantly, especially Jaller's, and flesh them out so we get to know the character themselves better. Details and funny quirks are what making reading profiles fun, and I know as a writer myself it has helped me to better understand how I want to make my character act and how to play him well and with skill. :)

 

[Ender]

Hm...Ok!

 

[Dmitri]

Instead of pestering, please just allow people to post in the profiles themselves.

 

[Gambler]

Instead of pestering, please just allow people to post in the profiles themselves.

Therein lies the problem. People neglect to read the majority of characters, only taking the time to bother when a friend of theirs posts one. This neglect disheartens those who are truly seeking literary criticism, a point that isn't helped when another individual tells that person to post the character as fan fiction is he or she wants literary criticism.

 

[Dmitri]

Therein lies the problem. People neglect to read the majority of characters, only taking the time to bother when a friend of theirs posts one. This neglect disheartens those who are truly seeking literary criticism, a point that isn't helped when another individual tells that person to post the character as fan fiction is he or she wants literary criticism.

True. Once in a while I'll go look at profiles but I don't have the time to do them all.

 

[Zen]

Therein lies the problem. People neglect to read the majority of characters, only taking the time to bother when a friend of theirs posts one. This neglect disheartens those who are truly seeking literary criticism, a point that isn't helped when another individual tells that person to post the character as fan fiction is he or she wants literary criticism.

Thank you my dear friend.

 

[Empress]

Ima move this to the rp ooc as to not clutter up the Republic boards.

 

[Samara]

Therein lies the problem. People neglect to read the majority of characters, only taking the time to bother when a friend of theirs posts one. This neglect disheartens those who are truly seeking literary criticism, a point that isn't helped when another individual tells that person to post the character as fan fiction is he or she wants literary criticism.

Very true, its hard to get any feedback at all

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Do you guys have suggestions for improving that? I ask because we have these threads a lot, where we beat up on a specific issue, but we always just circle around it and don't hone in on any sort of specific solution.

Any suggestions?

 

[HK-2E]

Make a rule that if you look at a character topic, you have to post actual constructive criticism it.

:CSly

 

[Zen]

Make a rule that if you look at a character topic, you have to post actual constructive criticism it.

:CSly

That's always been a Rule, to Post in the profile, Your looking to give constructive criticism not hurtful but helpful. It's always been a rule.

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Make a rule that if you look at a character topic, you have to post actual constructive criticism it.

:CSly

I'm sure you're being sarcastic, but, if not, that's not enforceable.

 

[Horizon]

Very true, its hard to get any feedback at all

I sure hoped I helped ;-;