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NAME: Niva Fleha
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Jedi Master
SPECIES: Corelian
AGE: 30
GENDER: female
HEIGHT: 5’2"
WEIGHT: 90
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Light Brown
SKIN: Consult picture
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: none
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes

Think KOTOR
Base Skills 10=average
STRENGTH: 10
DEXTERITY: 12
CONSTITUTION: 15
INTELLIGENCE: 17
WISDOM: 17
CHARISMA: 15

FORCE POWERS:
Force push/telekinesis
Force persuasion
Force Healing
Breath control
Force Cloak
Force Protection
Force Deflection
Force Absorption
Force Listening
Force Meld
Force Sight
Force Sense
*Precognition
**Battle Precognition

SKILLS:
Computer Hacking.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Niman (fluent)

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+Not afraid to experiment
+
-Occasionally attacks allies on accident in her excitement.
-

GEAR:
1 re-breather
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1 Comm unit
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1 Datapad
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2 Lightsabers (Color undecided)
1 Holocron containing the copied consciousness of Nuka Methoataske.
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SHIP:
none

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Niva is a maternal figure with a bit of flare. One second she’ll be comforting a lost soul, the next she’ll be neutralizing terrorists. She cares for many of the padawans around the temple, taking on several youngling classes in addition to the high roster of personal padawans she maintains.

BIOGRAPHY:
Niva was raised in the temple, but unlike some of the other students, she retained the flare that has made the corellians famous galaxy over. She prefers the loud kaboom type attacks over the more staelthy types, but has been known to use them in a pinch. She occasionally hurts her allies in battle, but she always feels bad about it and immediately apologizes.

KILLS:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE PLAYS:
 
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Did Nuka die or something? Also why is she 20? That seems a bit low for a jedi master; most being in their thirties before becoming one. Why again did both of your characters end up being 20 year old jedi masters?

Also this character's bmi is 16.5... Underweight is anything below 18.5. If you want slim and not emancipated maybe you should go with 101 lbs. That will put you at 18.5. If you don't I just want you to know that the average amount a person can carry is their own body weight; you have average strength. So you can carry ninety pounds while I can carry nearly double my weight. You'd lose against most people you fight especially with dexterity being relatively low.
 
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Did Nuka die or something? Also why is she 20? That seems a bit low for a jedi master; most being in their thirties before becoming one. Why again did both of your characters end up being 20 year old jedi masters?

Also this character's bmi is 16.5... Underweight is anything below 18.5. If you want slim and not emancipated maybe you should go with 101 lbs. That will put you at 18.5. If you don't I just want you to know that the average amount a person can carry is their own body weight; you have average strength. So you can carry ninety pounds while I can carry nearly double my weight. You'd lose against most people you fight especially with dexterity being relatively low.

this is a carbon copy clone of Nuka, I took her profile and copied it, only changing the home planet, name, personality, background, weaknesses, and stats. So that's why both are 20 year old masters.

also, its an rp forum, **** science. and you obviously haven't lived in california if you think 90 is emaciated ((emancipated is when you free slaves))
 

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Emancipated is also when you leave your parents and a lot of those guys are really skinny so that's what I'm saying. Also with how tall your character is, you are really skinny. We also cannot "**** science" due to the fact we still use science despite this being an rp forum. Not everything can be detached from reality or canon here...

All I am saying is that as a Jedi Master you won't be able to take on most of your students in lightsaber combat. While you may be a master, you are probably no where near strong enough, or fast enough to take them on. You'd be owned by a Padawan like mine; though he is fully trained.

I recommend maybe changing the age to about thirty and/or upping the weight to about 101 lbs.
 

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I hate to say this but the carbon copy thing is little...cheap.
 

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Oh thank god, Horizon I was afraid I was going to have to say it.

:bitchez
 

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Link gonna be a Jedi Knight soon at age 13. SO Mrnmm. But having a master at age 21. Or 30. Is rather rare and would be quinine and great to rp with.
 

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Well Zen, I never actually agreed with the under age thing... It's like experience was thrown out the window with advancements in the Jedi Order. Also still the weight thing? You will be completely destroyed if you fight someone. Which is sad and mildly pathetic..
 

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Emancipated is also when you leave your parents and a lot of those guys are really skinny so that's what I'm saying. Also with how tall your character is, you are really skinny. We also cannot "**** science" due to the fact we still use science despite this being an rp forum. Not everything can be detached from reality or canon here...

All I am saying is that as a Jedi Master you won't be able to take on most of your students in lightsaber combat. While you may be a master, you are probably no where near strong enough, or fast enough to take them on. You'd be owned by a Padawan like mine; though he is fully trained.

I recommend maybe changing the age to about thirty and/or upping the weight to about 101 lbs.

except if you took into account the fact that she would not need to overpwer your character merely dodge them, or the fact that she can strengthen her limbs with the force. then your padawan would be kinda toast. the height and wieght are more for a visualization than for the science. as many an admin as told you before, the stats don't matter, just the rpers skill.
 

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Well Zen, I never actually agreed with the under age thing... It's like experience was thrown out the window with advancements in the Jedi Order. Also still the weight thing? You will be completely destroyed if you fight someone. Which is sad and mildly pathetic..

Well, Link Had finally Finish his training and Mission All I need is Sreeya's Approvals and you have a 13 year old Jedi Knight. And now back to topic. Wouldn't her tiny weight be good for fast, and quick Falsifiable?
 

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Why would you carbon copy Nuka and not even make much of a showing in the profile? You could have at least TRIED a new concept or even made a good story for her.

This is kind of a poor profile for a Jedi Master.
 

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Why would you carbon copy Nuka and not even make much of a showing in the profile? You could have at least TRIED a new concept or even made a good story for her.

What does Carbon copy mean? Copy and Paste or Rip of her character?
 

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except if you took into account the fact that she would not need to overpwer your character merely dodge them, or the fact that she can strengthen her limbs with the force. then your padawan would be kinda toast. the height and wieght are more for a visualization than for the science. as many an admin as told you before, the stats don't matter, just the rpers skill.

Uh... Still no. With you dexterity compared to Jerek's, you wouldn't be able to dodge with agility. With that strength, you wouldn't be able to dodge with speed. I don't care if you can strengthen your limbs, so can mine. You would be completely owned. Also I don't have much faith that you rp skills can overthrow mine...

That's right, I called you out.
 

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I hate to say this but the carbon copy thing is little...cheap.

yeah, well, I'm still pissed my most rped charactered was gang attacked by a good 4 rpers and then murdered without my control or say right as she was really getting interesting. I could have gone another year or 2 with that character, but now, I have to rebuild! and why? cause I joined a forum against my will solely to help a fellow rper out.

so you all will excuse me if for the next couple of days I snap at your heads!

I wasn't even really participating in the thread. I checked it once a week and only read half the posts, I posted maybe 3 times in the whole thread and was one of 2 to lose a character! and not even in a cool way! I was killed while unconcious. total bs. Last time I participate in the "War". **** that, I like my characters! and PCs should never die!
 

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Keinushi all I am saying is to beef up your character... That's all.
 
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yeah, well, I'm still pissed my most rped charactered was gang attacked by a good 4 rpers and then murdered without my control or say right as she was really getting interesting. I could have gone another year or 2 with that character, but now, I have to rebuild! and why? cause I joined a forum against my will solely to help a fellow rper out.

so you all will excuse me if for the next couple of days I snap at your heads!

I wasn't even really participating in the thread. I checked it once a week and only read half the posts, I posted maybe 3 times in the whole thread and was one of 2 to lose a character! and not even in a cool way! I was killed while unconcious. total bs. Last time I participate in the "War". **** that, I like my characters! and PCs should never die!
o.0

Someone shouldn't be allowed to kill your character without direct approval from you. I'd call shenanigans and just bring your old character back. That's kinda bullshit.
 

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There is no reason a jedi master should be owned by 4 people... that is shameful! If you don't want it to happen again, strengthen your rp skills and your character!

-_- Sorry, but it has to be said... Also you joined the wrong site then, because in the rules it says a pc can die. In a war people also die. Also para, she knew the risks to the war, and they even said you could die without permission from you.
 

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Uh... Still no. With you dexterity compared to Jerek's, you wouldn't be able to dodge with agility. With that strength, you wouldn't be able to dodge with speed. I don't care if you can strengthen your limbs, so can mine. You would be completely owned. Also I don't have much faith that you rp skills can overthrow mine...

That's right, I called you out.

you know what pokakaa, please don't post on my characters. I'm already about to go rant in an admins ear about the unfairness of nuka's death, the last thing I need is to deal with your nonsense. So just go annoy someone else today.
 

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yeah, well, I'm still pissed my most rped charactered was gang attacked by a good 4 rpers and then murdered without my control or say right as she was really getting interesting. I could have gone another year or 2 with that character, but now, I have to rebuild! and why? cause I joined a forum against my will solely to help a fellow rper out.

so you all will excuse me if for the next couple of days I snap at your heads!

I wasn't even really participating in the thread. I checked it once a week and only read half the posts, I posted maybe 3 times in the whole thread and was one of 2 to lose a character! and not even in a cool way! I was killed while unconcious. total bs. Last time I participate in the "War". **** that, I like my characters! and PCs should never die!

If I am not mistaken check your VM. Mr. Crucky said Nuka is not dead and that Faction has other plans for her. And Jarek and Kesh, Sithis can rip you both to shreds if he was still alive. A Warm softy Meaner. But his dead, I was said for couple of days now I am a bit over it. Anyways. Back topic. I believe Nuka is still alive. So Don't worry. And Besides someone might I repeat Might get Nuka rescued.
 
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