Soren Tizoc

[Zenya]

Alrighty.

From what I see right now, the OOC notes should be removed. Those are not necessary to your actual character. Instead, I ask that you would elaborate with your words, so we can translate what you are saying without OOC notes.
After that, tag me, and you should be good to go after Sith leadership approves that background.

 

[Sarah]

Alrighty.

From what I see right now, the OOC notes should be removed. Those are not necessary to your actual character. Instead, I ask that you would elaborate with your words, so we can translate what you are saying without OOC notes.
After that, tag me, and you should be good to go after Sith leadership approves that background.

@Zenya I believe I have taken those out, as well as added a decent amount to the profile.

 

[Zenya]

Okay looks good.
However, the likelihood of him having a Rancor pet would be slim. He'd have to be super rich, and have tamed it at a young age.

Please choose to keep only either the double bladed saber, or the two singles.

And keep in mind, the animals can't be used for pvp~

 

[Sarah]

I wasn't going to use them for pvp, that's being a terrible owner, but can I still use the Veractyl as a mount, since it wouldn't initiate combat? (they're herbivores and strike me as more of a flight than a fight, despite their incredible size.) But I couldn't think of star wars equivalent of a monkey, then thought that someone like this would probably prefer to have the star wars equivalent of tigers (figured Nexus) I read somewhere that the powerful Sith of around this time period had some kind of glowing Rancor mounts, and figured this guy'd get a regular one because of that (Well, jungle since Felucia's closer and more safe for the Sith than Dathomir.), and would just let it sit and eat all day because of it being his favorite pet... Anyway, yeah, I'll definitely replace the Rancor if you still think that's appropriate, but is there any reason why I couldn't have a double-bladed saber and a single bladed one?

Forgot to tag you until the edit, sorry @Zenya

 

[Zenya]

Keep the rancor.
And yes, you'll have to choose between the sabers. If you want more, you can kill someone who owns one, in Pvp.