Careful on how hard you hit the tech and stuff dude. Nine times out of ten the tech already exists within Star Wars canon. I mean you -could- do it as much as you wanted, and no one would stop you - but there's mad props for laziness lol.
Well then if you want to keep that level of power, you need to real expand on the biography. Add a lot of detail to make it worth while.
Thats my opinion anyway.
After a quick look, i've decided that yes, she's horribly overpowered. You've gotta run her from Acolyte upwards, meaning learn from scratch.
At the moment she's probably on-par with Juno's skill set (a Jedi Master who i've been RPing for 7 months).
Awesome, I'm still trying to catch up on all he RP's I'm in but as soon as that's done I'll take a look at it. Would you mind PMing me the link? I like the sound of Sky Marshal. :) Will we be joining up with the Production Company?
Trakata isn't a lightsaber form, as much as a skill/move for battle. Also instead of Mastered, I think "Highly Proficient, or Proficient" is a much better word. ;)