Italicize the thoughts, and add quotation marks. Just cause they're being thought doesn't mean it's not dialogue. Add some commas to give your sentences some structure, anywhere that you are adding info, or breaks in the sentences. And add some paragraph breaks. Like I said, its really tough to read right now.
Alright, I understand. Still, you really should edit your post asap, I'm not replying until I know for sure what is speech and what is inner dialog. BTW, I'm currently posting from my phone as well.