Replied in Safe Haven. You know the name made me keep on thinking of the grey havens, you might just have given me the incentive to do another reread of LOTR. :P
Though there's no reason for it, I feel like some 'criticism of the constructive variety' would be helpful.
I've been reading the posts you and Mav have in a thread together. (He's my brother, so I'm stalking him, not you ;)).
We seem to have a similar habit of using the same words more than necessary (for you, it's 'truly,' among others that I can't remember at the moment). It'd be good to notice those competitive words and phrases and changing them once in a while.
Also, you seem to have a bad case of run-on syndrome ;)
In that thread, you seem to believe the Temple on Tython is above ground, when it is not. Also, the New Jedi Order are not above using the Force 'unnecessarily.' The New Order is very liberal. It'd be good to read upon some Archives. :)
Anyway, I really like your writing and I'm a touch jealous that you're in a personal thread with Mav and not myself (Ha! :D)
At least you're in three of my classes!
Haha, I know. I was just giving you a hard time! ^^
But yes, I agree.
However, I must say that this thread is starting out rather boring... this topic of conversation is not all that interesting. But it'll change soon enough, I'm sure. :/
Same. I just didn't turn it off after I was done eating. I get sucked in like that.
I mean, it was the Olympics, so it wasn't something too stupid. But anywho.
Haha, I know. In fact, I'm much more a noob than yourself.
But yeah, I think I'm still recovering from the profile, but anywho, on to reading that newest post.
The tv's kinda distracting me... :/
Would you like to post in reply to mine before I respond to Kiber? Lol. I wouldnt want to Jump the order, especially since we have to wait on Sizero anyways.
Yeah, I know.
wtf betch! >D
Not happy that your posts are longer than mine. Definitely not used to it. I'm gunna have to fix that. Can't be shown up by some noob. ^^