PvP A Traitor Flees OOC

[vamp]

Hello!

Making this thread so we have an OOC where we can all chime in.

So in review, the issues we had with your post (@Aurius) were:
1. The balls of fire floating around and
2. Their transformation into stone
3. Creating craters in the ground using the Force as a (I assume) Knight-level indie.

I know you said you were gonna edit, just wanted to add in that the Shapers article you sent me isn't Canon and also states that Shapers receive specialized training from an early age in the field that they're most attuned to, as judged by an expert. Idk if your PC has gone through the training, but if he didn't he wouldn't be able to channel the powers.

Tags: @Wit @Braden

 

[Aurius]

Hello!

Making this thread so we have an OOC where we can all chime in.

So in review, the issues we had with your post (@Aurius) were:
1. The balls of fire floating around and
2. Their transformation into stone
3. Creating craters in the ground using the Force as a (I assume) Knight-level indie.

I know you said you were gonna edit, just wanted to add in that the Shapers article you sent me isn't Canon and also states that Shapers receive specialized training from an early age in the field that they're most attuned to, as judged by an expert. Idk if your PC has gone through the training, but if he didn't he wouldn't be able to channel the powers.

Tags: @Wit @Braden

As I’ve mentioned, I’ve got to edit to utilize the flame as flame.

You mentioning the preferred element made me realize Gram wouldn’t even be able to modify stone, only fire.

He can block your technique in a couple other ways, or brunt it with a trick, but it’ll take me a tiny bit to edit that in. I’m sorry for the wait.

Let me edit out Marka Ragnos for posterity as he is also now non canon, sadly :/

 

[vamp]

As I’ve mentioned, I’ve got to edit to utilize the flame as flame.

You mentioning the preferred element made me realize Gram wouldn’t even be able to modify stone, only fire.

He can block your technique in a couple other ways, or brunt it with a trick, but it’ll take me a tiny bit to edit that in. I’m sorry for the wait.

Let me edit out Marka Ragnos for posterity as he is also now non canon, sadly :/

No worries man!

 

[vamp]

Did you get around to finishing up the edits? We're ready to post.

@Aurius