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Count Pyramus(Dei)

FACTION: Fulcrum

RANK: Elder Sage

SPECIES: Fay's Species

AGE: Twenty three

HEIGHT: 1.9 meters

WEIGHT: 97.988 kilograms

EYES: Gray

HAIR: Light Blonde

SKIN: Originally medium brown now pale

CREDITS: 1,000

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Pointy Ears and distinctive tattoo on his forehead.


FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

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STRENGTH: Pyramus a fully grown male, who has gone through a daily regime of physical strength. Allowing him to lift a ample amount above the average human with no assistance. Pyramus is able to exert more force through his physical blows allowing him to harm above average durability opponents but unlikely to easily knock them out at all. Pyramus is still nowhere near the strongest in physical strength compared to certain species and individuals. Trouncing a considerably physically strong human by a decent amount in pure physical strength.

DEXTERITY: Pyramus is a considerably impressive dexterous and agile being able to outpace and out react numerous opponents no matter their species . Allowing him exceptional running speed and able to keep pace and outrun some of the fastest natural humans with minimal effort. Enabling Pyramus to dodge and quickly counterattack projectiles and melee attacks a wide variety of considerably quick opponents. Pyramus can scale and past obstacles in his way controlling his body and mind to create and move and create paths to catch or lose opponents. The most considerable aspect is that of his reactions and reflexes to easily keep track and react accordingly to the fastest people and objects far outpacing what is considered average by a wide margin.

CONSTITUTION: Pyramus is able to take an average amount of punishment regarding his physical body no augmentation. Around the same area or even slightly lower than that of the standard sentient. Allowing him to keep functioning well from certain physical attacks without the usage of the force or armor. Pyramus stamina is slightly better compared to his amount of physical punishment he receive with no augmentation. Pyramus is able to not fall over or need resting from fatigue from non strenuous activity and keep a sufficient amount of stamina in multiple battles and or straining activities.

INTELLIGENCE: Pyramus is beyond prodigious in the regard of his intelligence in every area vastly superior to even those regarded to have genius level intellect. Possessing unfathomable intellectual ability, creativity, and originality, typically to a degree that is associated with the achievement of new advances in a domain of knowledge. Pyramus is unmatched and gifted with higher mental faculties such as a more vastly powerful and photographic memory, superlative calculation skills, peerless reasoning and debating skills,building and constructing new complex technology and magic,and astronomical learning capacity. Allowing him with sheer and utter ease to master foreign languages and technology, immediately create complex and unparalleled strategies and tactics,interpret and predict to the most complex situations,attacks and probabilities,with mastering untold fields including scientific or mystical in nature.

WISDOM: Pyramus has a decent standard range of wisdom considering his inexperience regarding most subjects. Through his own studying and intellect gaining a great amount of knowledge regarding various subjects such as technology and history. However he is paragon considering making good decisions and judgement. Still Pyramus is considerably young and has not truly has a decent amount of experience in matters besides the basic. As of now having around considered average wisdom among some sentient creatures.

CHARISMA: Pyramus is seen as a complete opposite of a charismatic individual for at the time. Always seen donning in a unusual set of full body armor completely covering his body with a stale and droid like modulated voice. Very poor at gaining friends sometimes and sometimes even keeping them as his nature seems boring and dull. Many have seen him as over talkative and stale as if he was truly a droid created just to speak on everything no matter how small. Unnaturally trying to correct someone in explain in his own way. Sometimes offending and annoying people who have just been acquainted or even long term acquaintances. While in his suit seen as strange,weird,intimidating and lifeless carrying no appeal because of his unseen true physical appearance by his own whim.





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Pyramus is seemingly stoic and vast intellectual who prefers to examine foes and negotiate with peace and other options rarely using conflict unless deemed no other choice. He is often intrigued by the scientific implications of a problem, so much so he goes into solving the problem to the smallest detail. Simply put "If a creature stubbed it's toe, Pyramus would study every detail of that situation down to the smallest possible detail." Pyramus is usually described by others as extremely complex individual. Aza is sometimes exceedingly caring over all not wanting and preventing anyone or anything from suffering however is hard to see due to his stoic like personality. He is mostly seen studying or reading upon various subjects and topics. With a seemingly unquenchable thirst for knowledge of everything that will ever be or has already existed.





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Dei was peacefully birthed twenty three years ago on a peaceful yet unknown outer rim planet. Born from his millennium old mother who was described as pure angelic beauty in body,mind and spirit appearing no older than twenty. His mother's teaching and wisdom of the intensely deep connection the two shared with the force with her awe inspiring teaching and belief of peace,harmony and balance. Seeing his unparalleled natural mental power and intelligence also love for knowledge his mother asked him if Dei likes the nickname "The Count."Dei has no knowledge of his father or if he even had one as not once spoken with his mother about the topic. Up until the age of three he lived a peaceful life with his mother and a droid named Pyra built by his mother but considered no different from family. Everyday he would listen and watch his mother highly regarding her teaching and lessons. Day in and day out he would help with farming and other chores a quite simple life in a miniature lush valley and a peaceful simple home.

The next day of officially of when Dei reached the age of three a metamorphic fault line event occurred. Dei awoke with a sense of disturbance with no physical sight of his mother or Pyra around the home. Suddenly Dei would feel a dark presence as a large object would overshadow the home and revealed to be a small black carrier like ship landing near the front of the home. A small stream of various soldiers would flood out in a hurry forming a badly shaped line to the door. Dei would view the events from an open window from inside the home however feeling the sense of a different pathway to not flee or act. Suddenly two beings would step out from the black ship one clothed in pitch black robes and metallic armor and the other a simple light tan robe and gown. The two robed beings would turn to each other and the black robed one would quietly speak "This child is the second connection we felt...just as the other one such potential and sheer power he will serve as much use...." The one dressed in light tan did a subtle nod at the black robe as they proceed to walk into the house and straight for him. Dei planned out an escape going through a multitude of ideas in an instant in his head but yet again felt the sense to stay. Finally the two quickly reached him both carrying a dark presence the one in light tan spoke "It seems we meet child..there was an incident with your mother and I don't foresee her to ever return..but do not worry we came to help further your teaching and to care for you in her place as she has insisted your potential is quite strong." He puts his hand out with a notion for Dei to follow them back to the ship and leave. Dei understood the situation with the attempted deceit even at this premature age but still felt the strong sense to listen and go with the two. Dei quickly nods his head and slowly begins to follow the two until he is on board the ship. The interior of the ship had limited space and had a worn out and damaged look to it with the creatures who acted as servants intensely staring at Dei. The ship uplifts from the ground and begins to rapidly ascend up into the air with the rear entrance slowly closing. Dei catches in instant of an vast area completely littered with destroyed vehicles and large amount of stunned and unconsciousness armed men similar to the ones inboard. Dei instantly feels a strong presence of his mother in that area that resembles a full scale war. Dei staggers a bit from the intense overwhelming suddenness of not being with his mother and her unknown fate and the same for Azasurs. Dei had nothing but utter limitless love for his mother that can not even be bound by concepts as his life is now seemingly shattered without her. However he keeps himself calm and collected going against his intended age emotion and thoughts. The ship is finally closed and makes it way out of the planet's atmosphere and into hyper space reaching Ziost.

Once the ship reached Ziost Dei spent the next ten years of his earthly existence upon that world with them ruling at the start that Dei dons a full armor suit constantly to hide his meager appearance. Each day having to go through and complete relentless and malicious training upon his body and mind . On his own whim he sought or not even tried to go around these daily procedures doing nothing to change,escape or manipulate it in the slightest. He would do exactly as expected in the training intense survival, body destruction and improvement training, relentless training in the ways of the darks side of the force and the reconstruction of his mind. Dei however did manipulate his way around the mental configurations of the dark side and outwardly expressed as if it had full effect his mind however mostly un faltered by the darkness. Due to his own inclination Dei forcefully considerably limited his intelligence and potential regularly for unknown reasons to even himself. Any other time Dei spent in unrestrained studying and building his knowledge in all fields and regards of the dark side and from what he was able to find of the light or just plain anything. Not a single moment went by where he could not feel the connection with his mother always thinking of her and her teachings. Finally the day came where Dei felt the sense that it was time to end his time with the darksiders. At the same time the Sith Lords upon the planet felt his training was near complete showing inconceivable force abilities and skill. The lords decided that he would finally proceed to act upon the field and in the forces as a major factor. Utilizing his own unhindered intellect he was able to manipulate and plan accordingly the entirely of the lords for his own escape. Through an elaborate, complex setup and plan he was able to escape from the darkside ridden planet and the Sith Lords with an ship full.

With no doubt in his deep connection with the force in his mother he felt the pull to an outer rim planet to continue his story. Dei made his way to the planet of Letritor feeling a large connection constructing his new suit with a combination of sith technology and mystical elements before landing. He steps out donning the newly constructed suit. Following his own senses he is lead into an establishment of a assortment of force sensitives. The group took no heed of his sith like appearance as Dei openly showed his inner being with the group seeing such a pure unhindered connection . Dei took the time to speak with the group's main members about his philosophies and beliefs consonantly bringing up his mother in high respect. Dei and the group's thoughts and ideas reflected each others in similarity. With Dei stating his name as "Count Pyramus" and with clear mind and a strong sense decided upon joining the group.






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  1. Ja'sut-A form created and only know and utilized/perfected by Pyramus which uses keen intelligence to use the severely complex form by a combination of different altered forms to adapt,overwhelm and defend with creativity . The form revolves around adapting and countering an opponent while exposing their own weaknesses while incorporating force abilities. The user can utilize multiple light sabers in combat switching it up mid combat without hesitation no matter the light saber type dual or single. The form allows the user take on multiple enemies or overwhelm and subdue one. Enabling the user to defend and redirect from melee and projectile fire to perform and to not lessen their own counterattack. The user can attack from different sides and angles and to be used to evade for near total defensive coverage at the expense of some to a little energy. Giving the user multiple choices as to kill,disarm or use more diplomatic options to control the combat. Switching constantly on whim and revolving to powerful ,sweeping,precise or fasts blows to the point where it can all be incorporated into one or more attack. With the same being done activating and reactivating blades while in combat to bypass enemy defenses and deceive an opponent into over extending utilizing deception and high level tactics while some greater force control. While using every environmental strategic advantage against opponents to attack vital areas. The most powerful of users with extreme precision control can utilize their telekinetic abilities to guide and throw their saber with mid air corrections or simply allow the saber to hover and attack surprising enemies. Complying with both sides of the force dark and light in balance allowing only those with balance to use this form, even than its considerably overwhelming difficult to learn and a greater magnitude higher to master.
  2. Soresu
  3. Djem So







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  • Immeasurable unmatched intellect beyond reasoning allowing him various and limitless applications such as photographic memory, instant unfathomable calculations, extensive reasoning,debating,vast technological and magic abilties,superlative probabilities,eidetic memory,investigation,multilingualism,expeditious learning,tactical/analytic,incomparable mental abilties and etc...
  • Sheer Mental/Physic Domination
  • Nigh quintessential focus and concentration in and out of combat situations
  • A boundless and severely powerful connection with the force.
  • Master at hand to hand combat revolves around martial arts,disarming,evasion and pressure points.
  • Experienced/Gifted sword user
  • Adaptive
  • Acrobatic
  • Athletic







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  • +Intelligence/Unrivaled perfected mental power
  • +Acrobatic
  • +Expert Sword user and hand to hand combatant
  • +Unhindered force connection potential/mastered force abilities
  • -Extremely Cautious
  • -Lazy
  • -Overthinking
  • -Average to less natural durability
  • - Sometimes thinking instead of feeling
  • -Less blissful seeing more faults in the world





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Dei Tranquility:

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NAME: Dei Tranquility
TYPE: Light Saber

SPECIFICATIONS:




    • Single end beam emitter
    • Grip modifications hidden sensors discharging energy to harm and disable unauthorized wielders
    • Blade power Adjustment
    • Force Activated
    • Constructed with phrik and corostis at the grip and emitter end


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Twin's Harony & Twin's Order:
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NAME: Twin's Harmony & Twin's Order
TYPE: Light Saber

SPECIFICATIONS:
  • Both are Identical and can only differentiated by force sense.
  • Dual end beam emitters
  • Grip modifications hidden sensors discharging energy to harm and disable unauthorized wielders
  • Dual-phased
  • Interlocking hilt
  • Blade power adjustment
  • White with black core crystals
  • Durasteel
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Templates help attributed to Fen Vel and M4TT

 
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The aurebesh font is a nice touch for headers but the font for the main text is a bit too hard on the eyes, I didn't get very far before I had to stop reading.
 

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The aurebesh font is a nice touch for headers but the font for the main text is a bit too hard on the eyes, I didn't get very far before I had to stop reading.

I knew that was going to be a problem but I was too l lazy to change it. I'll change up the front in the long explain nations and such. Thanks for the input
 

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Vis'Caar

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BASIC INFORMATION

ALIAS

The Arbiter
AFFILIATION
[w.i.p]
RANK
[w.i.p]

AGE

32
SPECIES
Kaleesh

GENDER
Male
HEIGHT
2.3136m
WEIGHT
163.046kg
BUILD
Lean, muscular

HAIR COLOR

N/A
EYE COLOR
Yellow
FORCE SENSITIVE??
No
FINANCES

Started:
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1,000
Closing:
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1,000

DROIDS:
[W.i.P]

STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSES


SKILLS



EQUIPMENT & INVENTORY


PRIMARY WEAPON(S)

B

SECONDARY WEAPON(S)
P

ARMOR(S)
M

TRANSPORTATION
S

MISCELLANEOUS
F

BASE OF OPERATIONS / HOME / SAFEHOUSES:
M


BIOGRAPHY

Early Life

More




PERSONALITY

Personality
ROLEPLAYS


 
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"Longeye" Kaleesh Combat Precision Weapon

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TYPE: Precision Rifle
SIZE: 1.05m/5.2kg
COMPOSITION: Duraplast,Durasteel,EM-Cased
RANGE: Max of 800m
AMMUNITION: Six shots without recharge


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"Unceasing" Kaleesh Heavy Mechanized Weapon
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"Unceasing" Kaleesh Heavy Mechanized Weapon
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