Alexis Nonomyth

[HK-2E]

I telepathy, how your capable enter minds and forms blocks so other force users, Ic Magicians sorcerers dragon raiders, will not get in my Or the Users, Is quite related to the Starwars..

I am quite confused, but okay... I'll leave you with this note: A telepathy user in Star Wars generally cannot read a full thought in entirety regardless of if the target is shielding themselves or not.

Edit: Oh and eragon and star wars have two very different sources of telepathy, and just because they both have telepathy, does not make it logical to use one to explain the other.

 

[Demiurge]

For the record, classic telepathy (mind reading, thought sending, etc) is actually quite common in the EU, specifically the novels. Some games, like KotOR II also show communicative telepathy represented as normal.

 

[Horizon]

For the record, classic telepathy (mind reading, thought sending, etc) is actually quite common in the EU, specifically the novels. Some games, like KotOR II also show communicative telepathy represented as normal.

This I am familiar with. But rarely will you see someone actually playing a game of tuggle war in one another's minds during combat or anything usually because neither side will budge.

Classic telepathy is fine though lol

 

[Zen]

I am quite confused, but okay... I'll leave you with this note: A telepathy user in Star Wars generally cannot read a full thought in entirety regardless of if the target is shielding themselves or not.

Edit: Oh and eragon and star wars have two very different sources of telepathy, and just because they both have telepathy, does not make it logical to use one to explain the other.

You misunderstand. I In starwars telepathy, can be spoken with in thoughts though Lightyears away, In Eragon leagues if lucky. Before being drained, In Starwars a Basic telepathy does not drain over the course of speaking in telepathy in lightyears away for a master, I have read the book about eragon and reading the Second one. Thank you very much for trying show something, And I am not plotting anything. But I am happy your ingested now stop. Spamming my bloody profile.

 

[Horizon]

You misunderstand. I In starwars telepathy, can be spoken with in thoughts though Lightyears away, In Eragon leagues if lucky. Before being drained, In Starwars a Basic telepathy does not drain over the course of speaking in telepathy in lightyears away for a master, I have read the book about eragon and reading the Second one. Thank you very much for trying show something, And I am not plotting anything. But I am happy your ingested now stop. Spamming my bloody profile.

That's a good one.

 

[Zen]

That's a good one.

I meant Cruises. Or wondering. Anyways. Ru's Female Swordsman is capable of reading thoughts I believe.

 

[Zen]

Updates:

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And Personality update.

 

[Gambler]

I've been noticing that you have developed a tendency to turn simple thoughts into complex, overtly long things. I know that English isn't your first language, but I think shortening your sentences, and the thoughts they express, would do wonders for your writing. You know how, in Russian, a single thought is expressed at a time, leaving room for the reader to decide what was said in context? English is very much the same in that respect. I think you are making the sentences run-ons because that is the way you think (it's a technique called "stream of consciousness," actually), but it makes your writing dreadfully hard to comprehend at a glance.

I suggest adding more commas in periods. Normally it is terrible advice to tell someone to write as they would talk, adding commas where they would take a breath, but in your case I think it might be helpful. A lot of your commas (you've improved quite a bit with your periods though) seem to be slapped in random places at times, awkwardly breaking up a phrase in a way that can make it difficult to understand.

 

[Zen]

I've been noticing that you have developed a tendency to turn simple thoughts into complex, overtly long things. I know that English isn't your first language, but I think shortening your sentences, and the thoughts they express, would do wonders for your writing. You know how, in Russian, a single thought is expressed at a time, leaving room for the reader to decide what was said in context? English is very much the same in that respect. I think you are making the sentences run-ons because that is the way you think (it's a technique called "stream of consciousness," actually), but it makes your writing dreadfully hard to comprehend at a glance.

I suggest adding more commas in periods. Normally it is terrible advice to tell someone to write as they would talk, adding commas where they would take a breath, but in your case I think it might be helpful. A lot of your commas (you've improved quite a bit with your periods though) seem to be slapped in random places at times, awkwardly breaking up a phrase in a way that can make it difficult to understand.

Thanks, Dragon. I'll see to it, once I get the time to fix the history, with some Commas. Thank you for helping and advising as well as suggesting. Thanks, I'll see to it on my spare time.