Amun Kaito

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NAME: Amun Kaito
FACTION: The sith empire
RANK: Acolyte
Class: Sith Inquisitor
SPECIES: Kaleesh
AGE: 16
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5"11
WEIGHT: 165 lbs
EYES: Red
HAIR: None
SKIN: Crimson
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Look at the picture
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 6/10
DEXTERITY: 7/10
CONSTITUTION: 6/10
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10
WISDOM: 4/10
CHARISMA: 3/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force push- Beginner
Force Drain life- Beginner
Force Shock- Beginner
Battle meditation- Beginner

SKILLS:
Amun at a young age was taught a bit of how the force works and some powers and he was taught a little bit of the Ataru form by a sith who had crash landed on the planet. and while being sent to the sith academy Amun accidently discovered he had The ability called battle meditation.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Ataru- Beginner level

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Amun is very strong against seduction and temptation and can resist them very easily but he is very weak to loss and abandonment and will get very angry if ither of the two happen.

GEAR:
A Lightsaber with a red crystal that looks like
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The cloak and mask shown above and all the gear shown in the photo on top.

SHIP: None

DROIDS: None

PETS: None


PERSONALITY: Amun is a very laid back and "go with the flow" kind of person. Although, during battles he has no tolorence for jokes or funny buisness since he likes to get the job done through any means. Amun sometimes seams like he is emotionless, Like when he is in battle he will cut down the enemies with no remorse or regret. He will even cut down fellow soldiers and sith if they get in his way. He is also very forgetful and can forget things very easily so he has to set his mind on one thing and not get distracted.

Amun also is very interested in the stories of Darth Revan and Malak and is now trying to find their secrets and Force Techniques so he can one day become the Emperor. He is also Impatient and can wait only a little while for certain things. Then he starts getting annoying. And starts asking questions and starting random conversations. He is also very strategic. He can come up with strategies in a short amount of time. Although they mostly include his Battle meditation


BIOGRAPHY:
It all started at 1005 ABY when the Galaxy was on the brink of another war. Amun was 10 and was at his home on Tatoine doing work and chores. When a ship landed near his house. He usually gets no visitors so Amun grew suspicous and approached the ship where he felt a dark and evil prescence surrond him and a Man walked out who was dressed in Dark armor and Looked at the boy and told him he was Force Sensitive and he was going to Bring him in to be a sith. But his parents saw this Dark figure and walked towards him and asked who he was but before they got an answer they were on the ground dead after being choked. Amun was now very scared and shocked and he started backing away but before he could leave the figure grabbed him and took him to his ship and took him to Korriban where he was trained as a padawan.

The year was now 1011 ABY war was not just a posability any more. It was a reality and Amun had been training as a Youngling and was now becoming an Acolyte and he helped Start the war with the first attack where he learned he had the ability known as Battle meditation. But soon he realised he wasn't as strong as he thought he was. While he was on his ship, Preforming his battle meditation and Looking into the battle his ship was shot by a Alliance cruiser and he crashed into The planet below where he was imprisoned for 6 months. Then there was a slash and screams and A fellow sith ran into the prison and found Amun chained up and he broke him out and brought him to his ship where Amun ate and drank as much as he could and told about how he was imprisoned and what happened. He was then taken back to Korriban where he had to get use to everything again and remember all the locations and ruins. After about another month Amun got used to the temple again and started training as a Sith acolyte again.
KILLS: None. Yet :cool:

BOUNTIES COLLECTED: None

DUELING RING MATCHES: None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: none

ROLE-PLAYS: None

Feed back is much appreciated :)
 
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Horizon

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This is need of an entire re-write.

No stasis and being held up for a couple hundred years and no Darth Krayt.

We are wayyy past that time frame.


Sweet profile. O.o

Negative.
 

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This is need of an entire re-write.

No stasis and being held up for a couple hundred years and no Darth Krayt.

We are wayyy past that time frame.




Negative.

Alright ^_^

Btw you don't have to be so mean. You could have just said "Hey sorry but the time line in your profile is a bit wrong" Instead you decided to be a Jerk and Tell me my bio sucked :|
 
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Alright ^_^

Btw you don't have to be so mean. You could have just said "Hey sorry but the time line in your profile is a bit wrong" Instead you decided to be a Jerk and Tell me my bio sucked :|

Bah, don't pay attention to Horizon. He's what we call Tough Love, with constructive criticism to the most honest degree. You'll get used to it eventually :D

Anyways, I don't know how it looked before, but it looks alright now. Only thing that really stands out is an Acolyte using Battle Meditation, but you said he was less powerful than he thought, and he's now at the bottom of the totem pole again. Looking forward to seeing the character in the RP =)
 

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Bah, don't pay attention to Horizon. He's what we call Tough Love, with constructive criticism to the most honest degree. You'll get used to it eventually :D

<3
 
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