Carving out the emotions...(All'ah Fox'tra's training)

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Rish stood near a public transport that sat within a small camp not too far from the temple. He was awaiting his new apprentice All'ah Fox'tra.
Today he would show Fox'tra the true way a bogan should train their acolytes...
 

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All'ah was ready. If a trained assassin jumped out from behind the seat infront of him, All'ah could probably kill him. Atleast thats what his emotions told him. He energized and the adreniline, magnitized by the Force was pulsing in his viens. He has been waiting 12 years for this glorified moment. The moment inwhich the training he will recive from his dark master will begin.

He realized he must calm himself. If he seemed to excited, his new master would think he was weak. All'ah could not let this happen. For one of the first times in his life he used a simple meditation they taught the children who were preparing to, hopefully, be an apprentice. All'ah, or Al as he prefered, never used the meditation unless the teacher required it. Even then, he would usually fake it. Standing still and being quiet was not something Al was very good at. He saw it as something your enemy would think you were weak because. Now though, he was alone on the transport, with the exception of the driver and two passengers all the way in the back. He would allow himself to meditate this once, to calm himself, so his new master wouldn't think badly of him.

He meditated for roughly for ten minutes until the transport stopped at a small camp where his new master supposedly was waiting. He was still excited, but he had calmed himself enough, hopefully. He climbed off the transport and walked over to a hooded Kel-Dor. Al sensed that he was the Dark Jedi who chose to train Al. He bowed. "Hello, Master. I am All'ah Fox'tra, also known as just Al. You are Crusader Rish Koor, are you not?"
 
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Rish extended his arms with a pair of clothing within his hands. the outfit was essentially a stripped-down version of a basic combat uniform. The light gear consisted of his basic uniform pants with wraps covering the arms and gut, but with the exception of straps holding on the arm-wraps, the chest and upper back were left bare with an exception of a strap going across the chest allowing strap anything for quick use...

Rish stepped aboard the empty transport and sat down inside the piolts seat.
Punching in the coordinates the computer responded with a warning of the planet they were traveling to be dangerous and unsettled.
Rish knew very well the dangers of this planet. He waved his student to take a seat within the transport. He wasint going to wait all day...
 

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Al climbed into the second transport where his master was now sitting. Many thoughts raced through his head. Why wasn't he talking? Could he talk Basic? What is he couldn't understand Al? This could be a problem. Al asked him a question this time, prompting an answer. "Where are we going, Master?"
 

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The transport lifted off with ease and they shot off into the endless place they called the Galaxy. It would not take them long to get there. Possibly a couple hours. But hearing his students question he only pointed his finger torwards a small screen with the small words encrypted "Felucia"...

This jungle covered planet was the ultimate test for his student.
Rish would not have any issue with dealing with the creatures but he also planned to use this to his advantage. Rish turned once more to his student and handed him a simple Vibroblade...
 

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Well atleast he understood me. Al thought.

Yes, a viroblade! Knives were what Al was best with. This was going to be fun. Then again, he didn't know exactly what he was going to be doing on...Felucia? He had never heard of Felucia. It sounded like a disease or something. Well...he would learn soon. It looked like Felucia was kind of close.
 

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A couple of hours passed on the trip to Felucia. He could tell his student was excited about his training. Yet he might not be so excited to hear his next statement...

"By the way their is no landing pad what so ever on this planet."

They had entered the atmosphere with great speed. Lights were flashing and noises were sounding. The computer gave off a warning that crashing was eminent. Rish stood up and held onto a safety bar. He griped his equipment belt and hoped for the best. The only thing he could do was turn the ship at an angle so that it would skid along the flora floor of the planet...
 

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This guy was crazy! He was Al's kind of guy. Well atleast he speaks basic.

The ship twisted and turned through the thick atmosphere. Al now got an idea of what Felucia looked like. It was a steamy jungle planet with, what looked liked, no civilization what so ever.

WHAM. The ship did a barrel roll speeding up in its descent. Al felt that wasn't on purpose. The thick atmosphere was hard on a small ship. They were only a few thousand feet from the ground. This was going to be interesting. There was a small clearing in the massive forest of plants that Al couldn't of even imagined before this. It was a bull's eye shot, but from the looks of it, the Kel Dor had very little control of the ship.

Yes, this was going to be very interesting.
 

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The small ship winded through the large flora and quickly crashed into the clearing. Upon impact Rish was thrown through the window. Immediately he turned himself into a roll and made it out without a scratch. But the natives were already already aware of their presence. most likely because of their unsound landing...
 

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The ship crashed. Koor went flying through the front window. Al hit his head on a pole infront of his seat, but used the Force to prevent himself from flying through the windsheild himself. Unfortunately, the door was blocked by a large tree, so Al had to climb out the windshield anyway.

His master was in a crouched in a defensive position, ready to strike, but he wasn't looking at Al. Suddenly Al felt it. A group of...somethings, were apporaching. He sensed they were...sentinent? Was it possible? On such a planet like this? The only two planets Al ever knew, his home planet, Lorrd, and the planet the Temple is on, Ando Prime, were snow covered balls of ice. He knew other planets could have sentinent life, but in such hostile terrain like this? He would soon find out.
 

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The creatures advanced in a circular formation around Rish Al.
They were Felucia's,sentient species that could be influenced very easily and were a force to be reckoned with aswell. All it took was some reasoning...

Rish threw off his robes and ignited his crimson lightsaber.
His body had been pushed to the limits. All the muscels on the upper part of his body were developed yet covered in the ancient tatoo,s of the bogan.
He took one step forward, torward the group yet they all backed up in fear.
Soon they bowed before Rish an Al. He raised his lightsaber and soon the creatures dismissed themselves back to the dense jungle they had crept from.


Rish quickly proceeded in an opposite direction torwards the dense the jungle that had surrounded them.

"By the way, it would be wise to put on that gear I gave you."

Rish took a small knife out of his pocket and began to sharpen his tusks.
Each swipe made them ever sharper. Rish was the type of master that wanted to inspire fear in anyway possible. Another reason why he had drawn his lightsaber earlier to frighten off the natives...
 

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The gear! Al had forgotten it in the transport, but he wouldn't go back now, not when a fight was starting. He slashed out a few of the natives that attacked. They all fell.

Then Al remembered he was supposed to be making a good impression on Rish. He could do that by listening to orders. He did a back flip to escape the oncoming attack of a club weilding native. He then summersaulted twice until he was infront of the transport. He leaped through the broken windshield and jumped over two seats to where his gear was laying. He moved quickly and got it on within two minutes.

When he was done he leaped out of the window and using the Force to put some extra push behind a flying kick into the neck of a native who had his back to Al and the transport. The neck snapped and the native died. Al looked around for more natives, but it seemed that Rish was finishing off the last one.

"You didn't let me in on any of the fun!" Al said with a grin.

EDIT:OOC:I won't be able to post anymore tonight. Sorry.
 
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"You already know much of the basics of the Force which is excellent. Also I noticed you know a form. Its lacking but you will fine tune it in your test."

The roars of different creatures filled the jungle as they traveled.
It was music to Rish as he could feel the malice of all the creatures flow into him. Even the Felucians were feeling this. It was as if they bended with the Force. But Rish snapped back into reality. His apprentice was acting as if fighting these things was actualy fun. No these things werent even worth the time. Rish stopped in the middle of a bog then turned to his student with his saber still ignited.

"To realy know that you are proficient with the blade before your test, we shall spar." Rish then assumed the Juyo form. The Ferocity form. It was by far one of the most dangerous forms. The user could channel his own darkness into the style. Then suddenly Rish used the Force to create a wave of water out of the bog to hide himself for a moment as he charged in behind it...
 
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A challenge. Not good. Rish Koor was a well trained Crusader. This was unfair, but Al was going to have to deal with it. He jumped into the air and flipped over the oncoming wave a swamp water that Rish was pushing out of the bog with the Force at Al. He landed on his feet about three meters behind the wave and Rish.

Using the force he sent a small boulder flying at the back of Rish's head. If the Kel-Dor wanted to a cheap fight, a cheap fight he will get. Al then drew his vibroblade and prepared for battle. His basic Shii-Cho style, the way of the Sarlaac, versus the more violent Juyo form of his new master.
 

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Immediately Rish turned torwards his student just as the boulder was coming torwards him. Quickly he swiped at the boulder, falling into two seperate pieces. Certainly his student had an understadning of the Force it seemed...

Then suddenly an earthquake occured! No...it wasint an earthquake. it was the rather large steps of a creature. The test was passing by actualy...

"We have no more time for this. Your target is getting away." Rish quickly sprinted through the bog while tailing thism massive creature...
 

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My target? What the kriff was I doing? Mench thought

Mench charged into the forest after his master.

OOC: Sorry for the lame post. I should be able to give more detailed posts later, but continue on with the thread.
 

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Rish used the Force to proprel himself into the air then grabbing a branch and swung himself to another while following this creature. Each branch he increased in speed.​


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What were these beasts? And what was he supposed to do with them? Kill them, maybe? With a viroblade? Al was good with knives, but not that good.

Al hopped from branch to branch following his master who was falling these jungle beast. Thoughts flowed through his head. Especially about the natives. Who cared about these silly beasts? The natives would be the main problem. Surely they would retaliate. In the short time that Al had known his master, he had already realized that Rish didn't think explaining his actions was important.
 

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Soon there were near their destination. The creature had stopped within the confines of a rather large clearing that was infested with the bones of its prey. The trees had now darkend everything within sight. Only small beams of light penetrated the flora in some places. The creature picked small scraps of already chewed meat and finished the rest of it. Then the creature turned its head and looked at Rish and his students direction. The beast revealed its face. A young rancor. Rish knew this would be the perfect test. It wouldnt be too hard for his apprentice since Rish was going to help.

"Well my apprentice. You are now face to face with your true test. But you will not be alone in this test."

The creature did not see them and simple turned its head back around and searched through the bones of its previous meals...
 
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What was this thing, the rancor? It had dark brown skin, that looked tougher than iron. It's vicious fangs hung out of its snarling fangs. It stood on its hind feet with two long, fleshy arms with humongous claws at the end hanging down to the ground. The back of the large beast was plastered with tough looking armor and large, rock hard spikes. It would be fatal to even look at this beast, so what did Rish want him to do with it? Kill it? With a viro-blade? Unthinkable.

"What do you want me to do, master? Kill it with a viro-blade?"
 
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