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Thank you. She's going to go far in this galaxy. Lots of plans for her.Nicely written character! It'll be interesting to see where you go with her, and it's nice to see another Kill la Kill fan on here!
Fixed.Also, instead of having her travel to Ilum and stealing a Kyber crystal (which would be nigh-impossible outside of actually being a Jedi) [...]
Also, instead of having her travel to Ilum and stealing a Kyber crystal (which would be heavily guarded by the Jedi most likely), it might be better if she acquired it from a Jedi's lightsaber that she acquired elsewhere, perhaps on the black market. I know it isn't nearly as badass, but infiltrating a Jedi stronghold to steal one of their most closely-guarded possessions is highly unlikely.
However, I must point out that Songsteel is rarer than Phrik, and we aren't allowed to have weapons or pieces of armor that are made up entirely of lightsaber-resistant materials. I would recommend making the sword made of either phrik or cortosis and other materials, as I'm not sure if Songsteel is even allowed for this timeline.
Also, instead of having her travel to Ilum and stealing a Kyber crystal (which would be heavily guarded by the Jedi most likely), it might be better if she acquired it from a Jedi's lightsaber that she acquired elsewhere, perhaps on the black market. I know it isn't nearly as badass, but infiltrating a Jedi stronghold to steal one of their most closely-guarded possessions is highly unlikely.