Considering Making a Dark Jedi

[Taoré Timarick]

Ok, I seem to be getting on well as my main guy, whose a Jedi-in-training at the moment, but in his backstory (not mentioned in the bio, but I plan to insert cause it wasn't really important) During his 2 year journey to finding the Jedi Temple (given he was on a planet with no Jedi Temples and it took him a while to get to places where there were) he encountered a Dark Acolyte, whom he dueled and nearly lost to, but managed to cut her lightsaber in two, and knocking her out. In her madness she began to seek out someone willing to unleash her psychosis and dark power (and she has a lot of potential) all the while planning to take her revenge against the young Jedi, making sure the next time they met, it would be her the victor, and her raping his corpse then dropping him off a cliff. (She's CRAZY!)

I needs opinions here. Help?! What to do, what NOT to do, yada yada yada, all that jazz.

 

[Horizon]

Steer clear of parents dying in your character's history. That will help make it original considering most Dark Jedi's histories start with that.

 

[Taoré Timarick]

Steer clear of parents dying in your character's history. That will help make it original considering most Dark Jedi's histories start with that.

Actually, I had no intention of parents involved. I had intended for her to be an absolute. However, I did want her to grow up with a sense of betrayal, which would consume her and drive her to madness.

 

[Derpy Boots]

Ok, I seem to be getting on well as my main guy, whose a Jedi-in-training at the moment, but in his backstory (not mentioned in the bio, but I plan to insert cause it wasn't really important) During his 2 year journey to finding the Jedi Temple (given he was on a planet with no Jedi Temples and it took him a while to get to places where there were) he encountered a Dark Acolyte, whom he dueled and nearly lost to, but managed to cut her lightsaber in two, and knocking her out. In her madness she began to seek out someone willing to unleash her psychosis and dark power (and she has a lot of potential) all the while planning to take her revenge against the young Jedi, making sure the next time they met, it would be her the victor, and her raping his corpse then dropping him off a cliff. (She's CRAZY!)

I needs opinions here. Help?! What to do, what NOT to do, yada yada yada, all that jazz.

Oh my...

 

[Potentially]

Jerek and I can help with that.

 

[Horizon]

Jerek and I can help with that.

Oh lord.

 

[Potentially]

Oh great, its the queer horizon...

Double entendre win.
:CHappy

 

[Horizon]

Oh great, its the queer horizon...

Double entendre win.
:CHappy

How quaint you would call me something like that. I'm some what offended by the queer part really.

You know, I have not seen Jerek ever online at the same time as you. Maybe I am just a bit suspicious. Perhaps I'm wrong. It does not matter in the end.

But honestly, I can't wait to see the garbage you would consider a profile. I just feel sorry Taoré. That's all really.

 

[Gambler]

How quaint you would call me something like that. I'm some what offended by the queer part really.

You know, I have not seen Jerek ever online at the same time as you. Maybe I am just a bit suspicious. Perhaps I'm wrong. It does not matter in the end.

But honestly, I can't wait to see the garbage you would consider a profile. I just feel sorry Taoré. That's all really.

The insults are going a bit far, explicitly, Horizon. It only incites a larger argument, and in the end it will look like you started it, not to mention fed into it. Sometimes ignoring a comment like is a better move. It makes the person insulting you look immature while asserting that you don't respect their opinion enough to give it weight by replying to it.

 

[Potentially]

How quaint you would call me something like that. I'm some what offended by the queer part really.

You know, I have not seen Jerek ever online at the same time as you. Maybe I am just a bit suspicious. Perhaps I'm wrong. It does not matter in the end.

But honestly, I can't wait to see the garbage you would consider a profile. I just feel sorry Taoré. That's all really.

Actually we have both been on at the same time, but Jerek is busier than I am. Calm down some Horizon, I didn't mean to be that offensive.

 

[Horizon]

The insults are going a bit far, explicitly, Horizon. It only incites a larger argument, and in the end it will look like you started it, not to mention fed into it. Sometimes ignoring a comment like is a better move. It makes the person insulting you look immature while asserting that you don't respect their opinion enough to give it weight by replying to it.

You're right, Gambler. I should consider the source, I suppose.