Cydavesse

[Outlander]

The magic eye has nothing to do with him being a Cydavesse. It's unique to him.

Then that's an issue with the character that should also be addressed. Besides that, @Kiro is right.

 

[Kiro]

What Cydavesse magic powers? The magic eye has nothing to do with him being a Cydavesse. It's unique to him. The problem with your Edemmians is that they cannot be rolepleyed as near-humans until they're approved like i'm doing with my characters.

POWERS​

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[fancybox2] Due to a strange and ominous native ritual between many dead cydevesse, Asdrubael Troy was born with a third eye on his forehead. This gives him the peculiar power to see the intention of all beings caught within its sight. This would be awesome if he wasn't a Cydavesse and needed to cover his skin with make-up to survive in broad daylight. As the eye doesn't have an eyelid its extremely vulnerable to the elements. If his eye would be hurt either by direct sunlight or hit with a pebble or something it would cause extreme pain and disorientation.

Troy is also an adept force user. He uses the force to beguile those he speaks to. Being a Cydavesse (fluff) the more he's exposed to the suffering of others the stronger he becomes. Either physically or spiritually [/fancybox2]

Those Cyvadesse magic powers. It even says the eye is due to Cydavesse rituals. And his profile has Cydavesse stuff referenced all over it.

 

[Miz]

That would make sense if being hurt by sunlight would be considered a power. Plus, it was a native ritual not a Cydavesse one, and there are magical rituals in star wars canon. If you would refer to my thread with Nor'bal he wears make-up to cover his mutation not to be protected from the sun. This may be a character issue but not a Cydavesse one.

P.S. The eye doesn't work on PCs without their expressed consent.

 

[Kiro]

Issue is still that you're RPing an unapproved species. That includes culture and stuff like that.

But fine, I'll leave it up to @Green Ranger and @Brandon Rhea then.

 

[Miz]

A species or planet does not need to be created to create a multi-character culture or religion or skin condition, etc. It can just be something that's included in the character profile or Player Workshop.

Right now I'm roleplaying them as near-humans that go by the name of Cydavesse that have a particular culture/religion. I have not used any Cydavesse "powers" listed here in any of my characters and are subject to change until they're approved.

 

[Kiro]

That's not the meaning behind all of Weiss' post. But as said, leaving it to the Admins.

 

[Miz]

Given the information presented here and on the Asharte submission, I've got a few concerns. The first is the whole 'morep owerful through pain thing', which others have touched on, so I won't repeat it. The next is the 'Dark Side star' thing you mentioned in the Asharte thread, which feels very superweapony to me, and then there's the plot that you've outlined. How many other people are interested in this? Is it somethign just for your character, or are more people involved with it?

The more powerful with pain thing is just fluff and like what @Dmitri started won't have an effect on the roleplay and certainly not for PvP. I've changed it so that they feel "more alive". I don't know what you mean by the dark side star, though. Asharte does not have a star just a bunch of nebulae like Iego and warmed by stellar gasses. You may have been confused by the The Deciever turning the star into a black hole thing. That's just a plot device and a native myth used to tell of the horrors of the dark side. It won't be used again. As for the plot it's just my character unless someone wants to tag along. He's the AFL of the Dead Drop Pact and might need send for help.

 

[Padmé]

On my phone so forgive my blant/straight forward post.

Essentially you cannot RP with the said species/CP until you receive our approval.

Work on getting Boli/Weiss points sorted out.

Cheers!

 

[GABA]

With the intent section alone, this species will not be approved.

There are too many things in the profile that are vague, or simply don't fit with one another and lack a flow.