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The magic eye has nothing to do with him being a Cydavesse. It's unique to him.
Then that's an issue with the character that should also be addressed. Besides that, @Kiro is right.
The magic eye has nothing to do with him being a Cydavesse. It's unique to him.
What Cydavesse magic powers? The magic eye has nothing to do with him being a Cydavesse. It's unique to him. The problem with your Edemmians is that they cannot be rolepleyed as near-humans until they're approved like i'm doing with my characters.
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[fancybox2] Due to a strange and ominous native ritual between many dead cydevesse, Asdrubael Troy was born with a third eye on his forehead. This gives him the peculiar power to see the intention of all beings caught within its sight. This would be awesome if he wasn't a Cydavesse and needed to cover his skin with make-up to survive in broad daylight. As the eye doesn't have an eyelid its extremely vulnerable to the elements. If his eye would be hurt either by direct sunlight or hit with a pebble or something it would cause extreme pain and disorientation.
Troy is also an adept force user. He uses the force to beguile those he speaks to. Being a Cydavesse (fluff) the more he's exposed to the suffering of others the stronger he becomes. Either physically or spiritually [/fancybox2]
A species or planet does not need to be created to create a multi-character culture or religion or skin condition, etc. It can just be something that's included in the character profile or Player Workshop.
Given the information presented here and on the Asharte submission, I've got a few concerns. The first is the whole 'morep owerful through pain thing', which others have touched on, so I won't repeat it. The next is the 'Dark Side star' thing you mentioned in the Asharte thread, which feels very superweapony to me, and then there's the plot that you've outlined. How many other people are interested in this? Is it somethign just for your character, or are more people involved with it?