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Aegis Defense Industries, LLC.
ADI, Aegis, The Company


Motto:
"Keine Götter, Keine Meister"
No Gods, No Masters

Headquarters:
Olympus Station, orbiting the black hole named Titanicus
System of Origin:
<NULL>
Alignment:
Lawful Neutral
- Private Military Company:
> [Insert Commanding PC/NPC]
> [Insert XO PC/NPC]
- Naval Command:
> [Insert Commanding PC/NPC]
- Research & Development Office:
> [Insert Head PC/NPC]
- NPC Personnel:
> 70% Security Personnel (Naval & Combat)
> 5% Corporate Staff (Recruiters, Marketers, Office Staff)
> 15% Engineering Staff (Research & Development)
> 10% Facility Staff (Maintenance & Officers)
Establishment:
- TBD
Wealth:
~3.7 Billion Credits
Allies, Contracts, and Enemies:
- TBD
OOC Leadership:
-Faction Leader: Commissar Brett
-Assistant Faction Leader: Prudii Kyramud
-Executive Board Member:
History



The Corporate Front
Most recently, KES received a crippling defeat during the battle of Naboo that resulted in the loss of one of their Core Entities, as well as a majority of their Naval fleet. KES has now largely stepped back as a corporate front, while The Order has revealed itself in its officialness. Now admitting to the ruse of KES, the Company is prepared to act as a fabrication and production asset to the Order. Security operations are being repurposed as combat support for Key Entities, and the objectives of the Order and the Company are shifting towards armed conflict in support of the Rebellion, despite the tense relationship regarding the Hutt Cartel.

The Company was unable to get clearance to construct Hephaestus Station near Daedalus, but is able to maintain their Sirius Primaris facilities, which will prove to be invaluable assets in their efforts to become capable of self-sufficiency. The apartment complexes and offices of the Company on DSC Daedalus are being maintained in order to make sure the company has room to grow before it has to make major investments. During the battle of Sirius Primaris KES lost all facilities on or around Sirius Primaris including the sole company manufacturing station, Prometheus Station.



FACTION ROSTER________________________

Corporate Head:
TBD
Grand Mistress:
TBD
Additional Members:

ASSETS
Bases
Olympus Station
Navy
Flagship:
TBD
Support Vessels:
TBD
Miscellaneous
All KES Daedalus facilities are in the process of being closed. I am sorry for the inconvenience.
Missions:
 
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This is hella not finished, but I'll leave it up so that my RAM isn't eaten alive by Google Chrome.
 

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[TR][TD]

TYPE
Deep-Space Manufacturing Facility/Military Station

LOCATION
Orbiting the Black Hole, designate - Titanicus

AFFILIATION
Aegis Defense Industries, LLC.

NAME
Olympus Station

EMPLOYEE COUNT
Engineering Staff: 10 Design Teams (5 Engineers/Team, 50 Engineers Total)
Security Detail: 300 ADI Marines
Manufacturing Personnel: 50 Production Supervisors; 400 Manufacturing Droids

Passenger Capacity: 3000 Beds, Facilities to support up to a maximum of 5000 individuals

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Olympus Station is the official home of the large-scale PMC known as Aegis Defense Industries, LLC., as well as its primary production asset. Located near the black hole known as Titanicus, the station is a feat of engineering. The main facility is built in the hollowed-out remains of an asteroid in the Hades Belt, a belt of asteroids within the mass-shadow of the black hole, but far enough away to avoid falling into the plane of orbital degradation. Advanced radiation shielding keeps the station safe from the feedback of Titanicus, and also possess advanced power converters to absorb the radiation and turn it into usable energy for the station and its parts. This facility is more than just the main asteroid, however, as an extensive repulsor system holds together a loose yet large arc of the asteroid belt to the station to coordinate in defense. In total, if we assume the belt is a unit circle, the station hold together a combined pi/6 radians of the belt.


DETAILS
SECURITY
The facility is the highest priority on Aegis Defence Industries' protection list. As such, there is an extensive and well-orchestrated system for the defense of Olympus, should the need ever arise.

Firstly, the entire asteroid belt sits about 0.001 light-years inside the hyperspace-nullifying mass-shadow produced by Titanicus. Any ship attempting to jump to Olympus Station will be forced out of hyperspace and would have to make an almost 6-day sublight journey to reach the station. Aegis manages to avoid this logistical complication by using IFF-Tagged Hyperspace Buoys, much like those used by the Chiss Ascendancy, allowing to jump directly to the station. These buoys are specifically slaved to each IFF-Tag as it is produced. While the process of slaving new tags is long, it is necessary to ensure the station's security from sudden attacks.

Now, should an enemy fleet be able to get within fighting distance of Olympus Station, it has a well coordinated series of defenses to fend off any attackers. Between the several hangars, the station has a total of 2 Wings of TADF-03s (144 Fighter Droids), capable of swarming most attacking ships with sheer numbers. Each droid is capable of operating independently through a central server, or by being interfaced with by organic pilots via neural interfaces.

The station itself has a network of about 60 point-defense turrets, all radially configured for a full 160-degree hemisphere of flak from each quad-linked gun. Any fighters or bombers trying to hit the station will need to essentially hug the surface of the asteroid just to avoid fire. The station also has a system of about 10 heavy blaster cannons and 10 comparable mass drivers, configured in a manner similar to the point-defense weapons.

These defenses, in reality, are the last line of defense in the event that the primary defense measure fails. The primary defense protocol is ingenious in its design. The asteroids that are large enough to house the necessary power banks are held together by a tandem repulsor-tractor beam system, being used as weapon embankments. Two-thirds of these embankments (~80 minor asteroids) are medium ion cannons, intended to disable any approaching ship larger than 80m in length. The other third of the embankments (~40 minor asteroids) are actually dedicated tractor beam generators. Now, given where the station is located, intelligent commanders can figure out how this combination works. For those that don't, prepare to be enlightened; Ion cannons disable large warships, tractor beams pull the crippled and lifeless hulks along a trajectory... sending them into the gravity well of Titanicus.


OPERATIONS
As it is the primary production asset of Aegis Defense Industries, Olympus Station is designed to do exactly that: produce. There are several manufacturing warehouses throughout the whole of the 3.6km-wide station

 
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Okay, so... I am okay with you guys using my stuff as a template but this is not cool. If you could please get rid of all of my writing that went into Nova Tech it would be greatly appreciated seeing as I still plan to use it at some point in the next timeline.
 

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Oh I planned on it. My apologies BZ. This is all WIP so there'll be residue from the original post until I finish writing. I'm sorry, I am actually in the middle of editing it all right now. I never planned on using your ideas, only your templates. I should've asked first.
 

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Edited all the Nova Tech stuff out :D Sorry for any offence, BZ
 

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Something is like to point out about the write-up is that you have way too much in the way of defenses and personnel.
 

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Well, if it's a single facility, and the only starting asset for the faction, I'd beg to differ, but I'll allow you to elaborate. I am not entirely finished writing it up, but the AI running the station would control all of the weapons.
 

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Ok then:

1. Your system for dropping things you don't like out of Hyperspace doesn't make since.

2. You're going to need to get the asteroid belt and black hole approved, which I'm not sure about since its only purpose is to give you a natural means of defense to exploit.

3. Seriously? 216 fighter droids? Thats insane to have starting out.

4. Having 100+ Point defense turrets is also insane. It's like the equivalent of 15 Corvettes worth of defenses mounted into this thing.

5. Hundreds of HEAVY ION CANNONS. That's capital ship weaponry.

6. You rigged an entire asteroid field with repulsors linking them together, which I have no idea how that works since Repulsors are only used on planet's.

7. So many Tractor Beams.

8. Yeah 750 Manufacturing Droids is way too many. Especially since this is primarily Paramilitary.
 

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Well, the fighters are droids, and it isn't the whole belt. In fact, if you read, you'd see that it is about 30 degrees of the belt, but I can nerf that to pi/12 (15 degrees). I can dial back the weaponry (definitely should, but still enough to hold off most threats), and I'm not what's dropping the ships out of hyperspace; the black hole is doing that by itself, as that's how mass shadows and hyperspace work. However, if you understand the issue with how the Chiss navigated the Unknown Regions, you'd know that they used hyperspace buoys to guide their ships (which would otherwise be unable to maintain a course entirely through hyperspace). Simply slave these buoys to the nav-computers of the faction's ships.
 

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Yeah. But a mass shadow completely disables hyperdrive.

It's just the sheer about of weaponry you have at the start of the Faction. The Hutts don't even have stations this large and this is pretty much completely military and manufacturing. At the start of the faction, hundreds of ION cannons, droid starfighters, defense turrets and tractor beams as well as having way more droids than you should and having a naturally advantageous position.

This will never be approved.
 

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That's why it isn't in submission, and it's all WIP, which means "Work In Progress". So, frankly, I'm not done with the write up, but thank you for the constructive criticism.
 

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Looks good Brett! I like what you've been doing with your spare time! :)
 

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Yeah, that.
I'd ask you to lose the attitude please! :) This is WIP as Brett has said and I'm sure he'll nerf it all appropriately. I don't think there is anything with pointing out things you believe to be OP, but you have exceeded constructive criticism and you're just complaining about it on end, when Brett said he would fix it.
 

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I mean hell, half of this shit still says KES
 

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I'd ask you to lose the attitude please! :) This is WIP as Brett has said and I'm sure he'll nerf it all appropriately. I don't think there is anything with pointing out things you believe to be OP, but you have exceeded constructive criticism and you're just complaining about it on end, when Brett said he would fix it.

I don't think it's particularly harsh agreeing with someone else. Especially when I was given quite an, ahem, attitude from Brett himself. And what we're saying is no less correct.

However, I will refrain from posting here again unless it becomes relevant for me to.
 

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How much does this all cost. Just wondering for seience proposes. Total cost breaking down. Ships. Construction. All of it. Again just wondering
 

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Also, I recognize that this is still a WIP, but what is powering those Ion Cannons?

I would expect that they would need an individual power source per weapon, which (correct me if I'm wrong) those need massive amount of power. Would a single asteroid be large enough to house the weapon and the generator? Even then, I'd expect that the power source would be detectable be sensors and could be picked off from a distance.

Also, is your intent to use the repulsors on the asteroids to prevent them crashing into each other? I suppose that makes sense so that you could prevent losing resources, but wouldn't those repulsors need power as well? That's devoting a lot of your resources into maintaining this "defense"
 
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