David Zlade Blue

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David ZladeBlue
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AGE

► 18
SPECIES
► Human
HEIGHT
► 5 Feet 11 Inches
WEIGHT
► 140 Pounds
EYE COLOR
► Brown with a touch of blue
HAIR COLOR
► Black
HOMEWORLD
►Alderaan
GENDER
► Male
FACTION
► Independent
RANK
► N/A
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes(Secretive about it)
BIOGRAPHY
David comes from a line of force users. His great grandfather's father Jaden Auburn wrote Jaden wrote a Journal of lesson about the force for his family. His grandfather was also a jedi before leaving the order to pursue the love of his life and his family. Jaden moved to Alderaan. There he changed his last name to blue and began a grape farm and a wine brewery.

His father however did not like this humble and honest lifestyle. Jaden had raised Jacob in the force and Jacob was good at it. At a young age his father Jacob Blue began to trick other kids out of there things. He seemed pretty good at it. At the age of 21, he found himself on tatooine making deals with the hutts and whoever would give him a smuggling job.

Once David was born Jacob began to slow down. He had saved enough money to invest into a catinana tatooine. This is where David spent most of his days. He would find himself messing around with some droids, fighting other kids, making music or flirting with the girls around the area. He constantly moved from his home on tatooine and his home on Alderaan. There would study the force, weapons, or he would train.

From the time David was born not only did Jacob his father teach him in the force, but his grandfather did too. Having two masters gave him a small edge. He had knowledge of the old and the strength of the young. When he turned 18 his father gave him a ship, blaster, a collapsable vibroblade, and a lightsaber hilt, which he made for David when he was a jedi. He told David that`s all he needs to take the galaxy. On that ship him and his cousins the Wilsons well they currently live there. They part take in many of things good and bad; smuggling, bounties, saving the weak, justice.
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Personality

David is the charming type. Bold, brave, and good looking making him likeable by most. He is unpredictable. His heart defines him, his strong willpower and determination makes him a natural leader and moral booster.

Friend yet hostile if pushed. David is the type to control his anger and rage. He tried to keep a positive outlook on life, never giving up hope even in the sight of possible death. Humble yet flashy.

Gear
2 Collapsable Vibroblade
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/collapsible-vibro-sword.77647/ ]
A Journal of lessons within the force written by his great grandfather`s father, whom was a jedi.
Nerf Herder Lightfreight (The ship was nicknamed The Star Of Om)

( http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?forums/technology.598/page-7 )
1 set of T-Series Modular Armour
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/t-series-modular-armour.77772/ ]

1 set of Firestorm Bounty Hunter Armour given to him by his father
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/firestorm-bounty-hunter-armour.77955/ ]

Sandpeople wrap and garbs
1 SKR Sporting Revolver
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/skr-sporting-revolver.77883/ ]

Property

Family Estate(includes grape farm and wine brewery)
Ajax Kraith(He currently forces Ajax to do his bidding thanks to a shot to the head. If Ajax dies all his assets are to be given to David thanks to a deal.)

Kraith Family Tailoring

Stories

1: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/hunting-amy.77973/#post-1399862
2: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/clearing-a-path.77792/#post-1402904
3: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/book-of-law.78798/#post-1402828
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Goals
Buy a YG-1098 Light Freighter
{ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/yg-1098-light-freighter.78859/ }

Expand his family business

Follow his grandfather journal

Learn as much about the force as he can so he can ad to his family book of teachings

Become a famous vocalist

Start a colony so he can be a king (Secret goal for when he gets where he wants in life.)

Start his own family

Keeping his current family safe

Learning both the dark and light side of the force

Whatever he wishes

 
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Pretty much the same problems.
 

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@dblue095
Hey! So, I had a couple questions about your character's bio.

1) His grandfather being a Jedi, leaving the Order to pursue having a family. When he had his son, Jacob (your character's father), did he train him with the Force also? You said he comes from a line of Force users.

2) You mentioned Jacob getting mixed up with the Hutts on Alderaan. I could be wrong, but I don't think the Hutts have a presence on that planet at this point in the timeline. Things are really predated, for-example, Naboo is not a civilized planet as we see it in the movies. Just a bunch of random Gungans running around.

3) At what point in your character's timeline does he leave his Force training education with his family on Alderaan and invest in a cantina on Tatooine? Pretty far jump for a business investment, and it's unclear if he travels back and forth between there and home.

4) It might be requested that you add to your character profile in terms of a Personality Section and an assortment of his skills, as well as technical details about his ship and the Sand-people armor (any inclusion of that in the bio?)

5) Independent characters that are not officially associated with the Jedi Order or the Jedi Exiles cannot start off with possession of a lightsaber in this time-line's rules. Just a heads up!
 

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@Zach noted if you have any more suggestions let me know. It`s been a while since I`ve rped so im a bit rusty
 

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Well, more questions than notes, but cool. And no worries, I just recently came back to the site from a 5-year break, lol. We all get back on the horse in one way or another. Try checking out the Discord channel if you haven't already done so, lots of people active at almost all times of the day if you ever want to hit someone up with a question or get a proof-read of something.

(Discord channel is at the top of the screen, one of the buttons by Home, Forums, Members, etc.)
 

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So unfortunately indie characters cannot start with any form of lightsaber, even if the hilt is nonfunctional. I'm not sure what you mean by "Sand people armor." Do you mean just their clothes? Because I don't think their garb provides any real protection from anything other than sun and sand.

What's an SKR sporting revolver?
 

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Please link the tech that you're using, like you did with the freighter.
 

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I’m still waiting for approvals
There are a large number of character profiles and only a few mods. They will get yo your characters when it's your turn, people have been waiting for longer. Please be patient.
 

Raydo

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Again, your gear needs to be linked to tech from the tech board and could use some cleaning up (Different size fonts and whatnot). Please link that gear right away, please.

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