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Tsunami

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Strength: Having spent most of his life in Republic military service Alcander is fairly strong, he is fully capable of holding his own in a fist fight or could (with some effort) carry his subordinates out of the line-of-fire.
Dexterity: The Republic military require a certain standard of physical fitness, leaving Alcander's physique rather lithe. Daily PT exercises are the normal and bi-annual physicals ensure troopers maintain this standard.
Constitution: Alcander's naval position has allowed him to maintain an impressive standard of health, he doesn't smoke and rarely drinks.
Intelligence: Though Alcander himself things his intellect as average, his record and experience may beg-to-differ. He has graduated from the Republic Naval Academy, has a mind for strategy and his prior military actions have only honed this.
Wisdom: Alcander has a great situational awareness and an, almost, sixth sense to understanding the current matter at hand. Life has trained him to read the battlefield, though experience can only take one so far. He has little understanding of the force and can, sometimes, be a poor judge of character.
Charisma: The weight of command has fallen upon Alcander's shoulders for sometime, leading him to have a outwardly calm disposition. He is not the greatest public speaker, but can improvise a speech if necessary.

So I thought I would point out a few things. that I personally noticed:
  1. Firstly the part I highlighted in the green. I really liked the fact that you have pointed out his strengths in a none combat situation rather than saying " He's strong so can batter people with his fists." (Like I always do haha.)
  2. The white part I highlighted there is nothing wrong with, I would just like to see at a glance what exactly that means. Is the fitness based on Max effort 2.4km runs + best effort push up, sit up and heaves in two minutes. I'm assuming due to this being in the "Dex" category it is in regards to running. Either way maybe an expansion on that?
  3. The bits in red, I felt it was kind of a repeat of itself. Maybe combine those two parts I highlighted.

These are only some suggestions mind. This section is likely going to be the one that people glance over quickly before doing a roleplay with you, they may ask you a boat load of questions if you are vague with things.

My only other points are to expand the personality section and that i'm not sure what the ruling on large ships is as im not a very techy guy.

Nevertheless seeing as it is only a work in progress good start!
 

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@Sapphire Storm Thanks! Yeah, I still have work to do in the bio and such. I actually created her originally for a superhero tabletop RPG, so it shouldn't be a huge transition to make her a Jedi. And I have zero experience with making any kind of my own images, so I will definitely just be finding images that fit my thought for the characters haha.

@Saul I really like the cultist. Even Star Wars has to have its fanatics. I was under the impression "Mandalorian" was more a demonym than a species, though.
 

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@Saul I really like the cultist. Even Star Wars has to have its fanatics. I was under the impression "Mandalorian" was more a demonym than a species, though.
Mandalore is a planet, and according to what we know of the new canon - unless I'm forgetting some stuff - Mandalorians are simply humans born on Mandalore. There was a lot of lore and such about them that was part of the EU but is now forgotten. Obviously you still have the usual Mandalorian armour and such, but there's a lot less known about them now, when talking specifically about canon.
 

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Mandalore is a planet, and according to what we know of the new canon - unless I'm forgetting some stuff - Mandalorians are simply humans born on Mandalore. There was a lot of lore and such about them that was part of the EU but is now forgotten. Obviously you still have the usual Mandalorian armour and such, but there's a lot less known about them now, when talking specifically about canon.
Yeah, that's what I meant. I believe for the most part even in the EU it was that way also, but I could be forgetting something. Most of my EU book reading ignored the NJO material. I hated the Yuuzhan Vong. Personally would be on a list of "most disliked Star Wars thing" if I had one. :p Which is kind of off topic, because most of the Mandalorian material I experienced came from KotOR, KotOR II, and the like.
 

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XUEXAR KRELL



Name - Xuexar Krell
Nickname - Shade
Faction - The Sith Order
Rank - TBD
Class - Sorcerer
Homeworld - Naboo
Force Sensitive - Yes

Species - Miraluka
Gender - Male
Age - 35
Height - 5 ft. 10"
Weight - 180 Lbs.


Personality

Xuexar Krells presence alone increases the heart rates of those in his midst. An eerie, uncomfortable presence surrounds the Sith Sorcerer potent enough to send shivers down the spine. Even his armour erupts with the essence of dark side while a haunting visage causes those who to look at the ground. Xuexars voice is deep and carries an almost robotic element to it however it is not at all monotone. In fact it is a rather confidence inspiring in its tones; remaining stoic and stern regardless of the situation.

His regard for others does not often exceed his use for them. Hot-tempered, vicious and arbitrarily violent he is often thoughtless and domineering in his ways, opting to use fear rather than strength to keep those under his command or tutelage in line.

Xuexar often remains busy but is unrestricted and not bound by requirement. Often Xuexar meditates to strengthen his already grossly powerful atunement to the dark side, practices his odd combat style or more often than not, resides in his large living quarters studying the applications of the force. While he accepts the hierarchy he like many Sith hold dreams of grandeur. He is devoted to the Sith and its traditions he remains patient knowing full well he is not in the position to challenge for rule just yet, not only that he depends on the order somewhat to protect him from the many who oppose him on moral grounds, especially the Jedi. He is meticulous in his organisation both in his personal life and on the battlefield. He keeps order by enforcing his word as absolute to those who are and he believes are beneath him. With no real care for the freedom of others their dignity or their life he asks but one thing from his men. Total and complete unwavering loyalty, any less often ends in unpleasant circumstances.

Xuexar has an unusual respect for those who acquire power and are able to keep it. While quite hermit like at times he is by no means an introvert and can easily engage in conversation. This does not necessarily mean he likes people, and Xuexar views all people much like batteries, once they have nothing left to give, they are useless and may as well be disposed of. He has an almost memorising charisma to him and his followers often hang of his every word much like cultists. Xuexar has a fairly well known unstable side and often explodes into fits of rage despite a lack of apparent provocation or reason. These fits of rage often end with severe headaches and migraines and result in the Sith unable to properly focus.

Coming from a wealthy family on Naboo Xuexar has spared no expense on his accommodation. While he does not require expensive things and can quite easily live without them, he enjoys a somewhat decadent lifestyle. He has very little time to share these things with female company however on occasion he been known to “have a little fun”.

Sadly Xuexar has one defining weakness of personality that he shares with many in his position. While he is happy step on others to get to the top and advance his agenda the thought of losing his power often makes him overcautious and very untrusting of others. A believer that execution is the price to pay for betrayal he follows a strict personal code that those who pass such judgement should swing the sword.

Overall though Xuexar is a man of few cares, he kills on a whim and as he sees fit, whether for profit, sport or convenience content in the knowledge he is fairly untouchable by the small population that would care about such misdeeds.



This is a character I just started, don't necessarily plan to use but I thought he was quite cool so far!
 

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Still deciding on which Main Faction I'll go with. The Sin Valor idea I still like, but recently I've been entertaining the idea of a Rishii Jedi (name undecided). Suggestions for names? Here's the image I would use:

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@Dmitri

I like the Rishi idea, be cool for you to fly into battle! I am terrible with name though. @Jaylor is a huge alien fan boy so sure he might even be able to make some Rishi inspired names!
 

Saul

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@Saul I really like the cultist. Even Star Wars has to have its fanatics. I was under the impression "Mandalorian" was more a demonym than a species, though.
Thanks! Mandalorian are more of an ethnic group, I suppose I could say "Human (Mandalorian)"
 

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@Dmitri

I like the Rishi idea, be cool for you to fly into battle! I am terrible with name though. @Jaylor is a huge alien fan boy so sure he might even be able to make some Rishi inspired names!
Aliens are sooper cool >_>

As for a name, Rishi names (from what I've seen) have an average syllable count of two, and typically have an "ah" sound in it. Every name on wookieepedia has an a in it, so we can assume they have a fondness for a's as well. They also typically have a hard sound (G, Q, K, etc.) somewhere in them, but usually only once.

Edit: forgot to tag @Dmitri.
 

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http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...-everett-runaway-heir-critique-welcome.63707/
Would greatly appreciate feedback. Haven't made an OC in a long time and I would like to get him right before the timeline change. The only problem with him is I made the character but have no idea what to do with him once he exists in the world. Consequently, that's his motive in life. To find something worth living for. Guess I can just say I'm keeping my options open :D
 

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I think I finally finished Davik Lorso. It's a bit tl;dr but he's going to be my familiar main character so what the kes.

Got any feedback or interested to RP? PM me :D
 

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@Callus Hardy Definitely wouldn't rule that out! Especially since she joined the Jedi Order as a 15 year old instead of a 5 year old.
 

Taruna

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Just out of boredom and I want to break the 1.111 posts:


Char 1


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Name:Taruna
Affiliation:Jedi
Species:Chiss
Gender:Female
Weight:114 lbs.
Hair:Black
Distinguishing Marks:tigerstripe Tattoo
-White hair tips
Attribute:Value:
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Skills:Value:
Tactics: Space combat:■■■■■■■■■■
Republic Law:■■■■■■■■■■
Negotiations:■■■■■■■■■■
Survival:■■■■■■■■■■
Dueling:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Abilities:Value:
Force Empathy:■■■■■■■■■■
Tutaminis:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Jump:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Speed:■■■■■■■■■
Force Barrier:■■■■■■■■■■
Telepathy:■■■■■■■■■■
Lightsaber Combat (Mimban):■■■■■■■■■■
VehiclesStatus
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[tr2][th] Basic [/th][th] Information [/th][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Family Name: [/td][td]Eskarian[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Rank: [/td][td]Knight[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Age: [/td][td]23[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Height: [/td][td]5'3"[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Eyes: [/td][td]Deep Red[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Skin: [/td][td]Midnight Blue[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] - [/td][td]Light blue freckles[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Sensitive: [/td][td]Yes[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Dexterity: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Intelligence: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Charisma: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Tactics: Small units: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Explosives: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] First aid: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Diplomacy: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Hand To Hand: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Dual Wielding: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Telekinesis: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Sense: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Healing: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Stealth: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Mind Trick: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Lightsaber Combat (Mimban): [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]
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Taruna

A blue Jedi with tiger stripe Tattoos, RAWR!


Personality

Following the family’s tradition of peacekeepers, Taruna is usually a serious, controlled and honest member of society. She does know how to smile, but does not do so often, to maintain her professionality.

Taruna does prefer negotiations and diplomacy before any aggression, but does have not the slightest struggle to ensure the law is fulfilled and usually quotes the according paragraph of the law when arresting a criminal with whatever is necessary.

Strengths and weaknesses

  • Can't take alcohol in any form well. Half a glass makes her funny, all of the glas wastes her.
  • Ambidextrous (she -could- swing a second Lightsaber, but never received proper training, making any attempt in dual-wielding as dangerous for her as her enemy)
  • Deep and long sleeper - 12 hours of sleep are nothing she can't do and getting her up requires desperate measures or very cold water

Biography

Born as only daughter to Ezile and Querran Eskarian, Taruna grew up in a strict, orderly and disciplined childhood up to her age of 5, where her Force abilities manifested and was brought reluctantly to a Jedi Order to be trained.

She never lost contact to her parents, despite her Mom Ezile being Captain of a “Star Destroyer” class Republic fleet vessel and her Dad Querran being Captain of the local Coruscant Police Force, giving her hold and guidance during her training. As her life was already strict and quite disciplined from the get go, she had no quarrels fitting in with the other Padawans.

Upon her upbringing, she usually only sticked out by her strong sense of justice and her will to protect not only the innocent but also the actual law. So one or two fellow padawans quickly got to dislike her since they knew that cheating and bullying was not tolerated in her vicinity.

Of course, Tarua graduated as Knight on her first try, especially since she managed to build her Lightsabers on her own with little to no guidance as the time was there to shed off the training Lightsabers and ever since roams the Galaxy (usually under orders) to ensure no evildoer does his work unpunished.

Associates

Padawan Learners
*represents current learner

Gear


Lightsabers
[Fancybox2]PERSONAL WEAPON
Self-reconstructed lightsabers
  • Permafrost Crystals.
  • Training Mode
  • Attuning process 1 Week in
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Light Armor
[Fancybox2]PERSONAL ARMOR
A gift from the Indupar nobility for a convoy security misison

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Heavy Armor
[Fancybox2]PERSONAL ARMOR PROTOTYPE
Taruna had a hand in it’s creation process.
Not approved yet.
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Main Dress
[Fancybox2]PERSONAL CLOTHES

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Seondary Dress
[Fancybox2]PERSONAL CLOTHES

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And a Pocket Belt on her Waist


Threads
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Level: Knight
  1. None <Introduction/Training/Story/Charackter Development>
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Char 2


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RankNone
Species:Human
Gender:Female
Weight:110 lbs.
Hair:Blonde, colored red
Force Sensitive:untested
AttributesValue
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Skils
Stealth:■■■■■■■■■
Survival:■■■■■■■■■■
Slicing:■■■■■■■■■■
Free Running:■■■■■■■■■■
Repair:■■■■■■■■■■
Acrobatics:■■■■■■■■■■
Abilities
Technomatry:■■■■■■■■■■
Telekinesis:■■■■■■■■■
Force Sense:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Speed:■■■■■■■■■
Lightsaber Combat (Not trained):■■■■■■■■■
Languages
Basic:■■■■■■■■■
[tr2][td] Affiliation [/td][td]None[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Name: [/td][td]Kouriou Moonshadow[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Age: [/td][td]22[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Height: [/td][td]5'3"[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Eyes: [/td][td]Green[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Skin: [/td][td]Fair[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Dexterity: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Intelligence: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Charisma: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[th]Value[/th]
[tr2][td] Athletics: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] First aid: [/td][td]■■ ■■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Computer use: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Security: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Construction: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Pickpocket: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[th]Value[/th]
[tr2][td] Projected Telepathy*: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Electronic Manipulation]: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Tutaminis: [/td][td]■■ ■■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Jump: [/td][td]■ ■■■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Stealth: [/td][td]■ ■■■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[th]Value[/th]
[tr2][td] Huttese: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
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Kouriou Moonshadow

Machine Whisperer


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Color code: #F8E7F4 | Theme

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Traits​
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  • Personality
Kouriou , as she is known to all around her, since she believes her original name being too long, is usually a quiet and shy person, appearing extremely cautious and does not really warm up easily to others. Her past as long time captive also diminished her social skills a lot and the mistreatment during that time left her unwilling to body contact. She also is not really a cheery type and you seldom, if ever see her smile.

  • Strengths
Her tech Savviness gives her a instinctive insight in the inner workings and (possibilities to repair it when broken) to almost all technical things she sees, touches and tinker with, raising in intensity in an ascending order.
The extensive hide-and-seek games with the guard droids of her neighbourhood gave her increased insight of the skills to hide, run and ‘freeclimbing’

  • Weaknesses
The downside of her growing up on a trash planet is clearly a short breath, preventing her from running to long, i.e. she’s an excellent sprinter on short lengths. Also, the ever present need to be on guard made her jumpy, often causing her to run and/or hide at the smallest sound reminding her of a guard droid



Biography

  • Childhood

Kouriou Moonshadow, more known to herself (and anyone she meets) as Kouriou is a woman who went through a short but not tragic childhood. Born on a ‘Trash planet’, she was raised with the few food her parents could scrape together and played with the bits and ends of the debris and tech remains that were unloaded, playing lava field among the trash hills and scavenged with her parents for valuable tech to restore or repair. All they had to do was not getting caught by the Guardian droid, which were set to kill on sight centuries ago. Around the age of seven, her Force sensitivity manifested, showing her deep affinity to tech in all it’s forms.

It became most apparent when she found an arm computer that was destroyed beyond measures and ‘fixed’ by her over the course of a few months. The result was that everything works for her, since she instinctively manipulates it with the force, but anyone else will only hold a useless piece of junk.


  • Companion

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At age 18, she found her first and most trustworthy helper, a Dragonfly SC-03x Scout drone, which have been thrown away since they were considered outdated.

Spending weeks repairing it, enhancing it, modifying it and thus binding to it, she was soon able to see through it’s built in camera and talk through it, due to her limited projected telepathy. But she so far never realized it, using her arm computer to steer it.




Distinguishing marks​


  • Freckles, ‘nuff said



Miscellaneous​
STRENGTH: What’s that?
DEXTERITY: Fleeing is a natural state
CONSTITUTION: Can I have some, please?
INTELLIGENCE: E=MC2 is for children
WISDOM: To know the world, I need to see it first
CHARISMA:
Tutaminis
Force Sense
Force Jump
Force Speed
Force Stealth
Lightsaber Combat (none)



Tech​


Dragonfly SC-03x
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  • Designation: Dragonfly SC-03x
  • Length 15 cm (32 with tail)
  • Span Width: 45 cm
  • Weight: 480g
  • Modes: Walk, Climb, Fly
  • Legs are capable to stuck to almost all surfaces
  • Wings allow for VTOL flight and almost instant direction changes
  • Speed: Airborne 92 Km/h land 12Km/h
  • Average run time: 2 weeks / 5 Days when flying too much
  • > Camera (High Resolution, IR/NV/EM mode)
  • > Camera Light (LED, in a circle around the lense)
  • > FX-2001 Virtual inteligence (Works like a intelligent dragonfly-pet)
  • >> Can be worn as accessory if collapsed
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Kouriu-Boy 9001
[Fancybox4=http://i929.photobucket.com/albums/ad139/Tarunateikaliath/TRIP/ArmComp2_zpswoljaijj.jpg]PERSONAL TECH
Actually, this is not an arm computer anymore, it’s been wired and fixed, modified and changed so much, that each serious technician would get a headache just by looking at this. But it is Kouriou ’s focus, so to speak where she channels her force power of ‘techomancy’ trough

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Kouriou-Bike XY-200
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Self-reconstructed bike with hover-ability. Despite its looks a fairly standard Hoverbike.

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Taruna recommends checking Bee’s template for your own attempts.





Char 3


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Affiliation:Jedi
Species:Human
Gender:Female
Weight:114 lbs.
Hair:Red
Distinguishing Marks:None
Attribute:Value:
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Skills:Value:
Computer:■■■■■■■■■■
Ship maintenance:■■■■■■■■■■
Ship Cannon:■■■■■■■■■■
Survival:■■■■■■■■■■
Acrobatics:■■■■■■■■■■
Library usage:■■■■■■■■■■
Languages
Basic:■■■■■■■■■
Jawaese:■■■■■■■■■■
Cheunh:■■■■■■■■■■
High Galactic:■■■■■■■■■■
Sith language:■■■■■■■■■■
Shyriiwook:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Abilities:Value:
Force Empathy:■■■■■■■■■■
Tutaminis:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Jump:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Speed:■■■■■■■■■
Force Barrier:■■■■■■■■■■
Telepathy:■■■■■■■■■■
Lightsaber Combat (Mimban):■■■■■■■■■■
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[tr2][th] Basic [/th][th] Information [/th][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Rank: [/td][td]Knight[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Age: [/td][td]23[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Height: [/td][td]5'3"[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Eyes: [/td][td]Green[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Skin: [/td][td]Fair[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Sensitive: [/td][td]Yes[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Dexterity: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Intelligence: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Charisma: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Law: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Navigation: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] First aid: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Diplomacy: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Navigation: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Hand To Hand: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Dual Wielding: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
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[tr2][td] Ryl (Twi'leki): [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Nerd: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Huttese: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Mando'a: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Binary: [/td][td]■■■■ ■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Telekinesis: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Sense: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Healing: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Stealth: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Mind Trick: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Language: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[tr2][td] Lightsaber Combat (Mimban): [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
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Cailyn

”The feather is mightier as the Lightsaber. It writes your Permission.. or denial.. of using it.”


Personality

Cailyn is a scholar in mind, means she is usually open for new possibilities and if necessary thinks outside the box. She also prefers to know what she is dealing with and is more reluctant to simply jump into an unknown situation, albeit her ability to think on her feet is seldom an issue to ensure her survival if things go south… what happens unfortunately often.

Strengths and weaknesses

  • Bookworm - She prefers books over training and thus is less fit than most, but of course does at least the minimum of training. Preparation is everything
  • Multilingual - By some unknown reasons, Cailyn does not have any troubles to learn new languages quickly, a force power is suspected

Biography

Cailyn was born on one of the Core worlds, in a decent family of a Mother (Elena) and a younger brother (Eric). The Father, (Marcus) unfortunately declined a few months before her birth, when her brother was just five. While her mother is a Librarian on one of the Jedi archives, her brother entered the Jedi Order a few years earlier than her, since his Force powers awakened a little sooner than hers.

Albeit she was initially quite jealous, she quickly settled with what she can rather then what now. Thus she strived to be a wandering scholar, finding knowledge in all the ends of the Galaxy. That was, until her own Force power finally manifested and she herself was able to apply to the Jedi.

With the age of 12, she was a little old, but managed to convince her trainer, a Twi’lek named Est’run of her ability to not only catch up with the others but also match them. What he did not like was the fact that she was clearly better in theory then praxis, since her nose was almost always in any of the texts rather than she was found on the training field.

Nevertheless she managed to graduate as a Knight and is now using her position to not only bring law and order to the borders but also find new and lost knowledge wherever she gets a hold of a lead, as cold as it may be.

Associates

Padawan Learners
*represents current learner

Gear


Lightsabers
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Self-constructed lightsabers
  • Blue Crystals.
  • Training Mode
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Also a standard Jedi Robe, a utility belt with a Medkit, hook and rope, and a traveling pack with all necessities to camp.


Threads

Level: Knight
  1. none <Type>

Artist’s permission to use name and looks is given, all image sources: http://finderskeepers.gcgstudios.com/ //Copyright held by the owner.
 

Taruna

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RankPadawan
Species:Human
Gender:Female
Weight:114 lbs.
Hair:Brunette
Force Sensitive:Yes
AttributesValue
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Skils
Partying:■■■■■■■■■
Interrogation:■■■■■■■■■■
Diplomacy:■■■■■■■■■■
Survival :■■■■■■■■■■
Lockpick:■■■■■■■■■■
Slicing:■■■■■■■■■■
Forgery:■■■■■■■■■■
Acrobatics:■■■■■■■■■■
Abilities
Mind Trick (Illusion):■■■■■■■■
Telekinesis:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Sense:■■■■■■■■■■
Force Speed:■■■■■■■■■■
Floating Meditation:■■■■■■■■■■
Telepathy:■■■■■■■■■
Languages
Basic:■■■■■■■■■
Jawaese:■■■■■■■■■■
Cheunh:■■■■■■■■■■
High Galactic:■■■■■■■■■■
Sith language:■■■■■■■■■■
Shyriiwook:■■■■■■■■■■
[tr2][td] Affiliation [/td][td]NJO[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Name: [/td][td]Dawn Whisperwind[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Age: [/td][td]18[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Height: [/td][td]5'4"[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Eyes: [/td][td]Blue[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Skin: [/td][td]Fair[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Dexterity: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Intelligence: [/td][td]■■■■■■■■ ■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Charisma: [/td][td]■■■■■■■ ■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[th]Value[/th]
[tr2][td] Negotiation: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] First aid: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Streetwise: [/td][td]■■■■ ■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Edged Weapons: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Hand To Hand: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Computer use: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Security: [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Pickpocket: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[th]Value[/th]
[tr2][td] Doppelgänger: [/td][td]■ ■■■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Tutaminis: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Jump: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Force Stealth: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Revitalize: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Lightsaber Combat (Ataru): [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
[th]Value[/th]
[tr2][td] Ryl (Twi'leki): [/td][td]■■■■■■ ■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Nerd: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Huttese: [/td][td]■■■ ■■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Mando'a: [/td][td]■■■■■ ■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] Binary: [/td][td]■■■■ ■■■■■■ [/td][/tr2]
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Dawn Whisperwind

Jedi Shadowan

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Color code: Pink | Dawn Theme
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Personality

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Dawn, or Dawny for friends (Night Owl, for very, very close ones), is quite a communicative, adventurous and joyful young girl during the nights. This is a remainder of her younger years, where she was used to sneak onto all kinds of parties, from a Rave to a high-society ball to scout out the security systems. She also never could help but being very keen on keeping her wardrobe on the newest line. Now, being a Jedi, Dawn does her best to uphold the hard worked for reputation of being a serious, nose-to-the-book and hard training girl by day.

Naturally, this behaviour does have it's price and she counters it with Jedi meditation techniques, which she still needs to raise to an average level so she does no longer find herself flattening her nose in the Datapad in the afternoon and study times.

May it as it be, she still is constantly on the lookout for an adventure or a heist to plan, even though she never intends to carry the heists out anymore (Adventures? Come at me!). It's simply too much fun to plan them.


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Biography

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Dawn learned the trade of a thief starting age five, when her father, a quite well skilled thief himself, had to take care of her since her mother and his wife went to jail for life, charge: Burglary, theft, and so on.

With such a family, it's not surprising her idea of 'ownership' is a little off from the norm. But she learned a lot about picking locks, slicing, seeing the bigger picture, memorizing blueprints and translate them into actual plans as well as sneak into parties to scout ahead. Her daily routine was thus driven by physical exercises in special prepared rooms, studying common knowledge, learn to adapt to different levels of society and learn a few languages, supporting her father in his plans in pointing out the weaknesses and thus contributed to ensure that the heists were a success and the risks minimized. Losing her Daddy too was out of the question.

Dawn learned about her force ability quite early, but tried to make it a secret to her dad, who decided to let her have it and played along, sometimes smiling at the clumsy attempts to hide her Force usage when she was taking the spoon that was clearly out of reach or dragged him back to the sidewalk before he could be smashed by a vehicle.

So, when she got 10 he brought her a special something from one of the heists: A Holocron. Although the father did not knew what was in it, he decided to give it to her as a birthday present, stating it was a 'puzzle for her to solve'. And she ‘solved’ it, although it was only containing the most basic training for a Padawan, at best. Save from a little secret about Illusions. Unfortunately for Dawn, the Holocron was quite old, and she never managed to get more than the most basic things and had to train herself in the hours she was alone in the Apartment of the planet they were on at the time for the heist.


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At the age of 15, she tried her first own heist after an argument with her father. Not satisfied only to be there for the planning and pointing out the things he oversaw. She wanted to do the action part for a change. It was a rather nasty and heated argument in the sense that it in fact was the first argument between them since mom was imprisoned. Unfortunately years of small things piled up to be thrown into the argument, like the wrong use of toothpaste and forgetting to do the laundry. At the end, Dawns point that she had been training harder than he did during the time he was her age, that Dawn had to stay in the hideout and never knew he if he really came back this time or would be caught and her dad was getting old was the point where the two parted ways, ideological and physical. Since her Father always understood that there was more needed for a heist to succeed then a little planning and being agile, he made a decision this day he would regret for the rest of his life. The last thing he said when she slammed the door from the outside, her backpack with her things and plans packed was "You have to adapt to the things that could not be planned."

Dawn's solo-heist was as quickly over as it started, since she met the greatest security issue a thief may encounter and that can not be so simply circumvented: 2 Jedi , a Knight and a Master guarding the object in question, an antique Lightsaber. And they were warned and expected her. Her father contacted them before marching into the next Police station for a self-indictment.

She then faced the fate to spend her time until adulthood in a children's jail, followed by the rest of the 30 year sentence in normal jail. I not for a Echani Master with her young Chiss-Padawan who happened to travel by. They replaced the quite incompetent guy supposed to defend her and literally in the last day turned the table to her favor.
Now a free, albeit parent-less child, she could now choose to get put into a orphanage or join the Jedi order, as the Echani offered her.

Since orphanages are really not any fun, she took the Jedi offer, albeit at first only because of the things she expected to learn, thinking that would improve her skills as a professional thief. Sure, she was disappointed right away by having to live a regular upstanding life, doing regular exercises and study a lot. But in a defiant reaction, she did exactly that, aside of her own 'secret' studies in her old skills, thinking they may come in handy when time comes by.

With time, she developed onwards, slowly but steadily into the direction of an truly upright Jedi, doing her best to represent the Jedi at her best abilities. Changing unnoticed by even herself. Well, at least during the days…


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Distinguishing marks

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Her Force powers usually manifest in some way or another in the form of violet, transparent energy-butterflies

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Miscellaneous

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- 6 Poisonous throwing dart, for subduing opponents
- 2x Lightsaber (training mode built in)
- Multi-pocket belt
- Blaster pistol
- Assorted pool of dresses
- Owns Penthouses on at least 3 neutral Metropol worlds
- 3 fake identities (Imperial, Hutt space, Neutral space), probably not worth anything since they have not been in use for too long.
- Glasses with extras (IR, thermo, light enhancer, HUD)
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Taruna recommends checking Bee’s template for your own attempts.
Picture reference: Michelle Trachtenberg, All copyright are of their respective owners
 
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The name I'm considering using is Baam.
 

Rae Anne Jarrus

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I love the fourth character. And I recognize the girl in the pictures. Who is it??
 
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