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Here's take-two:
Name: D'Jareth the Vengeant
Faction:
Rank:
Race: Schenor
Home Planet: Rhamsis Callo
Age: 37
Height: 2.7 m
Weight: 186.9 kg
Eye Color: Red
Skin Color: Goldenrod
Hair Color: Snow White
Distinguishing Marks: Crescent Moon-Shaped Scar beside his right eye, Three Claw Scar on his left pectoral from a Wookiee Madclaw
Force Sensitive: Yes
Description: D'Jareth is a staggering example of the schenor people. His body is sheer muscle, almost like a professional bodybuilder's. However, this muscle isn't simply for show. His body has immense strength, even by schenor standards. His hair is thick on his back and on his tail, with his mane being wild and unkept. His very image is known to shake even the most seasoned veterans and cause lesser men to flee in terror. His face is that of a lion's.
Strength: As strong as a large wookiee
Dexterity: Agile as a lion
Constitution: Brick House
Intelligence: Combat Intellect, not Book-Smart
Wisdom: Not Naiive, but not used to being lied to
Charisma: Not a big negotiator. However, he's a big cat. Awww, ain't he cute and cuddly? Watch out for the teeth... And the claws... and the weapons...
Force Powers: Telekinesis, Force Roar (variation of Force Scream)
Talents: D'Jareth is an expert in warfare tactics, both from his people and his adopted brothers, the Wookiees. He is also an adept unarmed fighter, though more of a grappler than a brawler. He also speaks Basic, Shyriiwook, and Cathar besides his people's language.
Weapon Style: Wookiee Cleaver Style of Swordfighting: This style is comparable to a Jedi lightsaber form, though often it is more akin to a Dark Jedi's's style of combat. The style appears to be a wookiee hybrid between Juyo and Shien/Djem So using the weilder's size and strength as their greatest advantage. Many variants exist, including a twin blade style and a dual-edged style, but D'Jareth preferred to learn the two-handed style, to take the greatest advantage of his impressive stature and strength.
Strengths and Weaknesses: D'Jareth is a physical, mental, and social marvel, but he is slightly savage and minorly feral, though he will never resort to a tooth and nail combat style.
Gear:
Gold/Bronze Lightsaber with no amplification crystals: He found the lightsaber in the Shadowlands of Kashyyyk, though it no longer functioned. He disassembled it, and upon reassembly, he discovered the blade was thicker than a normal lightsaber's. He had seen the Jedi before, and their blades seemed pathetic compared to this blade.
Wookiee Cleaver: This weapon is made from a material few have seen before. The weapon is heavy even for the strongest of men, but for wookiees or D'Jareth, this is a hefty and efficient cleaver for combat. This one is adorned with tribal lanyards, feathers of exotic birds, bone beads, and the tooth of a katarn of whom the chieftan and D'Jareth killed together.
Ship: Makeshift “ugly-fied” Defender-Class Corvette (appx the size of a large starfighter, due to improvised repairs necessary after the crash)
Backstory:
Born on the home planet of the schenor, D'Jareth was a warrior from birth. He was the youngest of three brothers and son of the chieftan. At a young age, he was top of his class in hand-to-hand combat, even besting his father on several occasions. Becoming an adept in his people's style of combat, he soon had the opportunity of a lifetime. When he was a young teen a Jedi master named Bondar arrived on the planet, and wanted to see the top fighters of the schenor people. D'Jareth and his brothers were the apex of the pride. He soon bested his brothers in combat, and even showed Master Bondar his aptitude in the Force. He was soon traveling across the star system to be trained formally as a Jedi.
However, fate had different plans. A freak comet shower struck the ship, causing it to crash-land on the planet of Kashyyyk. His to-be master died in the wreck, but D'Jareth survived. Finding himself in the Shadowlands, he was alone, cold, and in pain. He soon met Rhonden, the wookiee chieftan's son. Being escorted to the treetop homes of the wookiees, D'Jareth was treated for his wounds. All but the scar on his face, his wounds were healed. He soon asked the eldest wookiee to train him in their mysterious weapon style.
Ten years had passed since the fateful crash and he mastered the style of his adopted people. However, a young warrior ran off into the Shadowlands to escape murder. D'Jareth went after the murderer, but upon finding him a week later, the wookiee went fully feral. Clawing and biting at him, the feral wookiee attempted to kill D'Jareth. However, he roared as he had seen his father do in his youth, to his surprise, the wild wookiee was thrown back a fair distance. The wook however was not deterred by the roar. He soon was charged by the wild wookiee and clawed in the chest. However, D'Jareth struck the wook down with a single chop of his sword.
He soon arrived back at his adoptive home and was granted a great honor: a hunt of a lifetime against a katarn. He and the chieftan soon set off. With luck and skill, the two faced the beast head on. Having taken an hour and a half in the duel with the beast, D'Jareth struck the fatal blow against the beast. He also found a broken lightsaber in the nest of the beast and took it for himself. He was given the tooth of the beast as a trophy of his kill. He arrived at his adopted home, but felt a need to train as a force user. He returned to the site of the crash, and used the remnants of his to-be master's lightsaber to complete his own. Upon completion, his blade was a much wider and thicker version of his to-be master's blade. Finding a crystal blessed by the village elder, he inserted it, discovering that it was a perfect fit, and made his blade a gold/bronze color.
He soon repaired his ship and left Kashyyyk, and headed off into space to find an order of jedi who would accept him as a pupil...
Name: D'Jareth the Vengeant
Faction:
Rank:
Race: Schenor
Home Planet: Rhamsis Callo
Age: 37
Height: 2.7 m
Weight: 186.9 kg
Eye Color: Red
Skin Color: Goldenrod
Hair Color: Snow White
Distinguishing Marks: Crescent Moon-Shaped Scar beside his right eye, Three Claw Scar on his left pectoral from a Wookiee Madclaw
Force Sensitive: Yes
Description: D'Jareth is a staggering example of the schenor people. His body is sheer muscle, almost like a professional bodybuilder's. However, this muscle isn't simply for show. His body has immense strength, even by schenor standards. His hair is thick on his back and on his tail, with his mane being wild and unkept. His very image is known to shake even the most seasoned veterans and cause lesser men to flee in terror. His face is that of a lion's.
Strength: As strong as a large wookiee
Dexterity: Agile as a lion
Constitution: Brick House
Intelligence: Combat Intellect, not Book-Smart
Wisdom: Not Naiive, but not used to being lied to
Charisma: Not a big negotiator. However, he's a big cat. Awww, ain't he cute and cuddly? Watch out for the teeth... And the claws... and the weapons...
Force Powers: Telekinesis, Force Roar (variation of Force Scream)
Talents: D'Jareth is an expert in warfare tactics, both from his people and his adopted brothers, the Wookiees. He is also an adept unarmed fighter, though more of a grappler than a brawler. He also speaks Basic, Shyriiwook, and Cathar besides his people's language.
Weapon Style: Wookiee Cleaver Style of Swordfighting: This style is comparable to a Jedi lightsaber form, though often it is more akin to a Dark Jedi's's style of combat. The style appears to be a wookiee hybrid between Juyo and Shien/Djem So using the weilder's size and strength as their greatest advantage. Many variants exist, including a twin blade style and a dual-edged style, but D'Jareth preferred to learn the two-handed style, to take the greatest advantage of his impressive stature and strength.
Strengths and Weaknesses: D'Jareth is a physical, mental, and social marvel, but he is slightly savage and minorly feral, though he will never resort to a tooth and nail combat style.
Gear:
Gold/Bronze Lightsaber with no amplification crystals: He found the lightsaber in the Shadowlands of Kashyyyk, though it no longer functioned. He disassembled it, and upon reassembly, he discovered the blade was thicker than a normal lightsaber's. He had seen the Jedi before, and their blades seemed pathetic compared to this blade.
Wookiee Cleaver: This weapon is made from a material few have seen before. The weapon is heavy even for the strongest of men, but for wookiees or D'Jareth, this is a hefty and efficient cleaver for combat. This one is adorned with tribal lanyards, feathers of exotic birds, bone beads, and the tooth of a katarn of whom the chieftan and D'Jareth killed together.
Ship: Makeshift “ugly-fied” Defender-Class Corvette (appx the size of a large starfighter, due to improvised repairs necessary after the crash)
Backstory:
Born on the home planet of the schenor, D'Jareth was a warrior from birth. He was the youngest of three brothers and son of the chieftan. At a young age, he was top of his class in hand-to-hand combat, even besting his father on several occasions. Becoming an adept in his people's style of combat, he soon had the opportunity of a lifetime. When he was a young teen a Jedi master named Bondar arrived on the planet, and wanted to see the top fighters of the schenor people. D'Jareth and his brothers were the apex of the pride. He soon bested his brothers in combat, and even showed Master Bondar his aptitude in the Force. He was soon traveling across the star system to be trained formally as a Jedi.
However, fate had different plans. A freak comet shower struck the ship, causing it to crash-land on the planet of Kashyyyk. His to-be master died in the wreck, but D'Jareth survived. Finding himself in the Shadowlands, he was alone, cold, and in pain. He soon met Rhonden, the wookiee chieftan's son. Being escorted to the treetop homes of the wookiees, D'Jareth was treated for his wounds. All but the scar on his face, his wounds were healed. He soon asked the eldest wookiee to train him in their mysterious weapon style.
Ten years had passed since the fateful crash and he mastered the style of his adopted people. However, a young warrior ran off into the Shadowlands to escape murder. D'Jareth went after the murderer, but upon finding him a week later, the wookiee went fully feral. Clawing and biting at him, the feral wookiee attempted to kill D'Jareth. However, he roared as he had seen his father do in his youth, to his surprise, the wild wookiee was thrown back a fair distance. The wook however was not deterred by the roar. He soon was charged by the wild wookiee and clawed in the chest. However, D'Jareth struck the wook down with a single chop of his sword.
He soon arrived back at his adoptive home and was granted a great honor: a hunt of a lifetime against a katarn. He and the chieftan soon set off. With luck and skill, the two faced the beast head on. Having taken an hour and a half in the duel with the beast, D'Jareth struck the fatal blow against the beast. He also found a broken lightsaber in the nest of the beast and took it for himself. He was given the tooth of the beast as a trophy of his kill. He arrived at his adopted home, but felt a need to train as a force user. He returned to the site of the crash, and used the remnants of his to-be master's lightsaber to complete his own. Upon completion, his blade was a much wider and thicker version of his to-be master's blade. Finding a crystal blessed by the village elder, he inserted it, discovering that it was a perfect fit, and made his blade a gold/bronze color.
He soon repaired his ship and left Kashyyyk, and headed off into space to find an order of jedi who would accept him as a pupil...
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