Ebberla Daw

[GABA]

WELL PLEASE make a comic about Ebberla Daw and Teline Deloi's duel. I can help you out with what the visual effects would look like and what Teline Deloi's moves look like.

Done.

 

[Deloi]

It's... It's... PERFECT!

 

[GABA]

It's... It's... PERFECT!

My best work to date.

 

[GABA]

New picture, now I'll have to do it for all of them because it looks awkward.

Sorry Deloi, no comic, I need bigger paper and I'm not going to buy anymore until I use what I have. :3

 

[Deloi]

New picture, now I'll have to do it for all of them because it looks awkward.

Sorry Deloi, no comic, I need bigger paper and I'm not going to buy anymore until I use what I have. :3

Well then just make more concept art like that one! :D May want to put his arm down a little more for the opening stance of Makashi. Also what his lightsabers look like:

Spoiler: My Character's Main curved-lightsaber

Spoiler: My character's short lightsaber

Spoiler: Makashi Opening Stance(Left)

 

[GABA]

You missed it all, there's no eyebrows on Deloi. I forgot to sketch them in. :3

 

[Deloi]

You missed it all, there's no eyebrows on Deloi. I forgot to sketch them in. :3

I thought that was stylistic.

 

[GABA]

I thought that was stylistic.

Not one bit.

 

[GABA]

Added a new story. Took too long to do and looks like crap.

Line art, why you no look as good as sketch?

Edit: She got an orange lightsaber crystal out of it.

 

[Syn]

don't kid yourself it looks great Gaba.

 

[GABA]

It still looks 200x better as the photo blue sketch though. I'll just do one all in graphite next time.
: ]

 

[Syn]

Well I am certain however you choose to do it it will look great.Damn sight more talented then me.

 

[Black Noise]

New picture looks awesome :CHappy

 

[Deloi]

Now that I'm FINALLY off of work we can continue the tag team exhibition if DeathToll still wants to go.

 

[GABA]

New picture looks awesome :CHappy

Thank you!

Now that I'm FINALLY off of work we can continue the tag team exhibition if DeathToll still wants to go.

I'm still up for it. : D

 

[Deloi]

I'm still up for it. : D

Yeah I was looking forward to totally owning both of you. You both completely missed an important detail, and I'll give you a hint, its not his hidden blade.

 

[GABA]

Time to do some Jedi cheats.

 

[Deloi]

Time to do some Jedi cheats.

It's not those either, in fact, it is one of my favorite tropes played straight as exactly what it says on the tin.

:CHappy

 

[GABA]

It's not those either, in fact, it is one of my favorite tropes played straight as exactly what it says on the tin.

:CHappy

You're forbidden from using your links in my thread. Plus I like surprises. Surprise me by posting something. :CHappy

 

[Deloi]

That reminds me, it was on Coruscant, bugger, we'll have to request it to be moved.