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@Fyston as per our discussion on discord, kinda wanted to bring it to OOC so we can get some clarification. I have a couple issues with your latest post:
"At the same time, he maneuvered his legs, putting his right leg between hers and putting his right foot behind hers."
"ensuring she could not simply pull back and stepping back was not an option. If she were to step backwards without taking additional time to extricate her legs, she would likely trip"
^ This suggests that Alais is directly behind Damien without being able to move back easily. He can't put distance between them. As a result, I haven't had her move back, and she's inches behind him. She has landed the first punch, and the second punch strikes right after that:
"At the same time, her left hand was still free. While his back was turned and he had put all his stock into breaking her arm, Alais slammed her fist once again into his back. This was a moment after landing the first blow"
^ As these are shock gloves, there's no need to completely rotate back to slam the punch. As a result, he'd have two quick electric jabs coming at his back.
"As he stood back up, he brought his left hand up to also grab her wrist,"
^ This was from your prior post, suggesting that your left hand was already committed to an action. You abruptly switch from that to this:
" As he spun, he ducked as well and stuck his elbow out,"
^ The left hand punch would have already landed by the time he realized he needed to spin. Again, she doesn't have to do a full wind up punch to shock him. This would be two hits in the same area, making him spazz again. During this time she's more than capable of having her right hand join in to keep shocking his back. He'd be completely spasming and be unable to do anything as a result.
"At the same time, he maneuvered his legs, putting his right leg between hers and putting his right foot behind hers."
"ensuring she could not simply pull back and stepping back was not an option. If she were to step backwards without taking additional time to extricate her legs, she would likely trip"
^ This suggests that Alais is directly behind Damien without being able to move back easily. He can't put distance between them. As a result, I haven't had her move back, and she's inches behind him. She has landed the first punch, and the second punch strikes right after that:
"At the same time, her left hand was still free. While his back was turned and he had put all his stock into breaking her arm, Alais slammed her fist once again into his back. This was a moment after landing the first blow"
^ As these are shock gloves, there's no need to completely rotate back to slam the punch. As a result, he'd have two quick electric jabs coming at his back.
"As he stood back up, he brought his left hand up to also grab her wrist,"
^ This was from your prior post, suggesting that your left hand was already committed to an action. You abruptly switch from that to this:
" As he spun, he ducked as well and stuck his elbow out,"
^ The left hand punch would have already landed by the time he realized he needed to spin. Again, she doesn't have to do a full wind up punch to shock him. This would be two hits in the same area, making him spazz again. During this time she's more than capable of having her right hand join in to keep shocking his back. He'd be completely spasming and be unable to do anything as a result.
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