Haazen Nion

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NAME: Zayne Nion
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: jedi
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 17
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'5
WEIGHT: 125 lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Blond
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 5/10
DEXTERITY: 6/10
CONSTITUTION: 6/10
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10
WISDOM: 6/10
CHARISMA: 7/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force push
Battle meditation [only the ability to see the battle not influence people]
Force sense

SKILLS:
Acrobatics- Zayne is very good in gymnastics and acrobatics where he uses the force to help his movements and his jump hight.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Makashi

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Zayne is a very strong against temptaions and seduction being able to resist it. Zayne is also strong in torture being able to rip information out of people by using the force. Zayne is weak against emotion and loss not being able to take the death of friends and loved ones lightly.

GEAR:
A curved blue lightsaber that looks like this
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For the makashi form I use but he only has limeted knowledge on how to use it
A DL-44 blaster
A black jedi knight robe like the one anakin wore at order 66
Black jedi padawan boots
SHIP: None

DROIDS: None

PETS: None

PERSONALITY:
Zayne is a very serious man who never likes to joke around and if he catches a joke during combat he will shut you up imediatley with any means. Zayne though is facinated with other specias and how their society works and their history. Zayne sometimes seems emotionless because of what he has gone through as a child so if I seem like that while role playing you know why. Zayne hates smugglers and pirates so wen ever he sees them he will go berserk so it is easy to determine that he has a short temper and can hold long grudges.

BIOGRAPHY:
Zayne was born to a loving and caring family on the planet Tatoine. There his father a 25 year old ex-jedi taught him about the force and how to use a lightsaber and pistol when he was only 5 years old. But peace didn't last forever. When Zayne was only 13 years old smuggler and pirates invaded his home and killed his parents right in front of him. Angry and full of rage Zayne pushed the pirates back through the door and then he drew his fathers lightsaber and killed the pirates one by one hidden in the shadows like an assasin. Looking back at what he had done Zayne climbed aboard the pirates ship and flew into space where he wandered planet after planet looking for refuge and safe house but he couldn't find any so he was forced to stay on his ship and train and train until he learned he had the ability called battle meditation when he was meditating and focused on the planet below when all of a sudden images of the battle down below appeared in his head and let him veiw the whole fight. But soon he had to refuel so he stopped on Nar shadda to pick up gas when all of a sudden one of the pirates that somehow survived his fury appeared at the gas station so Zayne took out the curved lightsaber he had created and cut him down in public. After cutting the pirate down in public Zayne fled again but this time he didn't appear for years so people would forget about the insident. While hiding out Zayne met a jedi master who offered to take him to the temple for training in the ways of a jedi but Zayne refused and the jedi just left his contact number and left. After Days of thinking and meditating Zayne decided to accept the Jedi's offer and contacted the jedi who came and picked him up and brought him to the temple where he now resides waiting to be trained by a master...



LIKES AND DISLIKES:
Zayne likes to just sit and relax and when ever he has the chance, Train. He also likes to collect antiques like lightsabers and pistols and read when ever he has time. But he Hates pirates and force senstives who abuse their power. he also hates dictators they are just like slave owners.
First profile :CSly Hope its good :D

Please dismiss the title as I have just learned that Haazen is a canon character
 
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GABA

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Isn't Haazen the name of a Sith from the SWKOTOR comic series?
 

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The blaster that Han Solo Used is called DL-44 I think I may be wrong other then that I like ur profile:D
 

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So, as a 10 year old boy he killed smugglers and assassins that killed his father, who was a Jedi Knight? I know that you specified that he 'stayed to the shadows'... but you're in a house... and 10 years old.

Then you stole there ship... at 10 years old... knowing how to fly it. Yes, that could be contributed to force abilities but you should note that. And you traveled the galaxy for a while... as a 10 year old until you were 15. Kind of unusual, but ok.

However, you should know that Alderaan has been destroyed for almost a millennium and doesn't exist.

As well, (because I'm the Lore Master of the Jedi and thus am accepting people into the faction) the fact that his emotions rule him so, he's going to need a Master who can help him with that specifically.

Otherwise, interesting story. It can easily be fixed if you upped the age and made your father old as well as yourself (mid-20's perhaps?)

But you're still going to have to edit Alderaan.
 

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So, as a 10 year old boy he killed smugglers and assassins that killed his father, who was a Jedi Knight? I know that you specified that he 'stayed to the shadows'... but you're in a house... and 10 years old.

Then you stole there ship... at 10 years old... knowing how to fly it. Yes, that could be contributed to force abilities but you should note that. And you traveled the galaxy for a while... as a 10 year old until you were 15. Kind of unusual, but ok.

However, you should know that Alderaan has been destroyed for almost a millennium and doesn't exist.

As well, (because I'm the Lore Master of the Jedi and thus am accepting people into the faction) the fact that his emotions rule him so, he's going to need a Master who can help him with that specifically.

Otherwise, interesting story. It can easily be fixed if you upped the age and made your father old as well as yourself (mid-20's perhaps?)

But you're still going to have to edit Alderaan.

Alright thank you I will edit that :)
 
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