Jor'ika skirata first character cinger starburst

[MandoMania]

NAME:Cinger Starburst
FACTION: N\A
RANK: N\A
SPECIES: Human (Mandalorian)
AGE: 40
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6,5
WEIGHT: 200 (is not fat though)
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Black
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Anakin style scars over both eyes and one straight down his lip and a few over his chest and back.
FORCE SENSITIVE:No

STRENGTH: can lift 400 pounds
DEXTERITY: is nimble and agile
CONSTITUTION: is at peak of health for a human
INTELLIGENCE: Incredibly smart and crafty
WISDOM: Not the wisest guy on the block but has had much experience in combat against all kinds of opponents.
CHARISMA: Doesn't charm people to much unless you like a guy who will shoot you on sight.

FORCE POWERS:
force Detection (to sense what is going on around him) and Force Reflex (faster reflexes).

SKILLS: Mandalorian warrior skills. (Medic, mechanic, hand to hand combat\ranged combat)


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Has a Dark sword but does not use it often as he has had limited training in sword combat. could beat a Padawan but not a Knight unless luck was on his side.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:Has a strong tactical mind and is always looking for a way to even the odds of victory
will however be rash\reckless at times and rush in with out thinking. Has the tendency to alert the enemy to his presence. Will some times lose focus of the ultimate goal.

GEAR: 2x Westar 35 blaster pistols, EE-3 Carbine rifle, Knuckle Vibro blades, Grenades (Sonic,Proton,Thermal, Proximity mine,), Jet pack with missiles, Wrist flame thrower, wrist rockets, knee\toe darts, Verpine Shatter Hand gun 2x, Verpine Rifle With spare replacements for all. Boba Fett style Mandalorian armor that is colored with green, blue and orange with replacement parts.


SHIP:Modified Firespray-31-class patrol and attack craft.

DROIDS:
Astromech, Protocol, IG-86\88 assassin droids

PETS:
Neck battle dogs and a strill

PERSONALITY:
Harsh hard core style guy that often doesn't get along well with others, however if you can friend him he is loyal to the end.

BIOGRAPHY:
Cinger is a Mandalorian warrior who was adopted by the Deathwatch as a baby when his parents died in an accident. Later on he found out that his parents were some of the last remaining Mandalorians and that there death had been rigged by the death watch. Cinger then turned on the death watch clan that adopted him eliminating all. Cinger then began his carer as a bounty hunter over the years he collected bounties for a mysterious man who put prices on the heads of Imperial men. cinger is a ruthless Bounty Hunter\Merc\Assassin. If it pays well Cinger will take the job, however he will bail if it starts getting to close to costing him his neck. Cinger surprisingly has soft side that if you can reach it you have a very good friend that you can rely on. No one really knows anything about him besides the fact hes is a bounty hunter and is Mando. Cinger is always trying to become more famouse than Boba Fett. When things get Harry he He gets Scary!

KILLS:
None

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
none

DUELING RING MATCHES:
none

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
none

ROLE-PLAYS:
none

 

[Neo Shark]

We're not in the clone wars era.

If he's not in a faction you may as well just put "N/A" for your rank.

You can't just make yourself resistant to force powers by saying he was trained to resist them. That's called god modding.

The only purpose your biography serves is to explain why your Mandalorian is trained in the force.

The character is fairly 2 dimensional with no real weaknesses and too many strengths.

*Edit

I would suggest you scrap this character and try again. This is a role play site not a video game. Invest yourself into the creation of your character and try to make something interesting.

 

[MandoMania]

I will work on that! thanks!

I know thta this isn't clone wars era but is there any thing saying that my characters back ground story can't go back to the clone wars. note he does need to be older so i will change that.

 

[Ral]

Did someone move this to the archives?

 

[MandoMania]

Any recommendations on changes.

 

[Sierrien]

I think he posted it in the archives accidentally <.< I would suggest asking a mod to move it to main characters folder for you?

 

[Neo Shark]

I would suggest you scrap this character and try again. This is a role play site not a video game. Invest yourself into the creation of your character and try to make something interesting. Take some time to read the lore on the site, and look at the available factions. A good way to get started is to join one of the main factions and start interacting with other role players. Read other people's profiles, look at the lore, and then use that as a sort of frame work to create your own character.

*Edit

Also, just make the title of the thread the name of the character.

 

[Ral]

Like I said, if you need help just ask me in a PM, I'm really good with Mandos.

 

[MandoMania]

Ral aran your right I need some help.