Kiara Cabaoth

[Keinushi]

NAME: Kiara Cabaoth
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Corellian
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5'0"
WEIGHT: 90pd
EYES: Grey
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Caucasian
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: No
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes

STRENGTH: 5 ("You hit like a girl!)
DEXTERITY: 15 ("Dodge this!")
CONSTITUTION: 10 (While not normal, her health is still easily damaged when hit)
INTELLIGENCE: 13 (Its there, just waiting to be accessed.)
WISDOM: 12 (While she can't last long, it still recovers fairy quickly)
CHARISMA: 10 (Some hate her, some like her, depends on the person, but most like.)

FORCE POWERS:
Force push/telekinesis

SKILLS:
Medium level Hacking abilities

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths:
Stealth
Computers
Photographic Memory

Weaknesses:
can't last in a long fight
daddy issues

GEAR:
1 Light Saber (pink)

1 re-breather

1 Comm unit

1 Datapad

SHIP:


PETS:
none

PERSONALITY:
Kiara, like many depressed people, uses a bubbly personality to cover her own sadness. Being adhd, she is easily excited. She will cling to whichever master she is given due to the fact that she grew up without a set father figure.

BIOGRAPHY:
Kiara was born to a broken family. Her parents fought constantly, and her father did little more than ignore her. At the age of 4, one of their fights got out of hand, resulting in the death of both of her parents. Alone and scared, she was taken in by a next door neighbour. This woman raise kiara like her own daughter, teaching her morals and useful skills. Though she would disappear for long periods of time, she would always return.

At the age of 14 she went to a special school paid for by the neighbour where she learned even more skills. It was on returning home however that she was discovered to have force sensitivity and taken to the temple for training.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

 

[Natise]

busted!

 

[Crystalmath]

Her biography actually calls her Katarn instead of Kiara as well >_< it's all just copy/paste dude, well, I lolled

 

[Deloi]

she's a different character. just the ancestor of the previous one. I have changed the first name to reflect this.

Don't you mean descendant and nothing but the first name has changed.

 

[Deloi]

You forgot to add the sauce to your copy pasta, which does not look revamped.

 

[Natise]

what's up with all the random links in your posts Deloi?

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Alright everyone, I think we've heard enough from the peanut gallery. There's only so many times someone needs to point out that there's been a copy/paste.

this is insane. my character Hovwi is a more blatent copy than this. Had I done a different name and picture this would have gone through.

The last name and the picture are fine, I don't have a problem with that. Similar characters are fine as well. However, this is a copy/paste job from a fourth timeline profile, which won't be allowed.

You can keep the character similar, but the profile needs to be different. You need to show that you've actually put effort into it instead of just making it look like you copy/pasted a profile and changed a few things.

 

[Deloi]

what's up with all the random links in your posts Deloi?

I'm a troper.

 

[Ninjedi]

A Corellian.. born on Coruscant. Wouldn't she just be Coruscanti then?

 

[Brandon Rhea]

thank you. so nice when a real admin steps in. The biography didn't really fit this character that well anyways.

Sreeya is also a real admin, so knock off the attitude. I explained the exact same thing she did. Had it continued to be a copy/paste, it would have been locked.

When Sreeya tells you something, you don't stomp your feet on the ground and go "nanana I can't hear you" or argue it to death. If you have a problem with the ruling, tell me what your problem is.

Otherwise your posts like "so nice when a real admin steps in" just look petty, vindictive, and immature.

 

[Natise]

I'm a troper.

So funny things that you post on here are saved to that website?

 

[Deloi]

So funny things that you post on here are saved to that website?

Actually its the other way around. My posts are examples of what is on the website. But tropes I think of are sometimes added to the page.

 

[Brandon Rhea]

You guys are completely off topic now, so please move this conversation elsewhere.

 

[Deloi]

hey, even you said peanut gallery. You told me exactly what was wrong. Your the only one who does that. All the other admisn just say "its wrong, fix it or I'll lock it" you say "this is wrong, this is ok, fix the wrong and its ok."

They only do that when the problem is obvious.

 

[Fusion]

I know how Keinushi feels. Lavi simply sits and needs to be prodded, while Brandon usually gives me a response the same day.

 

[Deloi]

I know how Keinushi feels. Lavi simply sits and needs to be prodded, while Brandon usually gives me a response the same day.

That's because they know Brandon's got it.

 

[Deloi]

except if you had read the whole profile, you'd have noticed that every thing was changed minus the name, picture, and personality. (yes the bio was changed, though only slightly.) So I changed the name, think that must be the issue cause everythign else had differences.

you just kept shouting copy/paste copy/paste. and to change it. brandon came in and said change the bio. he told me exactly what to change, and I changed it. its not that hard to be an admin! just be precise! blanket statements make us both look like fools when I can't get what your on about, and you keep shouting the same thing.

I read the whole profile and didn't see very many changes until sreeya came in. In fact, I actually saw several errors before sreeya came in. I'm seeing a connection to problems being fixed with sreeya coming in. Also the name picture and personality was not the only things unchanged. There were several things unchanged e.g. everything else(barring the change to the bio as minor as that was.)

 

[Brandon Rhea]

except if you had read the whole profile, you'd have noticed that every thing was changed minus the name, picture, and personality. (yes the bio was changed, though only slightly.) So I changed the name, think that must be the issue cause everythign else had differences.

you just kept shouting copy/paste copy/paste. and to change it. brandon came in and said change the bio. he told me exactly what to change, and I changed it. its not that hard to be an admin! just be precise! blanket statements make us both look like fools when I can't get what your on about, and you keep shouting the same thing.

Except I wasn't specific. I didn't tell you to change the biography. Here's what I said:

The last name and the picture are fine, I don't have a problem with that. Similar characters are fine as well. However, this is a copy/paste job from a fourth timeline profile, which won't be allowed.

You can keep the character similar, but the profile needs to be different. You need to show that you've actually put effort into it instead of just making it look like you copy/pasted a profile and changed a few things.

I told you what was fine, not what you needed to change.

The difference between what I said and what Sreeya said is very little. The difference between how you reacted to the two of us is that with me you immediately said OK, but with Sreeya you decided to be intransigent.

Now, I think we're done with this topic. This isn't an admin feedback thread, it's a Character Profile. We've had admin feedback threads up for 12 days, so I can't help it if some of you are apparently unwilling to post in those threads.

Either politely post your concerns about an admin in a feedback thread or a PM with me, or cut the crap when you feel like you have to fly off the handle at someone.

The end.

 

[Deloi]

"This is a copy paste from one of your previous characters, please change the bio and (list of whatever else) then this character will be allowed. Otherwise I will have to lock it."

That paragraph went without saying as obvious from your acknowledgement that you knew this was a copy pasta. In fact, do you expect her to say anything besides "no" when you don't even give notification that you are using katarn as a template?

 

[Brandon Rhea]

You know, "we're done with this topic" and "The end" pretty specifically mean to stop this conversation. Any posts about this afterward warrant infractions.

So enough.