Logan Rax

[ShadowMandalore]

NAME: Logan Rax

FACTION: Mandalorian

RANK: warrior

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 25

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 6 foot

WEIGHT: 170 (Medium build.)

EYES: Black

HAIR: Black( Long reaching down to chin)

SKIN: Pale white.

CREDITS: 15,000 Cr

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scar above left eye and one going diagonally across lip

FORCE SENSITIVE:

STRENGTH: 7/10. Able to handle most humans and a few trandoshans.

DEXTERITY: 6/10. Fairly Maneuverable while in armor. Even without his armor, he can doge a blaster bolt quicker than most humans and is able to move quickly in hand to hand combat.

CONSTITUTION: 5/10. Having a strict diet and with an intense daily workout, he keeps his body well nourished physically and mentally.

INTELLIGENCE: 7/10. Trained as a child through the age of sixteen and received education from Taven on the basics engineering and medicine . When leaving Mandalore he ventured across the galaxy, acquiring knowledge of many systems and civilizations the spread across the outer rim. Taking the time to study in the libraries, he gained tutelage from many mentors. Even learning on how the galaxy can be beautiful and severe.

WISDOM: 4/10. Able to analyze the battle and accesses the situation.

CHARISMA: 2/10. Mostly silent, but adds feedback when necessary.

FORCE POWERS:

SKILLS: Skilled in both close and long distance combat, neutralizing his target with ease. Prefers stealth and is able to infiltrate the most tightest facilities. When in a firefight or engaging a saber wielding enemy, there will be explosions and disintegrations. Has excellent piloting abilities and can hold his ground in space combat. Can speak Basic, Mando’a , Huttese, Trandoshan, and Rodian.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Basic forms of knife fighting and knife throwing.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Logan is an experienced Mercenary and bounty hunter. Trained at a small age, he is able to reach the top of his peak. His cunning and strategic methods assists him and many others in the most intense battles. Where there is a huge enemy stronghold, he can analyze what tactical method to take and intercept it.. Even with the basic blaster and a few detonators, he is a dangerous adversary.

When in a deep sleep, Logan has nightmares of his parent’s murder. In certain areas, he often has flashbacks of his earlier battles or the night of his parents assassination. Anti-social, but soft around women and children. When pushed, he goes into a fury until his enemy is reduced to rubble. No matter how difficult the situation, he always follows orders and completes the mission.

GEAR:

Armor: Under the apprenticeship of Taven, he was taught in the art of blacksmithing and forged his armor of durasteel.

Helmet: Has the ability of sealing to compensate for pressure changes, and holding 2 hours. The helmet can control weapons, sensors, and his jet pack with verbal commands. The helmet's HUD (heads-up-display) features information on the surrounding environment as well as a 360-degree field of vision. At the top of the antenna is a rangefinder capable of tracking up to 30 targets from a distance of 100 meters.

Plate Armor: Thin ceramic plates that disperse physical and blast impacts. The Plates cover the chest, thighs, shins, and boots.

Body suit: A reinforced armor mesh battle/flight suit. The inner lining of the suit blocked Fire, acid, Intense heat and cold.

Jetpack: Mitrinomon Z-6 jetpack with a fuel source of two hours.

Gauntlets: His left gauntlet had a Miniature flame protector. Directly below this is a wrist laser with the strength of a blaster rifle. A concussion rocket, which utilizes computer tracking.

The right gauntlet has a fibercord whip with a grappling device. A retractable Durasteel blade and a dart launcher.

Knee pads: Rocket dart launchers.

Weapons:

358 Krayat Barrel hand cannons (x2)

DC-15A (5 round burst) with grenade attachment. \

Dagger: Medium in length and folded four times.


SHIP: The pedestal, a MandalMotors Pursuer-class enforcement ship, is a patrol craft which was popular with the Mandalorian police units. Two Tion Mil/Sci Industries Mil-StarIV engines propelled the heavy patrol craft, and there were three Corellian Engineering Corporation x41 maneuvering thrusters mounted on the port-side stabilizer. Powerful Torplex military-grade shield generators provided protection. It is armed with twin forward firing laser (Bottom) and an ion cannon (On top). One proton torpedo launcher which held a magazine of five torpedoes. The ship also holds a Minelayer that launches a set of four void-7 seismic charges.


A sophisticated sensor array system. stealth systems. A Sensor mask. Jamming systems. A Tractor beam projector to capture targets.

The ship also includes: Five force field-enclosed prisoner cages. A small bunk. Medical Bay. A small storage area.

DROIDS:
Xair-6 is a custom Dark trooper battle droid with blue T-visor. He is a servant and partner of Logan Rax. Before Logan’s parents were killed, Xair-6 was the protocol droid for the Rax family and offend took care of Logan as a child. Trying to apprehend the Mandalorian aslant, Xair was severely injured by a blaster bolt. Able to still function, he managed to save Logan from their burning home and took him to the underground armory and storage area. When Logan awoke, the droid was deactivated. The droid’s body had been damaged, but its processing unit was salvageable. After being recovered by Logan a few years later, the droid was refitted into the body of a Dark Trooper battle droid. Though it is massive in size, it cares for many sentient creatures with warm female voice.


PETS:


PERSONALITY:
Logan is cold and often a distance from comrades. Mostly silent, he speaks whenever it is an important matter. Even when his comrades have fallen battle, he will take the time mourn them and give them his sympathies to their loved ones. Having strong sense of justice, he will help those who cannot fend for themselves. He is honorable towards his people and his enemies.

BIOGRAPHY:

Logan was born on the outskirts of the Mandalorain capital of Kelebe. Logan was the son of both Darius and Sunda Rax, high ranking lieutenants of Mandalore. When Logan was young, the planet Mandalore had been engaged with a splinter group known as the Crimson Crusaders. A group that wanted to restore Mandalore to its days of conquering systems. Logan’s parents had assisted Mandalore by decimating the group, scattering them across the system.

In a act of vengeance, an assassin was sent to exterminate the members of Clan Rax. While having a game of hide n seek, a smoke grenade was thrown into the home and Logan’s parents were shot in cold blood. Before the assailant’s departure, a thermal detonator was left to destroy the home and everything within it. Before passing out, Logan managed to get glimpse of the murderer.

Before the house could be destroyed Logan was rescued by Xair-6, the family’s protocol droid. Logan awoke in the under armory and storage area with Xair holding him in his arms. With the droid being deactivated, he was all alone. The orphaned child began to searching for his father’s close friend, Taven Dulak. When reaching Taven’s home, Logan was taken in by the Mandalorian soldier.

From shooting a blaster to piloting ships, Taven homed Logan’s skills. Logan was now at right the age to begin his verd'goten, the traditional rite of passage. The area of the trial was in the jungle regions of the planet, where the most ferocious beasts roamed and hunted the most frailest species. Given only the small blade and the clothes on his back, he had to survive for five days in the grueling jungle.

With his familiarity with the flora, he fed off the fruits that hanged from the tallest trees. Some days would include trapping a small beast and killing it for a meal. The scorching heat and intense rain was difficult at certain times, but was able endure the green inferno. However, Logan was being stalked by a fierce hunter of the jungle. Before he could sleep behind the campfire, ferocious growls came from the shrubs.

A large beast charged towards him, but he was able to doge the razor sharp claws from the beast. It was a nexu, standing about five times the size of a human and with teeth that could tear through flesh as if it were paper. The boy and creature were engaged in combat for hours. After sustaining a few lacerations, Logan was the victor.

Logan had to continue to the extraction point and that was a few collimators to the north. Using the flora that provided an ointment for his wounds, he managed to bandaged his lacerations. After many excruciating hours, he had made the extraction point where Taven was awaiting him. At that moment, Logan had survived and had became a Mandalorian.

At the age of sixteen, Logan was under the apprenticeship of blacksmithing and soon was able to forge his suit of armor. Forged from the material of durasteel, he painted his armor black. The color black, in Mandalorian tradition, stood for justice. However, within the darkest reaches of Mandalore, soldiers of the ashes began to rise. Soldiers of red began to form and seek revenge.

Before attending to his tasks on a sunny morning, the sounds of cannon fire could be heard from the city of Kelebe. On foot Logan managed to reach the city that was engulfed in fire and smoke. The crimson crusaders had tried to capture the capital Kelebe, but the splinter group failed in their mission. Even through the true Mandalorians had won the battle, they suffered many causalities. Asking one of the soldiers for Taven, a grieving glance was given to the young Mandalorian.

He was taken to one of the lieutenants that was holding a damaged helmet. A helmet that belonged to Taven. In grievance, he left Mandalore with his skills and his armor that was fully operational. Taking jobs from Hutts and other Governments, his fame grew. He later returned to Mandalore to serve his people and revive Clan Rax.


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BOUNTIES COLLECTED:

Till memes: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?55513-Hutt-Cartel-Bounty-TILL-MEMES

DUELING RING MATCHES:

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ROLE-PLAYS:

 

[Sisk_Renelo]

Ok, couple of comments.

What really stood out to me was how high all of his skills were. You have five at an 8 or above. That's high even for characters at the top if their faction. There's no room to grow. Normally new characters have 1 skill at an 8 or 9, maybe two at 7, and the rest below. Right now he's really kinda OP for a new guy.

Second, of like to see his verd'goten. You're not a warrior until you've beaten the odds and prove that you deserve the title if warrior.

Third, new guys don't get Beskar. There are only three suits of pure Beskar in the whole faction, and those are all being worn. Before some RP's are finished and you've proven your worth, you gotta go with a lower quality metal, and even when you earn real Beskar, its gonna be a compound or a weave.

Ok, that's my feedback. I'm on my phone so it can't be horribly detailed.

 

[ShadowMandalore]

I will edit his skills then. Do I have to edit his backgroundas well? You would want to see his verd'goten? Is durasteel acceptable?.....

 

[Vaanes]

Your character wouldn't get his armor until after he completed it. Writing a brief (or in my case, something really long >.> in his bio is what sisk is talking about I think) As for the armor material, durasteel is what my character uses.

Hey Sisk, is mentioning that a mando needs a verd'goten something you have to tell a lot of people? :P

 

[Sisk_Renelo]

No one thinks about it. So yeah. But so you have a better idea, a verd'goten is a warriors test. Normally undertaken at 13, the aspiring warrior is thrown into a situation where they have to use all their skill, wits, cunning, and training to survive. This can be anything from being thrown into a wilderness area and told to survive for a certain length if time, or to kill a beast with only the most basic tools. Normally there's a twist thrown in, like malfunctioning armor or equipment, poisonous areas, lack of shelter, etc. overcome that, and you're considered a warrior.

And durasteel is fine. It can be a Mandalorian cut, it just can't be Beskar.

 

[Vaanes]

Learn to love this site. It's incredibly helpful.

Example: The Mandalorian language page :D

 

[ShadowMandalore]

I do see your point and I will add more detail to his verd'goten trial then. As for his skills and materials, they have been edited.

 

[ShadowMandalore]

The background has been revised. Is my character able wear his armor and have the title of Mandalorian?.....

 

[Vaanes]

It's basic, but it works. More detail would have been nice but your character did prove himself, at least in my humble opinion.

Seems like he can wear the armor and think of himself as a Mando to me. Hit me up if you would like to break him in at some point. Vaanes needs a drinking buddy.

 

[ShadowMandalore]

That would be nice. Where we should we RP?.....

 

[Vaanes]

Most rp takes place on the "story" subforum I think.

 

[ShadowMandalore]

You can pick a location and we can start.

 

[Kiro]

I'd like to see this character expanded and worked on a bit more. His personality is rather thin, and tells me very little about Logan as a person.

He often argues with his superiors, but always follows orders and completes the mission.

That seems extremely contradictionary to me. If he always follows orders and completes the mission, why does he argue in the first place? Just to be snide? And if he's a Mandalorian, he'd better have a good reason for arguing, or he'd have gotten his ass handed to him by his superior officers.

Secondly, we don't have ranks. Logan would just be a simple warrior, like almost every other Mandalorian.

Thirdly, the biography...

When logan was young, the planet mandalore had been engaged with a splinter group known as the Crimson Crusaders. A group that wanted to restore mandalore to its days of conquering systems.

The Mandalorians already have a group like that, called the Death Watch. Though their goals are different.

The Verd'goten is... alright. You don't have to change it, but for future reference: Being dumped on your own in a jungle for a week isn't really enough for a genuine Verd'goten. That's fairly common for most Mandalorians to do at any rate, as alot of them work as hunters and trappers when not at war.

The Verd'goten is usually a life-or-death challenge, that's meant to test you to the very extremes, and push you past it. Facing a nexu on your own with nothing but normal clothes and a knife certainly qualifies, but usually, one tries to ensure that the challenge will be horrific enough in some measure.

 

[ShadowMandalore]

Of course, I will add more detail to my character then.

 

[Vencu]

DEXTERITY: 6/10. Fairly Maneuverable while in armor.
CONSTITUTION: 5/10. Durable due to armor made from Durasteel.
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10. Trained as a child through the age of sixteen.

Dexterity is more than just how maneuverable he is in armor. What about out of armor?

Constitution is his level of health, not how resistant his armor is to attack. How healthy is he? Does he get sick easily? Does he have a disease or permanent physical injury?

Extensive training would certainly add to his intelligence level, but what about outside of that? Did he learn about the galaxy beyond the Mandalore Sector? Did someone teach him advanced mathematics? Engineering? Science? Advanced Medicine? The training he received when he was younger represents his core skills and abilities, but he is twenty-five now. What has he learned since then?

Other than what Kiro pointed out and the occasional spelling or capitalization error, it's a decent profile. You may want to put each section title in bold, though. It would make each section more distinguishable from the others.



EDIT: One last thing... he is six feet tall, but only 150 pounds. I may be mistaken, but that isn't a medium build. He'd probably be skinny. Maybe 160-170 would be better?

 

[ShadowMandalore]

I have edited my skills.

 

[Cassanova]

G'day! Just doing a quick Hutt Cartel Roster check. Hopefully you're aware, but your character is still on there! If this is accurate, please ensure that your character profile prefix is set to [Hutt]. If, for whatever reason, your character is no longer a member of the Cartel, please let me know as soon as you can, so I can remove them!

Cheers!
- Cassanova