Lou Wilson

[dblue095]

LouWilson

AGE

► 22​

SPECIES

► Human​

HEIGHT

► 6 Feet 4 Inches​

WEIGHT

► 160 Pounds​

EYE COLOR

► Blue​

HAIR COLOR

► Blonde​

HOMEWORLD

► Alderaan​

GENDER

► Male​

FACTION

► Jedi​

RANK

► Knight​

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► Yes​

BIOGRAPHY

Lou grew up as a normal child along his sister Lotus. He always loved to hear the story about his family and it's history inside the Jedi order. This led him to wanting to become a Jedi. He was always the one to tell David and Lotus stay out of trouble. When Lotus got in trouble with men he would have to come to her defense. He was considered the dad of the group, but he was the one who would always get in trouble.

Once he turned 18 he went to join the ranks of the order. He went on a journey to find other jedi for the time of 2 years. On his search he was hunted by the Hutt Cartel. Keeping his identity secret, he found himself living as a janitor for a few years on Coruscant. This is where he realised that there was something wrong within the force, not only on a galactic scale, but on an interpersonal scale. Bringing this up to his fellow jedi he requested the allowance of him watching over his force sensitive family members. He needs to move alongside the galaxy doing justified work alongside his sister and cousin, even if that means disobeying the jedi by watching from a far or close. Lou found himself disappearing out of nowhere, while actually leaving with his family to adventure. As a Jedi missing in ationg he uses his cousin David`s a book of ancient force techniques, which Lou uses to train. He's the diplomat of swordsman of the group.

Nearly shot to death, Lou gained three scars after being attacked by a group of thieves. One on the right side of his hairline and One in his shoulder.
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Personality

Lou usually is the quiet type. It gave him time to think about the situation he tend to get himself into. He is a natural leader and always found the stories of Jedi to be honorable. He's a nobleman who also isn't afraid to break code in order for justice.
Holding a conversation with him would quickly show you his charming friendly nature.

Lou always found himself pressuring his peers to do the right thing, even in a shady situation. Lou believes so much in the force, he thinks it's the reason life as we know came into existence. Laid back, Lou didn't find the ways of the law as strict, in other words he breaks the law.

Gear

Lightsaber given to him by Jedi Order.<Out of possession>(Stolen)|BLUE CRYSTAL|
Lightsaber, kept at home as a spare. |YELLOW CRYSTAL|
Medium Force-Friendly Armor(his family currently working on improvements on Alderaan.)
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/medium-force-friendly-armor.77087/ ]

JEDI STEALTH ARMOR (common for him to wear.)
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jedi-stealth-armor.77827/ ]

Nerf Herder Lightfreighter shared with his cousin David and sister Lotus
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?forums/technology.598/page-7 ]

Stories

1. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/always-in-something.78053/page-2#post-1400170
2. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/it%E2%80%99s-a-scary-sight.78881/
3. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/holocron-hunt-on-tatooine.78763/#post-1404033

 

[Soup]

Same issues.

 

[dblue095]

Same issues.

noted

 

[Zach]

Quick feedback: Some of his profile may need to be expanded upon. Off the top of my head, I know it's not incredibly rare to take on new members at the age of 18, but the Jedi probably wouldn't send him out on his own that early on in his training. They also forbid the concept of family, and do not allow personal connections to be made, like the friendship he has with his sister and cousin. Just some food for thought to look over before a mod gives you a review.

 

[dblue095]

@Zach
At the time of now he`s 22 however and that`s when he left with his family. I won`t lie both of his family members being force users make it kind of acceptable for a jedi to keep eyes on then, dont you think? So it`s a bit weird IDK let me know what you think

 

[Zach]

Well, they don't allow family relationships to exist in the Jedi Order. Especially not if one of those family members' character profiles is applying for membership in the Jedi Exiles faction, and another is a part of the Hutt Cartel. Just my take on it. If it makes it easier, there's no rule saying you can't have multiple characters in the same group.

If you intend to keep your characters in direct contact with each other, I recommend changing the Faction Tag to all be the same, either as a team of Jedi that were paired together (not as family members), or all as Independents that were trained outside of the Jedi or the Exiles. As mentioned before, any Independents won't be able to start with a lightsaber, but these are all just things to consider whenever you have time to sit down to look everything over.

 

[dblue095]

Well, they don't allow family relationships to exist in the Jedi Order. Especially not if one of those family members' character profiles is applying for membership in the Jedi Exiles faction, and another is a part of the Hutt Cartel. Just my take on it. If it makes it easier, there's no rule saying you can't have multiple characters in the same group.

If you intend to keep your characters in direct contact with each other, I recommend changing the Faction Tag to all be the same, either as a team of Jedi that were paired together (not as family members), or all as Independents that were trained outside of the Jedi or the Exiles. As mentioned before, any Independents won't be able to start with a lightsaber, but these are all just things to consider whenever you have time to sit down to look everything over.

I can see that. However is it hard to believe that a jedi wouldn`t disobey as long as he doesnt get caught. I'm just speaking from a character perspective thing.

 

[dblue095]

I can see that. However is it hard to believe that a jedi wouldn`t disobey as long as he doesnt get caught. I'm just speaking from a character perspective thing.

@Zach

 

[dblue095]

fixed

 

[Raydo]

See my comments on Lotus' profile. Everything that was said there also applies to here as well.

In addition, it does not make a whole lot of sense for him to join the Jedi and then pretty much immediately leave and just do his own thing while remaining the in the Jedi. If he just kind of did his own thing and ignored the Orders of the Jedi he would either be assumed to have died or joined the exiles.

In its current state, he would not be allowed to stay in the Jedi Order. Feel free to make necessary changes and tag me.

 

[dblue095]

See my comments on Lotus' profile. Everything that was said there also applies to here as well.

In addition, it does not make a whole lot of sense for him to join the Jedi and then pretty much immediately leave and just do his own thing while remaining the in the Jedi. If he just kind of did his own thing and ignored the Orders of the Jedi he would either be assumed to have died or joined the exiles.

In its current state, he would not be allowed to stay in the Jedi Order. Feel free to make necessary changes and tag me.

oh with this guy, they assume he died, but he really went with is sister and cousin. I just like the idea of the armor it looks cool

On the other hand I was going through the rules and I never saw anything saying I had to discuss personality. I know in the past the site made you do it. Aye but I saw a loophole and took it

 

[dblue095]

See my comments on Lotus' profile. Everything that was said there also applies to here as well.

In addition, it does not make a whole lot of sense for him to join the Jedi and then pretty much immediately leave and just do his own thing while remaining the in the Jedi. If he just kind of did his own thing and ignored the Orders of the Jedi he would either be assumed to have died or joined the exiles.

In its current state, he would not be allowed to stay in the Jedi Order. Feel free to make necessary changes and tag me.

Ok So i changed it up. So the Jedi thinks he died because he disappeared to live with his family.

The bio shows a bit of his personality. Personality is always a changing thing, that's human nature. Personality is based under the situation you're in at that moment

 

[dblue095]

fixed

 

[dblue095]

See my comments on Lotus' profile. Everything that was said there also applies to here as well.

In addition, it does not make a whole lot of sense for him to join the Jedi and then pretty much immediately leave and just do his own thing while remaining the in the Jedi. If he just kind of did his own thing and ignored the Orders of the Jedi he would either be assumed to have died or joined the exiles.

In its current state, he would not be allowed to stay in the Jedi Order. Feel free to make necessary changes and tag me.

I’m still waiting for approvals on all my characters

 

[The Good Doctor]

@Raydo

 

[Raydo]

Same comment as your other profiles.

APPROVED