Lyer Marren

[Dimaggio]

NAME: Lyer Marren
FACTION: Mandalorian
RANK: verd
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 19
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6"0
WEIGHT: 175 lbs
EYES: Dark Green
HAIR: Blond
SKIN: white
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING Marks: Cut over his eye
FORCE SENSITIVE: None

STRENGTH: 4/10
DEXTERITY: 8/10
CONSTITUTION: 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 2/10
CHARISMA: 6/10

FORCE POWERS: None


SKILLS: Good in hand to hand combat, Great in gun marksmanship, Stealthy


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORM: None

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: He is good at hiding and being stealthy, He is good at escaping enemies. His weaknesses are bad at being a pilot, and he is not very smart.

GEAR: Taskmaster Body armor, and a taskmaster carbine

SHIP: A Starfighter

DROIDS: Droidika

PETS: Ca'oya

PERSONALITY: He is very greedy and will do anything for money, He is also a very untrustworthy person. He will do nothing for anyone that indicates laziness, He is not very loyal to anyone especially his faction. By any means he is a bad example a well. He is easily angered as well.

The overall Highlights Of Lyers Life
BIOGRAPHY: Lyer was separated from his family at a young age. He was lost in the mandalorian forests then later he came face to face to a young Ca'oya. he was saved by madalrian hunter. He was taught in several arts so in the future he could be a mandalorian warrior. All through Lyer's life he was trained in stealth, shooting, and hand to hand combat. He has progressed in his skills and is now ready to become a mandalorian warrior. He now has a amazing pet saved by the hunter and a great skill set.

After being rescued Lyer was separated from his pet while his pet was in training. When he was 8 he went through 2 training subjects and when he was 12 he finished them all. For the last 7 years he has been practicing and competing in all of the subjects now he is ready to become part of the powerful mandalorian warriors army.

Lyer Marren went hunting out in the mandalorian forests he was scaning the area with his carbine he found a grown Ca'oya. When he was about to shoot a jedi jumps in front of his shot so when he shot the jedi so he took the jedi's lightsaber, and he wants to be a mandalorian so he knew the huts would buy this lightsaber. He will not just do the simple jobs he will help with the big bad challenges he will help kill some one. He will help rob a bank for credits if he gets a big enough cut, but he is not scared of many things so he will go against anything he will try his best even if their a higher rank than him he wont give up. When he was at the age of 12 he went through the right of passage they dropped him in the woods he had to survive at least 24 hours out in the wilderness.

So Lyer only had a knife so he hid up in a tree so that he can make a spear 5 hours later he got finished with the spear he went hunting for some food he couldn't find any food for hours. After a couple of hours he went and looked for a place for water he was about to die of hunger and thirst, but when he finally found the river sitting there was a nother Ca'oya he threw the spear and he stabbed the Ca'oya in the chest so he dragged it to a tree so he could cut it open and get the meat to eat. Then when he woke up it was already over he finished it.

Over the last 10 years Lyer was not accepted in as the Mandalorian warrior so lyer went back into training, and when he got at the end of the training he was going to look for another job. He took more training on working on the new gun models so he could learn how to use these guns in combat. Lyer has been practicing so hard he has learned more about the gun models so he thinks he should get one since he has been working on them so hard. Lyer went the huts market and he found the gun he was looking for it was only 150 credits the a conscript blaster carbine. Lyer bought the carbine for 150 credits after all of lyer's training he has become more trustworthy than before. So now lyer is still looking for a job.

 

[Vencu]

I'd like to see the biography expanded quite a bit. There are a lot of gaps.

Why was he separated from his family at a young age? Who were they? Did they look for him? What happened when he came face to face with the ca'oya? How was he saved? Why didn't the Mandalorian return Lyer to his family? Why did the Mandalorian decide to look after and train Lyer? How did the hunter save his pet? Why was he separated from his pet during training?

Why would the Hutts want to buy a lightsaber? What does that have to do with being a Mandalorian? How did an accidental shooting result in his dream to take on the 'big bad challenges' you mention? I have a hard time believing a Jedi would just throw himself out in front of a blaster bolt. The Jedi would probably sense Lyer long before he got close, but that's debatable with the wildlife all around them. However, if he was running in a direction that would put him in Lyer's line of fire, he would have sensed the danger and stopped short. Why was the Jedi out there to begin with?

Who dropped him in the wilderness for his rite of passage? Why did they put him in an environment they knew he was well adapted to? How is that a 'big bad challenge?' Why did it take him five hours to make a spear? I can make one in real life in less than five minutes. Why was he dying of hunger and thirst just a few hours into his rite of passage? Why didn't the ca'oya put up a fight when he tried to kill it by the river? Why do you have a fixation on lone ca'oya? Did you know they are pack hunters? Pack hunters rarely leave the pack and if your character managed to kill one, the others would probably hunt him down.

Given his personality, I don't see why you would want him in the faction. He's a loner. He doesn't trust anyone and he isn't trustworthy himself... so why would he join the Mandalorians? Why would they accept him? How did he get that way to begin with?

 

[Dimaggio]

His mother took him to the wilderness because some mandalorian was trying to kill her for credits. They is his father and his cousin. No they didn't look for him they thought if they looked for him they would die. It was a baby Ca'oya so it didn't know what to do. Because a bigger Ca'oya was coming for the baby Ca'oya. The mandalorian didn't know who his parents was. Because he didn't know to look for his parents because they would think he was going to kill them. A bigger badder Ca'oya was looking for some food to eat so he took the Ca'oya with him. Because he had to focus on his training and when he got accepted to be a mandalorian he could train the Ca'oya. The huts would buy a Jedi Lightsaber for the sith cause their always looking for another Lightsaber to use. His killing skills is shown.

It helps him to kill easier so he don't show emotion. The Jedi didn't show much force knowledge. He wasn't focused on bounty hunters in the wilderness. He's not strong with the force. He was on a mission to kill a mandalorian the mission went bad and the mandalorians was on to him so he ran away.

The mandalorian that trained him for years told him about the right of passage so when he was done training he wanted to go throught the right of passage. Only the one person that trained knew about him being good in that kind of environment and he didn't tell anyone that he is good in the wilderness. The knife he had was very dull. Because he when he does the right of passage you have to fast for one week before you can do the right of passage. The Ca'oya did fight back when it jumped on him he turned around just at the right time and the point of the spear was pointed up so when the Ca'oya jumped on him the spike went right in the Ca'oya's chest.

The fixation on the lone Ca'oya goes better with the story. This Ca'oya was a young so it didn't have a pack to be in so the Ca'oya didn't know what to do thats why it was alone. He is only trust worthy to the mandalorians Lyer knows the hutts and the sith are diseiving so he don't trust the sith the hutts. The reason they would accept him is because the mandalorians don't trust that many people. The way he got that way is his friends backstabbed him a lot.

 

[Ender]

That being said, Elliot wouldn't let such a man inside clan Marren.

 

[Galavant]

Has this guy been updated for the timeskip at all? A lot of Vencu's points still stand in my opinion, especially the bit about trustworthiness. Why is he even joining the Rebels? How did he come into contact with them? These things need to be addressed before he is accepted.