Lynn Vanick

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"Yahweh, dearest of all my friends, sometimes, in the dark of the night, I begin to doubt. Forgive me."

Name: Lynn Vanick
Faction: Bendu
Rank: Bendu Apprentice
Species: Human
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5'5
Weight: 136
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Light Blonde
Skin: White
Credits: None
Distinguishing Marks: Small scar across the bridge of his nose.
Dominate Hand: Right
Force Sensitive: Very

Strength: Lynn is somewhat weak due to his small frame.
Dexterity: Lynn is extraordinarily fast, and very wiry
Constitution: Lynn posses an average health.
Intelligence: Lynn is somewhat smart, but seen as a little bit stupid due to his poor decision making.
Wisdom: Lynn may not act it, but the young man has seen alot, as the saying goes, experiance leads to wisdom....
Charisma: Lynn is far too withdrawn to be charismatic.

Force Powers:
None known.

Skills:
What skill does your character posses?

Lightsaber Forms:
None known.

Strengths and Weaknesses:

Lynn's strength is that he is extrememly loyal, almost fanatical about protecting and following what few friends he makes. His weaknesses are that he tends to be withdrawn, and even somewhat snobbish. He also is an extremely poor decision maker.

Personality: Lynn is a shy, withdrawn individual, he seems very passive, and indeed takes everything in stride. He doesn't get angry, seeing this as the ultimate failure of his childhood.

"It came to me, in a vision almost, I realized that I had to stand up. I had to work for Yahweh, I had to show the poeple that there was more to this world then darkness...."

Lynn awoke and packed his pack full of food, he crawled out his window and went deep into the forest, into the bordering swamp.

Meditating as he had been taught as a child, Lynn shed all of his clothes but a simple ceremonial dress. Lynn spent sixty two hours in the swamp. Only stopping his meditation to sleep fitfully among the mud. On the third day, during lunch, Lynn carefully prepared a small picnic, laying out a cloth and setting out the bread and other consumables on it. Smiling he spoke.

"Sister, how are you."

There she was, sitting right across from him. She had a sad look about her face, but otherwise looked fine.

"I cannot stay long little brother, I wanted to tell you something, something important...."

Lynn raised his eyebrows.

"I am sad that you cannot see the wisdom of Yahweh, we live as user of the Force of Others, you know this, that is how you can see me. Our brother is lost to us, and now even our dearest father has deserted us, but YOU my brother, you know what you must do. I bless your decision."

Lynn sighed. She was gone. The vision had ended. He wasn't exactly sure how it had even started. However her words rang true. He knew what he had to do. He still did not know the reasons behind it, but it had to be done. The temple of Bendu was a large place, filled with very few people. Lynn stood on the ancient steps, wearing nothing but the lower part of the robe, the dress part. Lynn sat upon the bottom step looking up........


RP's :
Lynn Vanick's Training
In Service to Yahweh
 

Brandon Rhea

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Why is the profile quoted?
 

Dexington

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I assume to make the lettering stand out more.
 

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>.<

My bad. I was experimenting with colors before I posted it up. I use the qoutes to kinda tell how it looks during the preview. My mistake... (Im semi-color blind.)
 

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So its a girl? Boy? Girl boy? GOD DOESN'T LOVE ANIME.


Other than that, it's nice.
 

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LOL thanks.

And yes HE is a bit femminine.. part of the charector... most really shy, introvertive males I know actually are a bit femminine, I'm just using their quirks...
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(The Agriculturist @ Sep 3 2007, 08:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
GOD DOESN'T LOVE ANIME.[/b]

Yes he does!!!! And it's Manga anyway. It isn't animated. ^-^

But arguing aside, i like it very much. I like the quotes used to separate sections. I like the picture too.
 

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Thanks! I found the artist on Deviantart, truly amazing stuff, most of it is final fantasy, but it is all in that general style.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(OneoftheLost @ Sep 3 2007, 11:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
Thanks! I found the artist on Deviantart, truly amazing stuff, most of it is final fantasy, but it is all in that general style.[/b]

Everything i search for on Deviantart is good. I can find anything i want there. And yes, i agree with Nexus

Link?
 
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