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[Jax Vos]

So, I thought you guys wouldn't make your characters so powerful to do what I test you in the first time... I'm more referring to Qyv and you Thorn... More Qyv than Thorn. Regardless, Qyv, I was told that those memories consume you and you have a really hard time with it. If that was the case, then it should have been MUCH harder and the post should have been a WALL of text.

If not, then sorry for assuming.

I'm not being mean, it's just kind of boring. This is a class and you're here to learn. Let's not be cheap and make our characters amazing. MAKE SOME CONFLICT/DRAMA... or something.

I understand what you're saying. I don't like writing forever when it comes to a person's inner troubles. And he hasn't completely finished. He mostly did what came to his mind at the time. Qyv has manny more memories and visions and dreams to deal with. He just did what he knew he had to do. He has more and I'm hoping that will be resolved later on. I will later go into detail with his memories and the stuff that came to his mind later, just not yet.

 

[Master Maverick]

writing forever in one post is no different than having a 1-on-1 post with someone else for, say, a duel or training or whatever. That was the point of your test. It was supposed to be incredibly hard for you to do, but you only needed to do it in one post. You should have written just as much, or more than what Tyrus did in all of his posts. It's a class, you're supposed to learn. It's character development, that's the point of RPing. Inner turmoil is supposed to be far more wordy than anything you'll ever write, so you might want to get over that quick. That's what makes your character unique and that's the part everyone cares about. We don't care how you fight, how you learn, what you know or any of that. We want to know what happens in your character's mind. How and what he thinks.

At least, that's been in my experience.

 

[Jax Vos]

writing forever in one post is no different than having a 1-on-1 post with someone else for, say, a duel or training or whatever. That was the point of your test. It was supposed to be incredibly hard for you to do, but you only needed to do it in one post. You should have written just as much, or more than what Tyrus did in all of his posts. It's a class, you're supposed to learn. It's character development, that's the point of RPing. Inner turmoil is supposed to be far more wordy than anything you'll ever write, so you might want to get over that quick. That's what makes your character unique and that's the part everyone cares about. We don't care how you fight, how you learn, what you know or any of that. We want to know what happens in your character's mind. How and what he thinks.

At least, that's been in my experience.

The thing is that gets boring. Witch is why I think it would be easier to go over what happened later on in the thread.

 

[Master Maverick]

The thing is that gets boring. Witch is why I think it would be easier to go over what happened later on in the thread.

Interesting... thing is it's not and doesn't.

But whatever. We've moved on anyway...

 

[Prosaurus]

Yeah, I was going to post IC if you finished without me. I'll just do that.

 

[Master Maverick]

So, what's going on with this now? Is Ayva done after X'jan?

 

[Syn]

yes she is thank you for your service

 

[James]

I must tell you at the last second he was scorched lightly, but it was too close to tell so I just let him proceed.

Did you mix Tyrus and X'jan up slightly?

 

[Syn]

just saying those who said they were looking there is a small girl crying in the forest you should be able to hear it

 

[Thorn]

just saying those who said they were looking there is a small girl crying in the forest you should be able to hear it

Ahh so that's what that was about... k thanks for clarifying, Syn

 

[James]

(Are we all supposed to go to her/look for her, or...?)

 

[Syn]

Yes well you can go for her or ignore her altogether... Which is very unjedi like to abandon someone
but it is a test

 

[Master Maverick]

Did you mix Tyrus and X'jan up slightly?

Yeah, that last part I mixed you guys up. I'll fix it. Nice catch! There were too many of youuuuu :CCry2

haha

 

[Thorn]

Yeah, that last part I mixed you guys up. I'll fix it. Nice catch! There were too many of youuuuu :CCry2

haha

at least you didn't mess what Aer'kyl did, or I'd never let you forget it.

also, I am the first to go find out what's up :CHappy

cookies as a reward for me? :CSly

 

[Prosaurus]

Wait... The map is staring to confuse me... I got sent Southeast, but doesn't that lead me off a cliff? Also, if we were each sent in a different direction, should be all hear the girl?
I'll post when I know.

 

[Syn]

yes you could all hear the girl.

 

[Syn]

okay this is mainly to keep the thread moving. you guys should all go and investigate the area.

 

[Thorn]

Lol Xinn, I was trying to imply that I would follow as soon as someone other than Tyrus went, since Aer'kyl technically missed everything. That would mean I wouldn't have to post that I followed... oh well

 

[Jax Vos]

Ok but he seemed in a daze so I figured if Qyv called to him he'd respond.

 

[Thorn]

Ok but he seemed in a daze so I figured if Qyv called to him he'd respond.

it's cool, it doesn't matter. It would have been a natural reaction for someone to do in that situation.