More rain?

[Ru the Boatswain]

It rains too much on coruscant, the water is bad enough but what it brings with it. That, is just sickening. Abele was now statoned on the wet world of coruscant. Ever since shehad left the Republic transport three days earlier she hadn't slept well. The wather around the barracks was just...damp. There was always some new and 'interesting' mold in the food, or leak in the pitiful roofs. How is there a leak in the barracks? this place was in such ill repair she wondered what the point of a military on coruscant was. It isn't like anyone will ever attack the planet.

Abele pulled on her boots and slid her cloak on. She had leave to leave the base for three standard hours. not enough to have any fun but escape for just a bit was all she wanted. As she stepped outside her face brightened the miserable planet had given a gift. The rain had stopped! Oh glorious day the sun is peeking between the towers. She spreade her arms wide as she stepped outside and laughed. " Finally! a dry day on this planet. It looks so beautiful!"

[[[[I think/know I made some mistakes but I can't see them,]]]

 

[Ru the Boatswain]

OOC: thank you admin person and a bumpish if no one noticed it was here

 

[Ols]

Brendon walked out of his barracks and down the pathway to the exit. He felt so cramped in the base and was pleased of his breaks. He had not been on a mission in over a week, but his squad had been put through many hours of rigorous training simulations. He needed to unwind. The local cantina was not too bad, he thought, and he knew some of its regular patrons and his friends went their when they were off duty. As he left he saw a pretty young girl in the doorway. He recognised her because of the tattoos on her face, he had seen her in the base. He knew she was a private, but did not know her name, "Private," he called out, "where are you off to?"

((I will repost this in the Story section as they are outside the military base. Reply to that thread, not this one))

 

[Ru the Boatswain]

Abele looked over smiling expecting to see another private. She then noticed he was a Lieutenant, startled she snapped to attention and saluted.
"Sir! I was going on temporary leave out of the base,"she paused for a moment not knowing what to say next then remembered ,"Sir!"

 

[Ols]

((I said post in the main story forum...))