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It rains too much on coruscant, the water is bad enough but what it brings with it. That, is just sickening. Abele was now statoned on the wet world of coruscant. Ever since shehad left the Republic transport three days earlier she hadn't slept well. The wather around the barracks was just...damp. There was always some new and 'interesting' mold in the food, or leak in the pitiful roofs. How is there a leak in the barracks? this place was in such ill repair she wondered what the point of a military on coruscant was. It isn't like anyone will ever attack the planet.
Abele pulled on her boots and slid her cloak on. She had leave to leave the base for three standard hours. not enough to have any fun but escape for just a bit was all she wanted. As she stepped outside her face brightened the miserable planet had given a gift. The rain had stopped! Oh glorious day the sun is peeking between the towers. She spreade her arms wide as she stepped outside and laughed. " Finally! a dry day on this planet. It looks so beautiful!"
[[[[I think/know I made some mistakes but I can't see them,]]]
Abele pulled on her boots and slid her cloak on. She had leave to leave the base for three standard hours. not enough to have any fun but escape for just a bit was all she wanted. As she stepped outside her face brightened the miserable planet had given a gift. The rain had stopped! Oh glorious day the sun is peeking between the towers. She spreade her arms wide as she stepped outside and laughed. " Finally! a dry day on this planet. It looks so beautiful!"
[[[[I think/know I made some mistakes but I can't see them,]]]